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rubykriyansh

@rubykriyansh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

Awesome update .
Loved it.
All d best 4 ur exams.

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#322

amazing update

loved it

mind blowing...

aww loved it how rey and rivaan's bond is growing..

waiting for the next.

P.S just a request, if you could post a picture of rivaan coz everytime I read, I imagine a different child 😆

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DocSNair

@Mukthaa

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#323

Superb update...loved it to the core...
Rey-rivaan moments were so sweet...want to see their bond growing...
Neha is such a nice sister ...
U r such a talented writer...
Keep writing

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#324

Superb update. . .
Aww. .revaan and rey. . .both were so adoreble. . . .
Rey want kriya n his son = his family in mumbai. . .
Bt kriya. . .gosh. . . .wat wil be her ans? Egarly waiting 4 d nxt update. . .
God knws,wen ur exams wil end. .coz me toh super excitd 4 nxt update. . .
ALL THE BEST 4 UR EXAMS. . .
Cum soon. . . .
Waiting 4 d treat. . .

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shelly_Arsha

@shelly_Arsha

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#325

woww!!
awsome update!
i love rivaan and reys bond
rey wants another child 😉
well written! 👏
GOOD LUCK 4 UR EXAMS!!

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Crazy_Arshi

@Crazy_Arshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#326

Awsome update
all d best for ur exam

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917494

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#327

U r amazing!!!!

What a concept love it!!!

I wait for update like hell

I hv to wait for another 12 days...Huss!!

Anyways all the best for exams!!!!

I am sure ull top atleast in English

Eagerly waiting

Plz update soon

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Sonia

@princessSonia

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#328

Awesum 👏

Loved it... 👍🏼
D father - son scenes wer Amazing...😊

Do cont soon...
n thnks 4 d pm...

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#329

Omggg dear
its freaking awesomee part
loved it
loved the way you are taking it...and those flow of emotions...indeed beautiful

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#330

the chapter just mind blowing and loved it...
wow!!!!!!!!!! i like the surprise of kriya by bring rivaan to rey...
then the rey and kria conversation like it...
then spend the whole day and talk to take a decision for their further...
continue soon and pm me...