ArHi SS! Escape Velocity [Completed]

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sslmay11

@sslmay11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#441

Rb i feel like watching a thriller...scary yaar... that too i'm reading at midnight...too scary..whether Khushi saw the same girl in her hallucination...

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Why did Khushi scream? Did the picture of the victim disturb her? The story is getting so interesting one waits for the update impatiently.

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#443

So they have found some hope whichmight help them...

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#444

Thank you for the fast update! So Khushi and Arnav are a team now! Why did Khushi scream?

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#445

Brilliant and amazing updates, read both chapters 6 and 7. So the inspecter interviewed one of the girls that was murdered her best friend and she did provide some clue about the murderer, I'm loving the fact that Arnav and khushi are working together to solve the murder mysteries, they do make a brilliant team. So they have found a connection and similarity between each murder and khushi screamed after looking at the 6th victim, I wonder if khushi has seen the girl whilst she was hallucinating. Continue soon, this suspense thriller is getting more an more exciting by each update. Thanks for the PM xx

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CravingKhana

@CravingKhana

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#446

"I don't indulge in science of crime but only in psychology of it."

I would argue that both are parts of the same...psychology is but a science...

I do find it difficult to understand how easily Arnav shares details with a woman he hardly knows and one who sp in genre of same..

i'd think a detective would be more paranoid...

but as always your writing has that easy flow...that captures one into the story...

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#447

Hmmm this going to be an awesome roller coaster ride!! I am excited to see how you unfold this mystery!!

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underdsky

@underdsky

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#448

Finally got a breadth to comment!

Chapter 5: liked the easy atmosphere and conversation over dinner after the initial disturbing chapter.

Coming to current update, i am liking the pace of thriller is getting notched up slowly and effictively..one piece at a time

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mayabhi

@mayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#449

So Khushi sees the photo. Now will she reveal that she had hallucinated abt it to arnav?

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Dimz13

@Dimz13

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#450

Does Kushi recognize the victim from the picture as the one she sees in one of her trance like states...?

This skinning of the women reminds me of some crime show I have etched a very long time ago.love the suspense element in it...very edgy...and makes me want more.