#1| AsYa Fanfic: A Desire So Strange (Chapters 1-20) *Completed*

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

oooh loved that last line

hope after zoya proves herself right - she turns her nose up at this akdu khan and for him to apologise 😈

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Dee

@Enchantress

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Ahh.. It is quite a relief for me.. Because , some where I thought going by Asad's words zoya will try and go back without proving that she ain't wrong.. I so wanted zoya to fight for herself and she did.. She ain't going anywhere...

Tannu.. You better watch out zoe is gonna ruin you.. The Lady sherlock is back in action.

Oh!!! And jammy... what could I say to you.. just dreaming about zoe will not work.. and try and built some trust for her..The half you have for your tanu...

Dilshaad Mommma.. You are here.. Save your son from the billi please.. Your son is a sher , don't let that billi trap your sher. You have such beautiful sherani aka zoe for your son , right!!!

Amazing update!!!

Loved it.

Dee

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Just stumbled on your ff! Enjoyed reading it so far.

Can I just say Asad is an ass! And his behaviour unforgivable! And I find his relationship with his "best friend" creepy. One of my oldest friends is a guy, our families have been friends for ages, I can talk to him about anything, I do hug him but we don't cuddle each other at every opportunity as Asad and Tanu seem to!

As usual Dilshaad is a wonderful mom!!

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Nai

@zoas91

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

purr-fect ! Tan-Witch needs to buzz off...great update...all the raging annd ranting has proved useful :P :D poor asad how is is going to deal with this sherni now onnly her allah miya knows1 thanks for the pm! continue soon!!!

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

WOOOP WOOOP
this was awesome :)

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Jassieg

@Jassieg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Superb..loved this chapter to the core. Loved how Ayaan made his bro understand...and also started calling zoya his bhabhi without zoya realizing it.

Another part where Dilshad confronted asad calling Zoya in his sleep.

I hope asad dreams that it was zoya who saves him not Tanveer.

I can't tolrerate Tanveer anymore..we have had enough of her drama in qubool hai...though at the same time..I appreciate her being there since unknowingly she made asad and zoya realize the love for each other..

Hope zoya finds all the clues against her and have ayaan be her support.

Also big thanks for using my comment in ur update..it really made me happy...luv u for that!

Wish u all the best for the next update..hope u update soon.

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princess84

@princess84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

stupid moron..tanu better watch everyone is against you awww ur poor thing can't wait to see tanu's face when asad is against her continue soon

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Barayah

@irock321

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Posted: 12 years ago

#228

OMG!!! You used our comments!!! Amazingly incorporated! Loved this update!!! Perfect chapter!!! Ayaan and Zoya bond is awesome! Thank goodness Dilshad is going to be their saviour! They need someone like that especially right now!