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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#531

AWESOME

AMAZING

SUPERB

FAB

SPLENDID

MARVELLOUS

AWESTRUCK

LOVED IT

KRIYAANSH R WAY TO GOOD

N DEN ALL DAT REY DOING FOR KRIA N RIVAAN...Aweee

PRECAP-WELL FIGHT 😲 BUT PATCH UP TOO😊

N U'R RIGHT DEY HAV TO LEARN CERTAIN THINGS

UPDATE SOON 😉

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#532

Its just so amazing... :D

So beautiful and charming...

and so so so surreal!!

just loved the flow of the story...

its just so smooth...

It is written with so much elegance that it transmits you to just another dimension...

I just loved how you described the feeling being transpired b/w KR...

and then the morning conversation..

Just so homey...

waiting for next... :D

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#533

Sorry could not reply on a few of previous updates as I didn't get the time to read that !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
But here I am again with your lovely FF !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm happy that inspite of being angry with Kria Rey handled everything in a calm way and he gave a good chance to their relationship by bringing them with him to Mumbai !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
He strictly told Shivam to not interfere in his personal matter and never let Rivaan come to lime light as he is not used to it and Kria would not like it !!!!!!!!!!!!!
He made all possible efforts to make Rivaan happy and seeing Rivaan happy and comfortable she was happy as well !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rivaan is really overwhelmed to have dadda and Kria is happy and now even she has adjusted with the lifestyle which shows that she wanted that too !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Update soon dear !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#534

😊

tooo good and awsome..

loved their love bond,,

loved it..

thnks for the pm

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Soha

@-Soha-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#535

This chappy was awesome..

Too hot n romantic..

Haye KR kaa romance...LOVED IT!!

They were so cute making the breakfast together..

I m so sorry for commenting too late..

And yeah plz fight ziada mut karwana...

Thanks 4 d pm..

Soha!!

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#536

Fantastic part ...

Loved it ...

Kriyaansh scenes were great ..

Waiting for more ...

Continue soon ...

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#537

awesome parts.. read last 2 parts together.. sorry for bing late was out of town.. loved it.. rivaan-rey moments was blissful.. u showed rey's love for rivaan n kria beautifully.. hate that shivam hope he s not gonna create any prob for KR n rivaan... loved d way rivaan asked whether he ll b using rey's surname.. d play station at d back ward for rivaan was great... KR moments was sensuous n hot.. rey s taking rivaan for play store.. great.. loving this story a lot by each passing chaps.. waiting for next part...

Edited by vaishu88 - 12 years ago