#1| AsYa Fanfic: A Desire So Strange (Chapters 1-20) *Completed*

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Enchantress
Ahh.. It is quite a relief for me.. Because , some where I thought going by Asad's words zoya will try and go back without proving that she ain't wrong.. I so wanted zoya to fight for herself and she did.. She ain't going anywhere...

Tannu.. You better watch out zoe is gonna ruin you.. The Lady sherlock is back in action.

Oh!!! And jammy... what could I say to you.. just dreaming about zoe will not work.. and try and built some trust for her..The half you have for your tanu...

Dilshaad Mommma.. You are here.. Save your son from the billi please.. Your son is a sher , don't let that billi trap your sher. You have such beautiful sherani aka zoe for your son , right!!!

Amazing update!!!

Loved it.

Dee

Thanks Dee! Glad you enjoyed it. I felt like I was torturing you enough with the last few chapters so I decided to make it a but happy this time. 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b
Just stumbled on your ff! Enjoyed reading it so far.

Can I just say Asad is an ass! And his behaviour unforgivable! And I find his relationship with his "best friend" creepy. One of my oldest friends is a guy, our families have been friends for ages, I can talk to him about anything, I do hug him but we don't cuddle each other at every opportunity as Asad and Tanu seem to!

As usual Dilshaad is a wonderful mom!!

Creepy friendship won't last very long...hopefully. 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: zoas91
purr-fect ! Tan-Witch needs to buzz off...great update...all the raging annd ranting has proved useful :P :D poor asad how is is going to deal with this sherni now onnly her allah miya knows1 thanks for the pm! continue soon!!!

Yup, Tanu's been annoying me to my wits end so I thought I would take matters into my own hands. No problem and I will continue soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: Ta33iiE
WOOOP WOOOP
this was awesome :)

I'm glad you enjoyed it. 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: Jassieg
Superb..loved this chapter to the core. Loved how Ayaan made his bro understand...and also started calling zoya his bhabhi without zoya realizing it.

Another part where Dilshad confronted asad calling Zoya in his sleep.

I hope asad dreams that it was zoya who saves him not Tanveer.

I can't tolrerate Tanveer anymore..we have had enough of her drama in qubool hai...though at the same time..I appreciate her being there since unknowingly she made asad and zoya realize the love for each other..

Hope zoya finds all the clues against her and have ayaan be her support.

Also big thanks for using my comment in ur update..it really made me happy...luv u for that!

Wish u all the best for the next update..hope u update soon.

I really wanted to sneak "Bhabhi" in so instead of having Najma or anyone say it, I thought why don't I let our beloved Raabart have the honour.

As for Dilshad, I think I fell in love with her when I wrote this chapter.

I liked your comment and felt it had to be inserted into it. Thanks for contributing to the story!

Many thanks for the luck! ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: SanayakiBarun
awesome =)

Originally posted by: princess84
stupid moron..tanu better watch everyone is against you awww ur poor thing can't wait to see tanu's face when asad is against her continue soon

- Glad you liked it!

- I am getting seriously ticked off at Tanu nowadays so lets see what happens.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: irock321
OMG!!! You used our comments!!! Amazingly incorporated! Loved this update!!! Perfect chapter!!! Ayaan and Zoya bond is awesome! Thank goodness Dilshad is going to be their saviour! They need someone like that especially right now!

Originally posted by: Linsie
Very nice update... she is not leaving... and going to fight oh gosh!!!!!

update soon

- Yup! My AN says that I will be picking out my favourites. Thanks for contributing to the story!

I personally felt that Dilshad had to be the one to figure out Tanu's antics.

- Of course she isn't! I would be sitting in a corner crying if she left. Pretty much what I was doing when she was actually about to leave in the show.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: tvpremi
Hey! Superawesome update...Zoya is smart enough n is back to her lady bond ishtyle with ayaan it will be fun to read...plz plz continue soon...

I felt that she was becoming a bit OOC so Ayaan's entrance was actually a way to get her back on track. I will continue soon. Muah!😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: ABBY92
Loved how Zoya said she's not going anywhere and I really hope she finds something against Tanveer. LOL on Ayaan calling Zoya Bhabhi and she did not even realise it !!

Maybe she will. Maybe she won't. 😉😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
amazing update yaar

really loved reading it

finally Ayaan and Dilshad know that Asad loves Zoya

waiting for Zoya to get proofs against Tanu