ArHi SS! Escape Velocity [Completed]

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shr1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Wow! Just caught up with last four updates. Still getting a grip on what actually is happening. I'm dumbfounded, with my eyes opened full round, blinking intermittently.

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soophie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#592

Read last 3updates now
Its really amazing how story is pacing with all drama suspense thriller fear n tiny bit romamce

Its great that u r updating it regularly n quickly yaar as it doent take mch time to recall previous updates bcoz of regularty...keep up the good work

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deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

everytime im reading one of the updates! im sitting on the edge of my chair and biting my nails! thats how immersed im into the story!

yea for me khushi hallucinations and its connection to the murder is some kind of psychic connection! like the killer's and khushi's mind are connected! maybe like twins! when one is hurt the other one usually feels the pain!

very interesting update! loved arnav's and khushi's conversation and how arnav promised he will do all his possible to keep khushi safe!

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kristin

@sweet_5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#594

Freaky for sure! Is the killer like her twin or something? Like some sort of intuition? I mean how do we know the killer is a guy?

When Khushi had the powder I thought these two were going to go undercover as husband or wife or something hahaha, that's me jumping the gun

Mmm Masala dosa my nana's favourite! He lived in Calcutta with my Nani for about five years so he grew fond of dosas! I've tried them once but they are so filling! I stuck to the South Indian version of chole bhatture! I'm a punjabi so maybe the the chole bhatture were calling my name! We have a South Indian restaurant where we live and I took my mother,nana and nani there to eat! My grandpa said it reminded him of Calcutta all over again! He was so happy!

Great update! I can't wait for more! Love the chapter title as well! :)

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arshi21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#595

I..I have no words.

This story is amazing..the way you write, its all SO vivid..

Its almost as if all of it is flashing in front of my eyes..

Brilliant work!

Kudos to you!

Can't wait to read more.

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abandoned

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Posted: 12 years ago

#596

My theory:

Its a multiple murderer case but all directed by Arnav (in a psychological state of course) The dream was of him and Khushi. I don't know I had to conclude that because you wouldn't notice a dimple so significantly at 20 feet or so. I assume that she had been forced to part with him after her recovery, something which shook him beyond words and to an extent she will never know. His protective instincts are therefore justified. Actually speaking, you can't talk sci fi when it comes to hallucinations because by definition it means visualizing something that isn't there. However, the visions may correspond to the bond of Arnav and Khushi because from what I deduce, she is the instigation to all the crimes. Something like the way a mother would know if her child is in danger, its there and its actually scientifically proven that two people can share bonds whose magnitude in strength goes to lengths. Time gap may be because of the genius he is. Look at him. His record in solving crimes is exceptional except for these string of cases. So I think he is bipolar, one part determined to challenge the other to death (Harry Potter much, though they were two people there). The anger and the rage but no sexual assault - so she left him at a time when he needed her (probably when he lost everything else) the most or he blames her for his loss of something but he still loves her enough to never cross limits and the body parts are probably, upon reconstruction, going to resemble her. Okay, I guess I covered most of it. That's the maximum my brain could work out after an exhausting day.

-Amal

PS. The hallucinations were triggered again three years ago because that must have been the very first time they met each other after the gap and the time when he decided what he was going to do. And the doctor was the same one who treated the both of them.

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Viji

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Posted: 12 years ago

#597

Another awesome one RB...
Such a gripping story..
Thanks for the pm

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Raila1014

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Posted: 12 years ago

#598

More red? U said to check your title and they all refer to the colour red - colour of the blood. So Kushi is related to the killer or had a blood transfusion with blood donated by him? Great chapter. I am glad he can see the value she can bring but still cares for her safety!

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#599

Wow brilliant and amazing updates, just read both chapters 8 and 9. Wow this story is probably the best intense thriller I have read, it's mind blowing. So Arnav had set khushi up to see her reaction after looking at the victims photo, as Arnav thought what she is writing in her books is not true. But I'm glad khushi shocked him with what she knows, loved the conversation between them at the cafe. So khushi has told him about her illness and she has asked to see the other victims photos, I hope she helps Arnav with solving the murders. But I'm glad you wrote the part where Arnav said to khushi she may be working with the killer, I had this feeling from the last few updates that she may be related to the killer. I don't know why but I'm thinking khushi could be the killer, because she is hallucinating and may not know what she is doing. Please update soon and thanks for the PM xx