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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous...
loved evry ipk scene u recreated...
the pace had me holding my breathe,,,
is it anjali n shyam who got married? or khushi and arnav??? aaah...u always leave us wanting more...
d intezaar strts yet again...lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
Juhi,

Another super duper truper chapter...blight me girl it seemed like I was not even blinking while reading it...

So Arnav was actually trying to protect Khushi and hence the indifference...and I tell you I just love your Payal..what a sensitive and supportive sister to have..excellent portrayal of the bonding of relationships...

Glad that Arnav's team has found the person and Lavanya's chapter seem to have come to an end...

Loved the use of Payal seq, use of some dialogues from IPK..it indeed has brought back some wonderful memories and also created new with this FF..a big hug for that...

Nani is super cool...

The end scene with the colour of lahenga choli, entwined hands and the way Khushi was wondering about Arnav's choice of dress for the last photo shoot it seems like they have got married but with your twists and turns I wont be surprised if it is Anjali and Shyam...

Now is the next request..plzzz update soon...I am off to Spain tmrw but will keep an eye on your update...

Edited by apara_loves_IPK - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

thnxx for d update...will read it tonite :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
The chapter begins on a emotional note. After making an impuslive decision Khushi is likely to feel vulnerable and Arnav's every action was bound to effect her. That's what happened. His aloofness made her question her decision. Even though he did not say anything but then he's a man of few words and Khushi can read his eyes quite well so it didn't take much for her to understand the indifference.

Payal i felt gave Khushi's thoughts a new prescriptive. One often succumbs to questioning the other person's feelings in such situations. Payal just made her realise what all Arnav has done to woo her. Sometimes for the sake of our own happiness the best we can do is to give the other person a benefit of doubt.

You have used the payal scene beautifully in your story. It gave Khushi a new hope. Atleast she's clear on the fact that his feelings for her are still intact.

I had never expected that this will be the reason for him to ignore her but as always you're the Queen of Surprises and Cliff hangers so good one.

He should have discussed it with Khushi but his reason for not doing so is also legit but still Khushi has all the right to be angry at him for making her go through so much pain.

Anjali and Shaym are moving in the right track, atleast they have both confessed their feelings unlike Arnav who yet has to make a move.

Nani had judged Khushi so well from her body language to how she spoke.

All the things that Arnav does for Khushi is so out of character and his comfort zone. One only goes out of way for people you love.

Arnav's restlessness is a sign of realisation for him. He's slowing coming to terms with the fact that he loves her too! He's going through an emotional upheaval.

The pink and green lehnga gives away as to who it is. Our love birds are finally married! But then the Queen of Cliffhangers might surprise us in the next update =D

I love you. Thank you for writing. You're doing us a big favour =)

Edited by IronButterfly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i thnk its shyamjali. Wondrful update. Wow. Its jst awesum. Waitng 4 nxt part. I thnk dat vl d last part r8. Beautifuly written. Arnav nd khushi settled evrythn btwn dem, bt atleast i thnk arnav hav 2 do wat khushi asks aftr wat she did widout caring 4 hr morals, nd m sure u'l meet our expectatns. Beautifuly written.
Edited by Drkk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Are they Arnav and Khushi ? or Shyam and Anjali?
Now I really love these Cliff hangers:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So Shyam and anjali got MARRIED!! (I hope my guess is right).. You are ready with new twists n turns every time.. 👏And that is what I really like about you.. As usual cant wait for the next update..😛
Edited by ShwethaaRaju - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I was going on refreshing this post...and then suddenly...tan tanaaa...your update!!!
😃
It was fantastic...loved the update...and love u for writing such a wonderful story... 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was an awesome update...
I guess the couple is Shyam and Anjali...
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Posted: 12 years ago
My take the couple standing in the door is either Anjali and Shyam or Payal and Akash. Defo not kushi and arnav.

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