#2 SS|TheContract+HerConditions|Link to New thread - Page 33

Suoerb..So half truth out abt Khushi's family to him

Loved it, so much mystery, so much he does not know about her ...I wish they would talk to each other. ...missing that !

Wow. Wonderful update. Arnav though claims to hate Khushi, can't stop himself from buying gifts for Khushi. Also he does care for her. Sigh! If only he would've asked her. Now he knows about Khushi's brother. I am amazed that u have thought so deeply about Khushi's past. Its turning very interesting.

can't wait to read more

awesommeee update...

now he came to know about her past thats good.loved the update

It was great I loved it..waiting fr next...update soon

woww...nice...

I'm sorry Dynamix I haven't been able to comment on your updates as I was away on holiday to Barcelona then when I got back I got ill (probably due to the two extreme weathers)!!! So I have been away from IF for quite a while!!!

I've gotten back and had about 5 updates to read all in one go and can only say they have been mind blowingly good!!!!

You are just, such a great writer!!! I love your writing style!!!

Wow Dynamix, Arnav & Khushi, Akash & Payal's honeymoon in Greece is really amazing!!!!

I just love how you've described their visits to the different places in and around Greece and Turkey!!! Hats off for writing all the awesome stuff!!!!

I'm really impressed how you've portrayed the real Khushi to be well educated with a degree in architecture, can fluently converse in English and read Greek, and to top it off wears western clothes!!! I just love this new Khushi she's just so smart, intelligent and witty!!!!!

I'm glad Arnav had the shock of his life when he finally got the chance to meet the real Khushi!!!!

At the moment Arnav's really getting on my nerves, I seriously feel like punching him!!!! I just can't believe he thinks Khushi's having an affair with Shyam!!! I hope the redemption track is good, Khushi shouldn't forgive Arnav that easily with all that she's been through because of him!!! He deserves to be tortured for a bit!!!!!

I'm also happy that you've shown that just because Akash is the quiet types, doesn't mean is dumb and blind, that he can't see that Arnav and Khushi are not in a proper lovey-dovey married relationship!!!! I hope he gets to the bottom of everything soon!!!!

With regards to Khushi's past coming out, I'm hating that not so good slimy Shyam for getting the Malik's acquitted from the Gupta's murder case!!! He really needs to be seriously punished and that too very soon!!!!!

I know you've said Anjali and Arnav's mum has died but is their father and chacha still alive???

Also the lawyer that you've mentioned was behind Dee's disappearance and Muskaan's murder, is that Shyam???

It was good to read how Payal told Arnav about Khushi's family, hopefully he'll realise she was from a well off family and the derogatory expressions like 'gold digger' he's been using for her were just unacceptable!!!!!

Other than getting really pissed off with Shyam's cunningness, Arnav's stupidity and the Malik's bad deeds, I'm loving your SS 'The contract & her conditions'!!!!!

I can't wait for month 5 when Arnav find's out that Khushi's been innocent all this while and he's been punishing her for a crime she hasn't even committed!!! I really would love to read about his reaction when the truth is unfolded before him!!!!

Please try and update next part soon; I love this virtual tour of Greece and Turkey that you've been giving to us through this SS!!!!!

Thanks for a really great reading experience!!!!!

Keep up this amazing work!!!!!

I'm really looking forward to next part!!!!

P.S.

I'm glad that you gotten the opportunity to go to Greece; I'd love to go myself!!! But I've heard it's really expensive, is that the case??? If I can never go, I can always read your SS and pretend I'm in Greece and Turkey with Arnav, Khushi, Akash and Payal!!!!

Thanks again!!!

Loved the update!