Taayam OS - Follow Your Heart

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Guys! I was watching the show when I decided that I wanted to write an OS about the current story in D3. I wanted to show the story between Taani and her brother Swayam, with my twist. I hope you enjoy it.

Tayam's house...
Taani was sitting in her room on Sunday morning thinking about what happened at college.
Taani Thinking - Did I do something wrong? Have I been rude lately?
Images of the comments the St.Louis students had posted flashed in her mind. Fresh tears began to form.
But what bothered her the most was that her Bhai yet hadn't come to see if she was okay.
???- Taani...may I come in?
T- Bhai?
R- No, it's me sweetheart.
T- Oh, you can come in.
Taani was disappointed that it wasn't her Bhai.
Rey sat down in front of Taani, he felt a pierce in his heart when he saw tears in her eyes. He cupped her face and wiped the tears away.
R- What's the matter sweetheart?
Taani couldn't believe her ears, didn't anyone understand her. She was slowly dying inside and no one seemed to give a damn!
T- Why have you come here Rey?
She looked away because she knew that she would burst into tears if she looked into Rey's eyes.
R- Taani, look at me. Please look at me, I want to know what's wrong.
T- Why should I look?
R- Taani just look at me god dammit.
He jerked her head towards him. New tears formed in Taani's eyes and she felt pain at her neck.
Rey stroked her cheeks with his thumb.
R- Taani, I can't see you like this. Please, you're hurting me...
Taani jumped up.
T- IM HURTING YOU? DOES EVERYONE ELSE HAVE THE RIGHT TO GET HURT, EXCEPT ME? LEAVE REY, I DON'T WANT TO TALK TO YOU RIGHT NOW, PLEASE LEAVE!
Rey put his head down and walked out.
In meantime Swayam had come home.
T- Bhai, where were you?
Sw- I had to go help Sharon, is everything okay? And why are you crying?
T- Thanks Bhai for finally noticing.
Sw- What do you mean?
T- Bhai, you knew something was wrong and that's why you sent Rey to find out the problem, right?
Swayam looked at the floor guiltily.
T- Bhai, I'm not stupid okay? I may be younger than you, but I understand everything. Why Bhai? Am I a stranger to you? We were so close, but what happened now?
Sw- Listen Taani... The Gang Sharon..
Taani held her hand up to stop her Bhai from talking
T- Bhai, You know what hurts the most? You understand Sharon more than me. I'm alone in this world, and I have to deal with it. I agree that I'm acting hyper but atleast show some respect to my GS post.
Swayam walked up and held her shoulders.
Sw- The gang didn't mean any harm, it happens Taani. It's no big deal.
Taani's mind went blank. Her Bhai still didn't understand.
Taani went into her room and packed her bags. Swayam ran into her room.
Taani walked to the door with her bags.
Sw- Taani, where are you going?
T- Somewhere I am respected and appreciated. I'm not a kid anymore, Bhai.
With that she left Swayam to understand how wrong he was.
Swayam walked to Taani's laptop and saw all of the rude comments. Swayam fell on his knees, he was lost. He had no idea what to do.


Disclaimer: I do not own any of these characters, events, or Dil Dosti Dance.
Edited by sdas1027 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow ... this was really good ... they really need to show some type of bond between TaaYam and I wish everyone sees the poll soon ... I loved it and pls continue it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice dear...

Taani really need her bhai ..

Loved taayam bond.

Con soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Taayam OS - Follow Your Heart Part 2

Taani was walking alone on the road and it was around midnight. Tears were slowly falling from her eyes.
T- Where will I go? I don't even know where I am.
She was lost, scared, and sad. Her heart was in pain.
T- Kyun Bhai? Why did it have to turn out like this.
Swayam...
Swayam was sitting in his room and was looking at a pic of him and Taani in the park. Taani was on his back and both had huge smiles on their faces. Swayam smiled remembering that day.
Flashback...
T- Bhai, I wanna eat ice cream.
Sw- Okay, let's go.
After they finished eating, they were walking home.
T- Bhai, do I talk a lot?
Sw- Nope, you talk more than a lot, he said in a teasing manner.
Taani got angry and turned away from him.
Sw- Are meri Behen, I was kidding. I love you just the way you are.
T- Dont ever say that I talk a lot because I will leave.
Swayam placed his hand over her mouth.
Sw- Dont ever say anything like that again, promise?
T- I promise to never leave you!
She smiled and jumped onto his back and enjoyed her Bhai carrying her home.
Flashback Ends...
Sw- Why did you leave Taani? Why? I'm not letting you go so easily.
He got into his car and drove off to find Taani.
Taani...
Taani was walking when she felt someone's hand on her arm. She turned around and saw that she was surrounded by some drunk guys.
T- Let go of me you jerk!
She tried to free her arm but the guy wouldn't let go. He pulled her closer.
Guy- Let's have some fun babe, c'mon! Just one kiss, you won't regret it.
He turned and laughed with his friends.
Taani was scared and had started crying.
T- Please let me go.
The drunk guys pulled her.
Sw- Let her go, NOW!
Taani and the boys turned to see a very angry Swayam.
The boys ran off and only Swayam And Taani were left looking at each other. Swayam went to hug Taani but Taani moved back.
T- Did you remember that you had a sister?
Swayam's eyes showed pain.
Sw- Don't say that Taani, you're my sister, and I care about you. I'm really sorry for hurting you.
He fell on his knees.
Sw- I feel lost with out you, please come back home.
Taani ran and gave her Bhai a hug.
T- Please don't say that Bhai. I'll come back home, I'm sorry I broke my promise.
Sw- It's not your fault, I should've cared about your feelings.
They went back home.
T- Bhai, have you had any dinner?
Swayam smiled and ran his hand through hair.
Taani laughed- Okay, sit down and I'll make you something.
Sw- Thanks
T- Bhai, no sorry and no thank you.
They both smiled, glad to have each other.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oww dis ws realy sweet..nic os ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sweet and cute update dear...
taayam soo cute.
i love them..
con soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh wow! First of all.. A big thankyou for pming me about this!! N this was really needed after what they are showing! They are simply screwing up all the relations!! But I'm soo happy that you wrote this! Its Amazing!! Swayam actually needs to know what is making Taani behave this way!! Otherwise nothings going to be sorted! Loved what you wrote!! <3<3 Do keep writing and do update ur FF soon.. and keep pming me!! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww its a lovely os finally Taayam are happy together again :-)

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