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Posted: 12 years ago

#481

Apologies for being late..

= Ch 3 =
It was really a very gory crime scene and pathetic too. Sigh.

A lot of things and the police department depend on Arnav and his dedicated work.

Shukla seems to be a police officer following Arnav's footsteps.

The detailed description of the Prasad in the temple was good. Hell, it was tempting.

Payal must have woken up early to take Khushi to the Doctor. She is a caring and great friend.

Thanks for the PM. 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#482

Apologies for being late..

= Ch 4 =
There seems to be a presence of strong connection between the Doctor and Khushi.

But why a younger version of old Dr. Sharma handing a band-aid that had Goofy on it? Does that mean that they met before when she was much, much younger?

Khushi is very perceptive. She caught on the word "counsel".

Why is the Doctor lying?
Is it some ulterior motive?

Bharadwaj is a good man and a great friend of Arnav.

Thanks for the PM. 😊

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greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#483

Apologies for being late..

= Ch 5 =
The second meeting of Arnav and Khushi was nice.

The cheeky dialogues with a hint of sarcasm (especially the fake id-wala dialogue) were fabulous.

Just for a moment, I thought that Khushi was using her psychic powers while telling about the books in Arnav's nightstand.

The familiarity which Khushi felt after seeing the dimple on Arnav's right cheek, a few millimetres away.. makes me think that she might be really a psychic.

Thanks for the PM. 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#484

Apologies for being late..

= Ch 6 =
Ms. Rita is very helpful.

Shukla is a honest, hard-working and great investigation officer. He is quite intelligent too.. He called up Arnav for a better analysis of the case.
To cut a long story short, he is a very praise-worthy person.

Ms. Rita said that Selena had thought that a shadow always passed by her.
In Ch 3, Khushi too felt a shadow pass by her window. Does that mean that she is the next target?

Thanks for the PM.
😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#485

Apologies for being late..

= Ch 7 =
They say that, Two heads are better than one.. So obviously now that, Arnav and Khushi are working together, they would figure out and finally solve the case.

Were they marking the phone booths in the map with blue and green marker?

It is great that they could find out about the numbers.

I thought that Khushi screamed because may be she identified the the person in the photograph.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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= Ch 8 =
It was surprising to know that Arnav had planned it all along.

But how could Khushi be familiar with his dimple, if he was twenty feet away from her and she didn't look at him in particular in the book shop?

There is something about Khushi. She is really a psychic.
She is the epitome of enigma.

It is highly surprising to read that how she knows about all the intricate details of the murders.. I feel that nobody from the investigation team ever leaked to her any inside information.. It is all due to some of her unexplained psychic powers.

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aveeshakiran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#487

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! thrilling👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 12 years ago

#488

I am glad you are writing this genre RBI...it can't be easy to keep the pace and intrigue going without frustrating the readers and yet you are doing such a splendid job of it.