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Posted: 12 years ago


Lovely update..you write very well⭐️

But please excuse my rant. I am not all happy that Arjun.. Is getting another child.. What he did to Lela and other girls..even though he is trying to reform.. God knows what he is upto there.. In rehab. Must be screwing the nurses..
His wife welcoming him back.. With a new baby to come is so 😭😭


I would have been happier if Indira would have said this is my lovers child somebody who gave me comfort in my trying time..
She was going through a traumatic phase... Everybody supporting her...Anjali Khushi have caring hubbies who are well settled in life...so it's easy for them to say give Arjun bhaiya another chance for ur daughter.. He will change..did mrs tiger woods give him another chance...
So what he is a good father.. A man who can mask such depravity... Lila was also pregnant he was cruel to her because she was his mistress and he wants another child from his wife and his wife relents... And gifts him one as a welcome back.., would serve her right if he goes back to his philandering ways..with a brand new mistress...
Viren her hubby's partner in crime is happily getting married...
But she is an object of pity with her hubby trying to reform in uk..

Though I am quite aware there are many Indiras living among us... So it is not unnatural...that she gave a new lease to her marriage with a new baby on the way...but was it wise...the feminist in me rants..
I know this is just a story u give it any shape u want too its yours..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey dear why have you stopped sending pms? Please dear do send pms. I was not even knowing you updated this ff.

Dear the update was very nice. I liked Khushi and Indira's conversation over Arjun. Really its a noticeable change that Khushi has become more mature and all credit goes to Arnav as she is in a content and assured relationship with him. They both are immensely in love with each other which gives her a renewed confidence.

After reading about Indira's pregnancy I was just thinking when Arshi will be ready to have a child? I just wonder what will be Arnav's reaction if he comes to know one fine day that Khushi is pregnant?

Coming to present track I just hope that Lavanya, Sheetal, Viren and Suraj fall for Arshi's plan.

Please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
suraj seems to hv matured soo much with the sudden info.. which seems pretty natural... anyone wud hv been overwhelmed..

arnav khushi as usual.. totally in lovewitheach other, n respect as well..

loved the way indira holds up n seeks n finds comfort in khushi.. her confusion, wrt arjun.. is again beautifully expressed..

n wish suraj can tk his n lavanya's relationship more seriously.. n moveon in life...

waiting fr next..
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice one!!
w8ng for next!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing u write so beautifully
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Posted: 12 years ago
all this time Khushi has been shown very strong and inelligent...
but today Indira's confession took my mind to a new height...
she is not a simple woman...she is confident...she can love...she can think...she can hate...she can differentiate between right and wrong...not a perfect woman...but a strong woman...who can also be a key to success for a man like Arjun...and some how Arjun also knows this...

loved how Lavanya realized the depth of her relation with Suraj...
the way she admitted to herself that Khushi and Arnav are happy because of their thinking...intellect...and their shrewdness...and most of it love...where she doesn't feel anything like this from Suraj...nor for herself...this kind of comparison is very for those who are lonely...

very nice update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved indira n khushi convo
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow... Gave n insight n reminded us how strong Indira is! Khushi n Arnav r too cute!!!!! Lovely update K! Was wondering when u wd update!!!! Thnx :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing.loved it.
pl update soon.
Arnav and khushi-cute and passionate
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Posted: 12 years ago

Very well written Kalyaani…as usual…..you have shown us the women power in this FF. Indira is a strong and a positive woman ….surprised to see the maturity level in Khushi…Loved Khushi….all the characters in this FF are amazing….Kudos to you for writing them in this way.

Amazing update…now waiting for POL.😛

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