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wowie...thanks so much Di, Didi, Sukhidi, Sahdana, Rutu...
A big hug to you all🤗
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Write-up's by members from Devi Sati aka Mouni's AT # 2 in the DKDM forum

Written by DeewaniRimi


Mohit: Oh no! something gets into my eyes.
Mouni:Let me see Dear.
Mohit:Noo.You have sharp nails I can't take risk. Kya pata scene s ke berukhi ka badla tum yehi
le lo.😲
Mouni:😡Let me see.
Mohit:no
😡
Mouni:thik hai 😈 I will ...
Mohit:😲(thinking pata nahi aise has rahi hai kya kar de?)
Okay you can see😒 but don't hurt me with your nails.
Mouni:😊aa nikal gaya..dekha ...
😲nikal gay na..tumhe kuch hua bhi nahi..
Mohit:thanks..😳 You are so sweet. I love you
😲(oh no yeh kya bol diya) I mean I apriciate you..I mean..(stammering)
Mouni:(thinking akheer dil ki baat juban par aa he gayi) Me too...
😲
Mohit:kya
😲
Mouni:Nothing
😳
From back ground a voice came CUUUT IT. fANTASTIC.

Written by divyadaya13


Mohit-Are are ye kya kar rahi ho Priye.
Mouni-Mere siva kisi aur ki taraf dekha, to ek ghoosa lagaongi, samjhe
Mohit-Tumhare siva mujhe aur koi dikhayi hi nahi deta, yaad hai tumhe woth 100th episode party wala pic. kaise main tuhme chu chup kar dekh raha hoon.

Written by DeewaniRimi


Mohit:(thinking She is so beautiful and the way she talks is more beautiful.Smile bhi kitni pyari hai)😃
Mouni:To reporter bla...and smiling and thinking(Mohit is reporter k samne aise kyun smile kar raha hai)😡
And whishpering in his ear:tum has kyun rahe ho😔
Mohit:😕Kyun kya hua??tum sad kyun ho gayi.
Mouni:almost sobing tum us reporter ko dekh rahe ho na. Suddenly she grins like 😈and think somthing☺️and
☺️.
Mohit:dekho main tumhe dekh k has raha tha reporter ko dekh k nahi.tum v na chhote chhote baat pe gussa ho jati ho.
Mouni:😳Sorry. is bar maaf kar do. actually mujhe achcha nai lagta tum kisi aur ko dekho..
😔
Mohit:aww..Okay promise kabhi nahi dekhunga.sirff tumhe he dekhunga. jaisa roz karta hoon😆
Mouni:I love ..😳..aa..thanks..
Mohit:its okay😆and me too...
😆
Mouni:😲what..

Mohit:Nothing😆(thinking I love you too dear)

Written by Yukthi.


While shooting -

Mohitwa - oh no! ye havaa ke vajah se mere aankh main kuch chala gaya hain...
Mouni - come here main dekhti hoon...[ chalo isi bahane mere paas to aayega ]
Mohitwa - nahin nahin kuch nahin hain...[ ab itni khoobsurat ladki mere paas aayaegi to main apne feelings ko kaise chupaaonga ]...
Mouni - tum mujhe dikha rahen hon ya nahin...🥺
Mohit [ looking at the hurt on mouni's face ] - achca teekh hain..par jaldi karna shot shuru ho jaayega...
Mouni [ beaming ] - it wont take long..i promise...[ she goes and starts wiping his eye ]
Mohitwa - [ stares at mouni wide eyed and wonders - how can she be soo pretty?? 😲 ]
Mouni - [ looking at mohit's hand on his heart ] 😕 😕 what happened to you...why are you putting your hand on your heart...are you fine?? 😲
Mohit - [ lost in his world 😆 ] no no...i'm fine..its just that whenever you come near me..my heart starts to beat frantically...just like its doing now...because I LOVE YOU..
Mouni -😲 😲 WHAT...what did u say??☺️
Mohitwa - [ out of his trance -oh no!! ye maine kya kar diya...😲 😲 ] Kuch nahin...i was talking to myself...😕
Mouni - acha dekho nikal gaya...youre fine now..
Mohitwa - thank you mouni...😳
Mouni - youre welcome [ aur tumhaare liye to kabhi bhi mere mohit 😳 ]

[ BackGround mein Nikhil Sinha - shot ready...Mohit Mouni jaldi aao...
mouni and mohit soon reach there... ]

Mouni
- vaisa mohit...me too...and more than you do...☺️
Mohitwa - kya?? 😕 😕
Mouni - Love you...☺️ 😉
Nikhil Sinha- and...ACTION!!

Written by foram.


nikhilji :cut!
perfect shot mohit and mouni 👏


mohit-mouni still looking at each other,lost in each other didnt realised that shot is over.

Mohit : mouni you look so beautiful.

mouni: mohit you too look so handsome that feel like to keep watching at you.

Mohit: kash ye pal yahin tham jaaye aur tumhe mujhse dur na jaana pade.

Mouni: me bhi tumse dur nai jaana chahti.

Mohit :you know what i love you.

Mouni: love you too mohit.

Mohit: sach me.
oh mouni m damn haapy.

Mouni: m happy too.
but why you took so much of time to confess your love.

Mohit : coz i was afraid that weather you will like or not and may break our friendship.but if you too loved me then why didnt you confessed first.

Mouni: i thought you just like me as a friend and i too didnt wanted to loose you so.

Mohit: oh mouni love you a lot.

Mouni: love you too mohit.

Mohit-Mouni lost in each others eyes, in each others world.
(this convo took place in their mind)

And a huge sound came from behind

Mohit-Mouni get ready for next shot and they came out of dream.
As soon as they realised what happened they just moved away from each other but mounis bracelet got hooked in mohit's wig..


Mohit : oh gpod what happened.

Mouni: my bracelet got hooked.

Mohit: oh remove it faster before any one sees us.

Mouni :ok wait m doing.

Mohit: hey take care of my snake.

Mouni :ok baba wait m removing.

Written by DeewaniRimi



SMILE PLEASE
Mohit and Mouni are in good mood as their todays performance went well. They give interview together and smile at each other.
Mouni:(whishpering to Mohit) Kya baat hai Janab aj bohot khush hai
😃
Mohit:😆
Mouni:😊
Mohit:🤣
Mouni:😒😲Tum aise kyun has rahe ho?
Mohit:(see her sad) aww dear main tum pe nahi has raha,remember the scene jahan tumhe aur mujhe dono ko 1 pair pe khada ho kar kuch mudra karni the...mujhe to laga main gir na jayun..aur tum mujh pe na has do..😒
Mouni:Main kabhi v aisa nahi karungi about to cry..
Mohit:I know dear.But woh situation ko socho. mere liye kafi tough tha tumse match karna,,because you are a great dancer.👍🏼
😊
Mouni:Thanks😳but you are also fabulous.You compliment me
😳very well😳.
Mohit:really
😊Thank God. Maine aj subah 2 tbsp dabur chawanprash liya hai is liye.
Mouni:😛hehehe..You are very sweet dear...I..lll..
😳☺️
Mohit:
☺️Me too and same hare☺️(love you princess)
From behind Mohit and Mouni you are requested to report to the dining area.😉May be they have party
😉


Edited by chand1234 - 12 years ago
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Once upon a time in Bagdad,Badshah Subur had a beautiful and gorgeous daughter named Jasmine(Mouni).She was not only beautiful but also very talented. She was a good dancer and singer and brilliant in her study too.She used to sing at her window during the afternoon time for a handsome but poor warrior named Aladin(Mohit).As he was son of a tailor the courtesans of Badshah used to taunted him.But he didn't paid any heed to them.He was reserved and only did his job as directed.


Oneday Princess Jasmine wanted to go for hunting.She went to her father and pleaded him to grant her wish.Badshah loved her daughter very much and didn't remain her any wish unfulfilled.So he gave his permition but he put a condition along with this.He told her daughter
Badshah:Beti hum aap ko razamandi denge par ek shart pe.
Jasmine:woh kya Abba huzur.
Badshah:Ap humari ek lauti aulad hai.aur apki ammi ke bad is duniya mein ap ke siva humara koi nahi hai.
Jasmine:😭
Badshah:Ap k anshu v hum se bardast nahi honge...😭Isiliye aap jayengi Shikar pe par humara ek varosemand jawaz apke sath apke hifazat ke khatir rahega.
Jasmine:toh Badshah ko apni shehzadi pe varosha nahi😭
Badshah:Nahi beti,Hum aap ke liye fikrmand hai.Waise bhi kuchdin pehle Armenia k woh zalim Jadugar ne apko utha le jane ki dhamki di hai.Hum aapko is umar mein khona nahi chahte .apne balid ki itni si baat nahi manengi aap.
Jasmine:Thik hai abba jaisa aap kahe.(thinks:aap ke bharose ka koi hoga aap ke umar ka.😈Unhe bewakuf bana k hum asani se Jangal mein apne dil se ghum payenge.

She was agreeing with her father's decision and got ready for the hunting.Soon Princess left the palace with her 2 friends and 10bodyguards whom were led by Badshah's trusted one warrior.They reached the jungle and the captain of the bodyguard chose a place for resting. They set their tents and when they went to ask Princess for rest they found that she was not with them.Everyone was shocked and the captain became angry on his fellow soldiers. One of them said:Par aladin woh Shehzadi saheba hai.Unho humse kahan woh yehi pass mein hai aur woh chali gayi.Aur ye hukm diya ki koi unka picha na kare.Hum kya karte.
Aladin:humlog Badshsh se kya kahange. unho ne hum pe Shehzadi ki zimmebari di thi.Ab hum unhe kya kahenge.
And he left the place to find her.

Mouni Roy as Sati in Devon Ke Dev. Mahadev

Here Jasmine was lost in the Jungle and couldnot find a wayout. She was very scared.Suddenly It started raining and she completely drenched out and slipped her step. When she opened her eyes she found herself in Aladin's Arm☺️.She fell into Aladin's Arm,this thought made her cheeks blushed😳and she couldn't able to see at Aladin's eyes.


But Aladin didn't give any reaction to Jasmine.Seeing this Jasmine remembered how she used to sing for him but he didn't react.She used to stare at him only for his one glance but he didn't did so.She used to make Shir Kurma but he refused to take this. She became very mad at him and told him:Gustak tumhari itni himmat.Ek mamuli sipahi hoke Shehzadi ko chhute ho.Hum aj hi Abba Huzur se kehke tumhara sar kalam karwa denge.😡.
But Aladin remained his same culm and cool expressions and told her:Apni gushtakhi ke liye Mafi chahta hoon Shehzadi. Maine Badshah ko zawan diya hai ki apki hifazat har halat mein karunga. Isiliye main apko dhunta hua apke piche chala aya aur ye jungle bohot khatarnak hai.Mujhe apki fikr thi.Aur ap girnewali thi to maine apko pakad liya.
Jasmine:tumhe kaise pata main jungle main is taraf ayungi?
Aladin: Mujhe pata hai.
Jasmine:😊Kaise?
Aladin:Main apka hifazatgar hoon.Apka dyan rakhna mera farz hai.Waise v bohot der ho chuki hai ab humein jana hoga.
And he walked away but when he turned back he noticed that Jasmine was fainted and about to fall.He came to her quickly and picked her up in his arm and took her to a stream and sprinkled water on her face. And he was very shocked and mumuring something though that was heard clearly.
Aladin:Ay Khuda ye kya hua.Jasmine ankhein kholo.Ay Khuda...Main tumse bohot Mohabbtat karta hoon. Tumhe kuch hua to main apne apko maaf nahi kar payunga.Mujhe tumhare ganein bohot acche lagte the,Main chhup chhup ke roz tumhe dekhta tha Jasmine.Mujhe tumhari Sheer Khurma aur uske sath tumhari bani huyi Tasveer aur shayari bohot pasand hai.Tum roz mere liy e woh sab banati thi aur...
Jasmine opened her eyes and asked:Aur😈
Aladin:😲Tum ..matlab ap..
Jasmine:😛Main behosh huye nahi thi sirf chakkar aa rahe the...😕Par tum to meri banayi sheer khurma nahi khate the?
Aladin:tum use wapas v nahi lejati thi na.Use mere darwaze pe chhod jati thi.Tumhare jane ke bad main aake woh uthata tha ...😳Tum khana bohot achcha banati ho.Tumhari tasveer aur shayari v bohot pyari hai...tumhari har cheese mujhe pyari hai...main tumhe bohot pyar karta hoon..☺️..and😲
Jasmine:(Hugged her tightly) Kabse yehi sunna chahti thi and kissed his cheeks☺️ (and about to cry) Pehele kyun nahi bataya?
Aladin:Darta tha...Kahin tumhe na kho doon.Kahin Badshah naraz hoke ...Ammi-Abbu ko bachpan me hi kho chuka hoon ...kamse kam tumhe...roz dekh to pata..
Jasmine:Ab to humein roz dakhenge huzur...
Aladin:Kaise😕
Jasmine:kya aap apni biwi ko chhod kisi aur ko dekhenge...
Aladin:par..
Jasmine:fikr mat karo sab thik ho jayega..
They got up and returned to the tent.Suddenly somthing strange happened.A dark cloud with furious storm about to swallowed them.Their companions and bodyguards were so scared that they fled from there.



Aladin sheilded Jasmine from this cloudy storm and looked at it furiously.Suddenly a person emerged from it.He was none other than the evil magaician from Armania who wanted to abduct and marry Jasmine.He came towards them and did Taslim to Jasmin and Told:Aye Shehzadi main hoon sabse tagadwar.Mujhse karo tum Shadi.Jahan bhar ki jo v cheez tum chaho rakh dunga lake tumhari kadmpn pe sari.
Jadmine:Mujhe tumhara sar chahiye.😡
Jadugar:Duniya aisa koi nahi jo mujhe mar paye.Khuda v nahi
Aladin:😡Khuda pe jinka varosa ho,neki pe jinka rah ho woh kabhi darte nahi. And he attacked the magician.They fought so vigorously and finally aladin passed through his knife to his heart and he died.
Jasmine ran towards him and hugged him and asked him:tum thik ho?
Aladin:Ha..humain ab chalna hoga..jake Badshah se baat karna..
Suddenly a voice came behind from them:humain v aap sab se baat karni hai.
They both turned back and shocked😲
Badshah:Humne tumhe apni beti ki zimmedari di thi aladin.Aur tumne..
Aladin:Jahapana meri baat..
Jasmine:Abbu ..
Badshah:Badtamizon tum logon ko koi adap nahi ek Badshah se kaise mukhatib hote hai.To mere bad tum log is riyasat ko kaise samvalo ge?😡
Aladin and Jasmine😕
Badshah:😊Humain sab kuch Jasmine ki saheli se roz pata chalta tha.😃Aur Aladin humain pasand tha isiliye use humne apke sath veja tha aur ap dono ek dusre ko chahte the ya nahi ye humain janna tha.Woh v humain pata chal gaya.Hum aaplogon ke piche chupke se aye the.
As soon they returned to the Palace Badshah announced Jasmine's marriage with Aladin.And after their marriage Badshsah handed over his kingdom to Aladin and Jasmine.


And Aladin and Jasmine,They lived happily everafter and forever.☺️
Edited by chand1234 - 12 years ago
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Written by divyadaya13


Interview lene waali ne Mohit Mouni ke dance ki bahut tareef ki,kaha "app dono ne kitna accha dance kiya, kya lajawab dance tha. Mouni to ek acchi dances hai, par Mohit tum bhi kum nahi ho.
Mohit-smiling (but thinking to himself) Are ise kya pata meri kya haalat hui hai, dance ke baarein main sochkar raat bhar soya nahi hoon main, ek to mouni ko yaad karke mujhe neend nahi aati, aur upar se director aise dance karwata hai mujhse. But he says something else to the lady. "Oh its Ok hum dono ne bahut practice ki thi na, aur Mouni ne (Mouni ka naam lete hi Mohit ka dil jor jor se dhadka) meri bahut madad ki, woh meri bahut acchi friend hui hai (thinking-kya yaar inke samne mujhe frined bolna pad raha hai, kya karoon yaar)
Mouni- Humne bahut practice ki thi, isliye ye dance sambhav hua. meri bhasaha bhi badal gai hai DKDM main kaam karke, aur Mohit bahut mehnati hai (mouni thinking-kya yaar ye mujhe friend friend bol raha hai, aur jab hum dance kar rahe the iski aankhon main mujhe kuch aur hi dikhayi diya, ye itna shy kyun hai, lagta hia mujhe hi kuch karna padega.
Interviewer- Aap dono ko future episodes ke liye best of luck, keep it up guys you are very good actors.
Mohit - 😊
Mouni- Hanste hue sochti hai, ye itna has kyun raha hai aaj
Mohit _thinking and smiling (mujhe mouni ke saath dance karne main aaj bahut accha laga, thoda confidence bhi aa gaya hai ,mujhe uski aankhon main mere liye kuch to dikhayi diya hai, aaj sochta hoon use propose kar doon.)
Mouni- is also 😊 and thinking, aaj isne mujse kuch nahi kaha to main hi keh deti hoon.
utne main director ki aawaaz piche se aayi " Mohit Mouni be ready for the next shot"

Written by pkyekrox


Rishina noticed from far away some one is continously looking at Mouni-
Rishina thinking- Kaun hain wahan jo meri pyaari Mouni ko Ghoor raha hai., par itna andhera hai, samajh main nahi aa raha kaun hai woh, par usne white shirt pehni hui hai aur tall and rugged bhi lagta hai, baad main wahan chupke se jakar dekhthi hoon kaun hai woh.
Mouni thinking- Are Mohit wahan kone pe khade hokar humein kyun dekh raha hai, par pata nahi mujhe aise kyun lag raha hai woh mujhse kuch kehna chahta hai. par use dekhkar mera dil itna jor jor se kyun dhadak raha hai, kya yahi pyar hai, shayad yahi pyaar hai.

Written by -Gauri-

Mohit Raina and Mouni Roy

Break chal raha hain:
Mouni: Mohit, I am feeling uncomfortable. All this jewellery and heavy lehenga...upar se there is only a fan on the set...
Mohit:(happily) Lets go out then Mouni!! You will feel btr.
(Both r in that garden wala set)
Mouni: Thanks Mohit, I don't what I would've done without you!!
Mohit: Mujhe thanks kehne kii koi zarurat nahi hain Mouni, I did all this for u.
Mouni hugs him tightly and both are thinking that they love each other so much!!
(Both look at each other and then Mohit realises that he is day dreaming, they both are still inside the palace!!)
Mouni(looks at Mohit and says.): Mohit, I am feeling uncomfortable..!!!😉
Edited by chand1234 - 12 years ago
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Awesome job Ria...👏Love you🤗
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nice thread thanks for the pm
loved the os
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Wil update dis with recent pic convos.
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SHIV AND SATI AN ETERNAL AND DIVINE COUPLE

A new day dawned upon Mount Kailash.Sati and Mahadev were enjoying their marital bliss. Mahadev in particular enjoyed being pampered and spoilt silly by his wife. Who also took it upon herself to sometimes argue with her husband. Mahadev always looked forward to the silly spats he had with his wife as he loved making it up to her. And Sati also wanted love and affection from her husband. This morning however Sati was missing Mahadev as he had left her very early in the morning to mediate and Sati wanted to spend this stolen moments with him as they rarely got a chance to be alone these days as Mahadev either had to go to the gyan saba or he had to be with the Tridev as Indra always managed to get into trouble as he was begininig to be a cause for concern for them.
Sati realised that she had not done her morning pooja today and rushed to get flowers. But what am I rushing for she kept thinking even if I am late today Mahadev is not going to mind. She roamed all around Kailash and found a few flowers but the ones she liked were in the one place where no one was to go when Mahadev was mediating but Sati had no option as the flowers she was after were blooming all around Mahadev. She collected a few flowers from the garden around Mansoravar and made her way back.
Mahadev knew what she was upto and had already made a few flowers fall on the ground as he knew that his wife would stop at nothing to disturb him. Sati arrived just in time and Mahadev changed his expressions at once. She collected the fallen flowers from the ground and then spotted one big rose lying overhead. She walked past Mahadev once twice thrice and a fourth time. And each time she made sure her payals made the loudest possible sound.
But this as she reached out to the rose the rose loosened itself and fell on her lap. Sati knew instantly that this was Mahadev's doing
Mahadev she called out
There was no answer
I know you did this. She sulked but she had a plan to make him come out of mediating. She purposely dropped a few of them on his foot touched his thigh for balance and bent down to pick them up. Her hand slid down his foot and Mahadev had to control himself as best as he could.
She looked up at him his eyes were still closed normally even the slightest touch from her woke him up. She came up with another plan.
She bent forward across his body to pick up the few remaining flowers around him. He opened his eyes at that moment
Sati what are you doing
Nothing Shiv I was collecting my flowers. They shared an eyelock and she smiled back at him.
How am I supposed to in control of myself when you are hell bent on distracting me. Sati continued the roses have fallen to my side and you could have come around me to collect them
I didn't want to Shiv
Why
You know the answer to that. And we have not spent anytime together this morning and in a little while you will go to the gyan saba alone
Sati I am always with you . I never leave you alone at all. Now will you please get up
Why are you feeling uncomfortable. Sati was now cosy in his arms. Somehow she had manged to sit on his lap with her arms around his shoulders
Sati this is not the time or the place to be romantic. Nandi and the ganprets will be arriving soon.
So
So what will they think
I am with my husband Shiv. And right now you are Shiv and not Mahadev. Why don't we go somewhere for a little while.
I can't go like that Sati. What about the Tridev. and my devotees
The tridev can look after themselves for a little while as for your devotees . I am your biggest Devotee
Sati Mahadev tried his best to convince her but she was adamant and as usual Sati got her way and only left when she when wanted to after a long time .
Just then Nandi and the ganprets arrived and Sati quickly got up and rushed to do her pooja to the shivling. She prayed and said everything that had to be said.
Mahadev answered back we will leave after my gyan sabha.
Nandi
Yes Prabhu
Mata and I will be leaving for a few days together after I come back but in my absence make sure that Mata is not disturbed by anyone especially by Indra. He is due to drop in Kailash anytime.
Prabhu don't worry Indra dev will not see Mata today
Mahadev disappeared to take the gyan saba where Rishi Markande Rishi Dadichi Rishi KAshyap and the other sapt rishis were waiting for him.
True to Mahadev's word Indra appeared and demaned an audience with Mahadev
Prabhu is not here Indra Dev
Where has he gone Nandi
I can't tell you that
Why not
I have my orders
Then I want to see Mata Sati
I can't allow that either
What
Prabhu has asked me not to let you see Mata. And I listen only to my Prabhu and Mata
Nandi do you know who you are talking to
Yes Indra and now please leave Kailash at once
Just then Mahalakshmi appeared and enquired about Sati
Mata Mata Sati is inside . I'll take you to here
No need Nandi. I see you are busy here. I will go and see her myself
Nandi let Mahalaskhmi in followed by Mahavishnu
The both of them wanted to see Mahadev and Sati before they left Kailash for a little while. But Indra would not leave Kailash without seeing Sati. And there was no way Nandi could allow that. Knowing that Nandi was helpless Mahavishnu came to help him
Indra it is best if you leave right now
Prabhu why can't I see Mata Sati. I need to speak to her
Indra If Mahadev doesn't want you anywhere near her. You should do what he wants
Mahadev Mahadev everyone seems to be doing what Mahadev wants all the time. No one is concerened about my feelings
Indra you are crossing your limits
Prabhu just because you are the Tridev doesn't mean you control me
Mahadev looks turned angry. He has seen and heard enough. He got up and disappeared and reappeared in Kailash within minutes
Indra Mahadev spoke from behind him
Prabhu Indra shivered the minute he saw him
Leave Kailash now right this minute
But Prabhu I need to see Sati
Sati
I mean Mata Sati
Sati will not see you and what is so important that you can't speak to me about
Nothing Prabhu. I just came to see if she was fine
That is none of your concern.
Nandi if Indra doesn't leave now throw him out
Mahadev
Mahadev turned around and saw Narayan
Narayan
Mahadev why is Indra always after Sati
Naryayan you know the answer and yet you are asking me
Naryayan Sati and I are leaving Kailash for a few days and only Nandi is going to be here and I need to teach Sati the things that I know so that she is able to protect herself when I am not here with on the rare occasion.
I understand Mahadev said Narayan and left
Nandi knew what to do. He walked back to where Indra was waiting that was the meeting place for all visitors to Kailash and said that Mata was busy and so would be unable to see him.
Indra was not pleased to hear that.
What do you mean busy
Busy means busy Devraj. Mata is cooking lunch for my Prabhu and Prabhu has told me that Mata sees no one
I am not no no one and do you know what it means by not listening to your devraj
My devraj. U are mistaken I only listen to my Prabhu and Mata and they don't give orders like you they only request me and I do what they what because I love them.
A few meters away Maharishi Dadichi was also arriving in Mount Kailash he had been wanting to see his Mahadev and Sati for sometime now and finally the time had come. He turned up just as Indra was intent on contuining the argument. Seeing him bought the widest of smile to Nandi's face.
Maharishi Dadichi welcome to Kailash
Nandi how are you and Prabhu and Sati
Everyone is fine Maharishi
Maharishi Prabhu is out of Kailash seeing a devotee of his and will be back soon. But Mata will be very pleased to see you. Would u like to see her
Nandi what kind of question is that. I would love to see her.
Please follow me.
Indra as usual was in no mood to leave and sensing this opportunity tried to follow them. But Nandi realisng what he was up to stopped her.
I don't recall inviting you at all. Please leave Kailash at once
Ganprets escort Devraj Indra out of Kailash the gan prets did exactly did.
Mata someone is here to see you
Who Nandi Sati was putting the finishing touches to her cooking
Mata Nandi called out again
Nandi who is it . Sati finally walked out and she was happy to see Rishi Dadichi
Rishi dadichi what a pleasant surprise and welcome to Kailash
Sati I hope you and Mahadev don't mind me coming her without any prior notice
What are you saying rishi Dadichi you are welcome here anytime. But this time you seem to have delayed coming here. I was expecting you a long time ago
I was busy with my teaching and my gurukul and pupils
Ah so you forgot about me then
No Sati I haven't
Thank you
Rishi Dadichi was taken aback by that
Thank me for what
For everything that you did for me helped me achive in this life
Sati whatever you have u got on your own
No it was u who stood behind me and helped me see things
U put things into perspective for me helped me to reunite with Mahadev
Sati I only guided in certain things
U got Mahadev because you never gave up on him
No it was u who showed me the right path. If it were not for u I would not have seen Mahadev at all for the first time. U gav eme the bhel patra and asked me to concentrate on it and call him with love. I did and Mahadev appearead all because of you. I can't thank you enough for bringing him into my life forever
Sati are you trying to make me cry.
Mahadev arrived back at that moment.
Prabhu Rishi dadichi sensed his arrival and fell at his lord's feet at once.
Mahadev blessed him and said
It is a pleasure seeing you at last
Mahadev
Yes Sati
Please join us for lunch
Ofcourse
Rishi Dadichi u are spending a few days with us at Kailash
Sati u haven't asked Mahadev yet
Sati is right Dadichi I would love it if you spent a couple of days with us
Nandi please make sure Rishi Dadichi is comfortable
Of course Prabhu
Nandi took Rishi Dadichi to one of the mediating caves in Kailash for him to clean up for lunch
Mediating caves Mahadev where is it. This is the first time I am hearing of it. Where is it
Sati Kailash is huge and there are some parts that you have not gone to. Now don't look at me like that. I used to go to one of the caves .That was long before you came into my life. Now I can't bear to be apart from you at all.
Good because now I don't want to be apart from you at all.
A few minutes later Rishi Dadichi along with Nandi joined Mahadev and Sati for lunch
After lunch Mahadev wanted to mediate and so left them. Rishi Dadichi also did the same thing in another part of Kailash. But Sati wanted to talk to Mahadev and so joined him
Mahadev are you upset that I invited Dadichi to stay with us in Kailash without consulting you first
No Sati why would you think like that
It was because you were very silent during lunch
Sati I am not angry I understand that you want to thank him for everything he has done for us
Mahadev I can't thank him enough for bringing you into my life
Yes and I can't forget how you called me for the first time
U arrived in a puff of smoke and just stood there looking at me
Looking at you. I was staring at my love after a long time being apart from her
U knew from the beginning who I was
Of course Sati
Then why didn't you tell me
I wanted Rishi dadichi to guide you and listen to your heart. But what did you think of me. You never told me
Well I I Sati could not go on. How was she supposed to say what she really felt the first time
Sati I am waiting
Mahadev Shiv I can't
Yes you can
If you insist I thought you were the most beautiful and most handsome man I've ever laid my eyes on
U didn't think of me as god
No not at first u were just Shiv to me my shiv
Shiv Mahadev was happy to hear that
Rishi Dadichi spent a month with Mahadev and Sati. He looked forward to the gyan sabha that Mahadev always had in the evenings. He learnt a lot of things from Mahadev and Sati always looked to it as well. But this time she had the company of Dadichi as well. Who also taught Sati some more mantras after taking permission from Mahadev. Mahadev appointed him her tutor. And said that after he would continue lessons for Sati only after Dadichi started.
Dadichi was surprised by that wish
Mahadev you are the greatest guru anyone could have. So why me
Dadichi you are not only Sati's guru you love her like a father and want to protect her at the same time as she has not yet become Adhishakti yet
But Mahadev what can I teach that you don't know
Dadichi Sati has been wanting me to teach her mantras for a long time I've been putting it off for a long time as I wanted you to start the lessons. Rishi Dadichi was surprised to hear these words from Mahadev as he knew that Mahadev was the one and only guru anyone would want to have. There was nothing in the world that Mahadev did not know and yet Mahadev himself trusted no one else except him. He kneeled down to touch the lord's feet.
Kalyan ho Mahadev blessed him. And the next minute the lessons began
Sati sat down in front of Rishi Dadichi. Please close your eyes Sati and concentrated on your being
Sati did as she was told. She was seeing going back in time . She opened her eyes sadness engulfing them
What is wrong Sati what did you see
Sati was scared
Sati please answer me
Rishi Dadichi I saw Mahadev and me. We were happy toghether and so in love. Until someone came in between and separated us
What or who did you see
I saw my father and Brahma dev. He wanted a boon from Brahman dev. My father wanted Adhishakti to be reborn as his daughter
And what happened
Brahma Dev agreed. But how could he. How could he do such a thing
Sati sometimes gods have to agree to what a devotee wants. What happened
Brahman dev went to Mahadev and asked him to separate adhishakti from himself. Mahadev died that day the minute he let go of his life. He waited all these years for me to come back to him. How can fate be so cruel on god himself
Sati Sati open your eyes. She was crying uncontrably. Mahadev came to her In a flash
Sati open your eyes and look at me. We are together now
How can my father be so cruel to you
Sati Mahadev pleaded with her to open her eyes and when she finally saw Mahadev she hugged him tighly regardless of the fact that Rishi Dadichi was standing in front of them
Mahadev I am sorry for what happened.
Dadichi it is not your fault. Sati needed to know this. She had to let go of the pain that was inside her all these years. She has to come to terms that what happened was not anyone fault. It was destiny and destiny cannot be changed not even by me.
Do you want me to continue Mahadev
Yes of course.
But first my wife needs to be in control of herself.
Sati what will Dadichi think
He will think that your wife loves you very much and she does not want history repeating itself again
Sati nothing will happen to you or Mahadev again. Both of you have fought toghether so much to be with each other again and do you think that this time I will let anything happen to my guru or you. I love the tow of you very much and if need be I will fight for you as well.
Rishi Dadichi thank you for saying that but really your wife and your gurukul needs you more than us.
Mahadev I put you first inspite of everything that is in my life. Without you or your guidance my life means nothing to me.
Mahadev was taken aback hearing these words coming from Rishi Dadichi. Rishi Dadichi has become has greatest devotee ever and Mahadev wanted to grant him a wish.
Dadichi ask me anything you want and I will grant it to you
What can I ask that I don't already have my lord. Knowing you and loving you is my greatest reward and I don't want or need anything all I ask is that you place your hand on my head and grant me your blessings.
Sati was almost close to tears. This was the first time that a devotee of Mahadev wanted nothing just his blessings.
Dadichi please ask a wish
No Mahadev he refused to obey the lord and seeked his permission to leave
Sati didn't know what to say this was the first time that a devotee wanted nothing in return except the love of the lord
Mahadev why did Dadichi want nothing
Sati that is dadici for you. And why are you asking me this you know him as well as I do
Yes I do but sometimes he is as complex as you are
What Sati what are you saying
Mahadev sometimes even you keep quiet and refuse to tell me anything. I think Dadichi knows what going to happen between us and yet he is silent
OK what is going to happen
I don't know that is what I wanted to know before I saw the past
I'll tell you we are going to be together for our lifetime and this time I am not letting go off you for anyone
Really and why is that
Let's just say that I have got used to seeing the most radiant face each morning and that hair of yours drives me crazy especially when it is wet and you insist on wacking it on my face when I am trying to mediate
Wacking I simply shake it in the air to dry out my hair
Must you do it sititng next to me when you know that I don't like being disturbed at all
Then you should say something to me or shout at me
I can't do that because then you will get annoyed at me and refuse to speak to me or look at me. And I would like to add that you look absolutely beautiful when you get angry
You mean to say that you fight with me on purpose
Of course because the making up afterwards Is what I look forward to the most. And don't say that you don't like it either
Mahadev Sati blushed. I like it a lot. Infact I love it when you chase me all around Kailash and think of things to make me smile again. And when I refuse you shower me with attention
Is that it. I do a lot more than that
I know and I am not going to say anything more she kissed him and ran away.
Mahadev welcomed the kiss as it was unexpected and decided to follow his wife
Sati Sati he called out
Yes I am in here. She was in their martial side of Kailash and since it was near evening it was time for her bath at mansoravar
Sati she had not come out so Mahadev went in and the sight he walked into stopped him midway
Sati had a quick bath and was changing her clothes
Mahadev quickly stepped in without a noise and handed Sati new dry ones. But he decided to help her dress
Mahadev Mahadev what are you doing. You are not supposed to be here
Why not you are my wife
Mahadev
What you can't see me like this.
Sati there is nothing about you that I don't know. I like everthing about you
Mahadev was not willing to go anywhere and Sati knew it was useless this time
Fine stay if you wish she put on her saree with great difficulty as Mahadev insisited on running his hands all over her body.
She had a tough time controlling herself
Next came the jewellery. Mahadev didn't like anything she wore. He found faults in all of them. Finally he produced one that he liked and Sati loved it once she saw it
You could have given this to be before
And miss doing everything that I wanted to
He was referring to their romantic moments that took place just an hour ago. Sati's lips were still deep red and the reason why she was not stepping out of their room. She wanted to compose herself otherwise everyone including Nandi would know what had happened between them
Sati aren't you going out now
Not yet I am not ready
You look beautiful now come on I am sure Nandi would want to speak to his Mata now
Mahadev
Sati no one will say anything.
Mahadev and Sati came out of their room togetherand true to Mahadev's words no one asked them anything. Sati was greatful for that as she had no answer and it was a private matter between the two of them. Mahadev had wanted it to be memorable as he knew that what Sati had seen this morning would be troubling her and he could not bear to see her in pain. He wanted to remove the pain forever and he had succedded this evening. Suddenly he felt her arms around him. She was hugging him from behind
Thank you
For what
For this evening for making me completely yours and making me forget
Sati I thought you were mine all along
This evening cemented our releationship forever Mahadev and now we belong together forever now my love where do you want to go
I don't know anywhere where we won't be disturbed and where you can teach me some mantras
Teach you will you see me as your guru only
I will try to
Close your eyes and hold on to me Mahadev took Sati in his arms and took her to a place where she had never been or ever thought of going they were high up above the ground in the sky and when Mahadev put her down Sati got the firght of her life. She took one step and when she couldn't feel the ground beneath her foot she caught Mahadev again
Shiv where are we she was hanging on to her for dear life
We are up in the sky my love
Sky with the clouds around us. She closed her eyes and got back on to Mahadev arms again or rather he lifted her
Sati you don't need to be afraid you will not fall I am with you. Now get down and walk with me
Walk me No Shiv she was not willing to let go off him either
Sati I promise nothing will happen he put her down and got hold of her waist and guided her along after a few mins she realsided that with her Shiv with her she had no reason to be so afraid.
Sati said Mahadev sitting on a cloud he helped her up. Remember the dance we did at your father's place I want ot dance again so will you dance with me
Ofcourse but where will we dance
Here among the clouds
What here Shiv I am scared of moving
Sati like I said nothing will happen and I will not leave your side
Promise me that
I do and Shiv lifted Sati down and thye began to dance. The music was all arranged by Mahadev himself and soon both of began to dance high above the earth. The gods all wondered who was making such a noise and when they looked up they could see Mahadev and Sati in a trance not willing to come out of it and it was a rare occasion for them to be a witness to this.
Sati Shiv this is wonderful you danced like you have never danced before
You brought this out in me Sati I have waited an eternity to do this. I danced loke this with you before I let go off you and now this is a dance of us being together again and a dance of happiness that only you have brought out in me
I will never let go off you Mahadev and we will be together forever
And dance like this for years to come
I am a part of you Mahadev
Sati you live deep in my heart
And you in mine and saying this the dance continued for a long time and time stood still for Shiv and Sati
Hearing the sound of music coming from no where woke up Naryayan who asked Brahma dev who replied
Naryayan after a long time Mahadev is danicing to his heart content with his Adhishakti beside him
Yes and they look so wonderful said Narayan but they didn't look up for long as this was a dance of love and both Shiv and Sati were completely lost in each other worlds and to cover up Mahadev brought in a huge cloud that hid them from view. This was what Mahadev had been waiting for years to do to it seemed as if he had comeplted a cycle of sorts he was waiting for his Adhishakti to come to him and when she finally did he wanted the world to know that he was finally happy and this was where he wanted to be all these years in the arms of his soul mate his Adhishakti his Sati.
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ETERNAL AND DIVINE LOVE

The first sign of Winter signalled it's arrival upon Kailash and Sati was looking forward to feeling the snow fall on her face but Shiv was worried as she was not used to the cold at all
Sati he called out disturbed by a noise coming from the direction of the kitchen
Yes Shiv am coming she saw her husband get up from mediating and heading towards her he had not picked up the trishul at all.
What is wrong Shiv
Winter is coming and you are not prepared at all
I know and I am looking forward to it she said
Sati he said before snow came falling heavily on their heads. Sati shivered and at once Shiv put his arms around her creating warmth for her
See this is what I meant you are shivering my love
No am allright don't want to leave this place at all she was stammering the suddnen cold took her by surprise
Come on you need to go inside and he carried her as she was not capable of walking at all
Prabhu Mata is she allright
Nandi I am taking your Mata inside and I don't want to be disturbed at all
I will see to it Prabhu
And Nandi was on gurad all moning

Inside their room Sati was still shivering and Shiv bundled her up in his arms once again trying to make her feel hot and warm again.
Shiv there is no reason for you to be here with me I am fine she said
Sati I am not leaving you like this now be quiet and lie down she obeyed him there was not much else she could do today until the snow eased up
Shiv lay down beside and held her until her body stopped shaking which it did after a couple of hours
Nandi was not letting anyone through his Prabhu's words meant the world to him
Mahadev Mahavishu had made an entrance to their room
Narayan
Mahadev sorry to interude but I was very worried for my sister Sati's health
Narayan you are not intruding Sati is feeling a bit better now
Narayan I am allright it is just that my Swami wants to keep a watch on me all the time
Sati
Swami I am perfectly allright
Sati I feel you should listen to Mahadev and stay here out of sight for a little longer
Narayan even you are taking the side of my husband
No Sati we both love and care about you atleast listen to your brother
Fine as you both wish she said and sat down again on their bed next to her husband wo was grinning from ear to ear
Shiv she wisperd you can wipe that grin off your face you seem to have got your way as usual she laughed
Sati your anger has vanished from your face said Narayan
I was never angry at Swami just annoyed at him and you as well. Now Swami food is yet to be made
Sati you are not leaving this room your clothes are wet
Narayan made his excuse
They will dry soon
Coem here Shiv pulled his wife and procceded to loosen her blouse
Shiv she protested you cannot do this. I will get out of my clothes myself and she ran to another part of the room and changed
Shiv was disappointed a bit but she made up for it by snuggling into him. We cannot spend all day like this what will happen if you are called out by one of your devotees
I am too busy with my wife he said
And this is coming form you who always says that he looks upon everyone in the same way and loves them all equally
Sati you are above my devotees I love you more and will always will now how do you feel he asked
Much much better all thanks to my husband who has made it a most pleasurable morning for me perhaps we should do this more often don't you think
Yes my love he laughed will obey your command from now on. This morning was indeed the most romantic one indeed and had come about in the most unexpected way.
Sati wanted Shiv to sing for her and he said he would when they were all alone as he wanted to spend more time with his wife like this
They went off to their private liitle garden where Shiv sang for his wife and she danced out of joy for him and both of them also sang together celebrating their love for one and another and once again they reunited in their love and little while later they got up and Sati found a little plant in need of water she dug a hole and placed it in the ground she looked for water but couldn't find it but Shiv came to her rescue and poured water over it.
Prabu Narad Muni was talking to Narayan I have never seen Mahadev behave in this way. He is so full of joy and his life is flled with music once again all thanks to Devi Sati
Narad you are right. Mahadev is a sight to see nowdays and the change in him is wonderful to see. Kailash is once again a home and Sati is person who has brought him out of his shell. He is the same Mahadev once again
Meanwhile back in Kailash even Nandi did not know where they had dissapeard to . When there was no sound coming form inside he looked in and searched everywhere for them. This is strange Nandi thought his Prabhu normally tells him if he and Mata were leaving Kailash. Prehaps they will be back soon and it could be an urgent matter for them to leave. The gan prets were also looking for Mahadev and when they couldn't locate him they came to Nandi for answers but Nandi did not know what to tell them. So he kept quiet
Back at their little garden Mahadev was trying his best to teach Sati some mantras and asked her to close her eyes and concentrate but she was wanting them to play the veena again as it had been a very long time since they had played together
Sati we will do it later right now close your eyes
Shiv just this once and I will do what you tell me later please
Sati I sang for you a little while ago so now you need to do this close your eyes
Sati obyed him but not for long as her mind kept wandering all around thinking about her husband
Sati I am not your husband now I am your guru so think of me as your guru and remove those thougths from your mind
What thougths I was not thinking about you at all
Sati you forget that I know you inside out and can read your mind as well
Well then can you tell me what I am thinking of right now
Yes and like I said you need to remove them
How can I when I love my guru far too much
Sati why do you have to be so difficult all the time
Why do you have to be so good looking
Sati oh Mahadev was getting nowhere with Sati as once she sets her mind on something until she achieves it she would not budge from that point and if it were some other sishya of his he would get angry at them but with Sati anger seemed to have taken a back seat
Shiv you are smiling at me
No and concentrate Sati got up and landed on his lap
Sati this is not how you behave with a guru. Get off my lap
Why am I not your wife and I have every right to do this with you
Sati Sati what do you want
Let's play the veena
Now you are impossible at times I am trying to give you some power
You can teach me later now will you do what I want please
Fine he said and produced two veenas. The gods staring down at them were having the time of their life looking at the behaviour of Sati
Brahmadev it seems that your grandaugther has inherited some strong behaviour from you
Strong behaviour Narayan you have put it so lightly she is very obstinate at times and poor Mahadev cannot do anything about it. He is very gentle with her
Gentle is right. He loves her with his whole heart and even though Sati at timess drives him nuts he cannot do what he feels likes he bows down to her wishes all the time and so does Sati said Narayan
Narayan Sati gets what she wants from Mahadev everytime don't you think
Yes Sati is very special to Mahadev and he does not want to lose her again Brahamdev
SAti and Mahadev started to play the veena again but Sati was having a little trouble with her playing and she kept forgetting some notes so Mahadev came and sat down beside her put his fingers on top of hers and helped her with it together they spent hours singing and dancing again the gods were besides themselves they were getting another treat for the day but Mahadev made sure that no one could see their most private moments spent together they wre for their eyes only. The day turned into night and still they wre not back in Kailash the next morning the lesson started early and Sati was a willing and obident pupil she listened to Mahadev all along and when the morning was over Mahadev and Sati were baskin gin their love for one another. She had a full afternoon she and Mahdaev went to pluck fruits form the trees that were bursting with them or rather Mahadev made them fall to the ground and Sati picked them up washed them and they shared the apples and oranges between each other. Sati always gave Mahadev the first bite and together a couple of apples went down them and later Sati sat down and as usual placed her head on Mahadev chest she asked him if Vasuki would be angry with her
No why would you think of such a thing
Because he is hardly around your neck these days Shiv
Sati Vasuki understands that at times he cannot me with me.Especailly when I am with you and I thougth you loved it this way
Yes I do she said and lovingly stroked his neck
You are the only pupil of mine who I allow to get this close to me and kissed her cheeks
Then I consider myself truly blessed and honoured to have Shiv as my husband
Shiv the first person to call me shiv as well
That is because you are my husband first and foremost and I love my husband with all my heart
Narayan where is Mahadev he and Sati have disappeared
No Narad they have not gone anywhere they are still in the garden you can't seem them because Mahadev doesn't want you to intrude upon them
Oh
Mahadev and Sati were truly lost in their own world filled with love and Mahadev could not have wanted for anything more. Tomorrow they would be back in Kailash and with Nandi and the ganprets he thought. Sati we need to go back home tomorrow
Tomorrow so soon she asked
Sati I have to go to my gyan sabha and one devotee of mine needs to see me as well
Shiv this devotee needs you as well she batted her eyelids
This beautiful devotee of mine has my undivided attention all the time he said and held her to him in the tightest hug she had received after a long time.
It feels nice to be loved and wanted after a long time he was thinking
Sati could read his eyes and kissed him and said I will never leave you again and I truly mean it this time
I know you do and they kissed again and were lost in each other once more. Somewhereout in the distance music and singing could be heard it was just Mahadev who was rejoicing in his love for Sati again and the gods were very happy to see their Mahadev and Adhishakti together again.
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