taarey ss: born out of fear completed - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
okay...i jus read the updates at one go...that to at 11 at night...and im freaking out!! shit!! =(
mujhe literally darr lag raha hai...its so creepy... =(
well im clueless how u managed to make it so scary and intriguing at the same time...
mera pata nahi aaj raat kya hoga X__X

bhagwan ji bacha lena... *praying*

and btw, congo for the award...ur an amazing writer so u totally deserved it... =) btw party toh banti hai...hehe =D

and im wondering shuld i say dat im excited for the next part or not...cuz i am but im also freaking out thinking bout whats in store =S
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
hey dear first of all i want to thank you for writing this stry cz i always wanted to read a horror stry on taarey...concept is tooo gud!!!the way u wrte it is really outstanding it sends chill thru my spine ..m speechless at the same time m craving for more horror stories & nxt part of this ff..hate you for this😉..i dunno y but im kind of getting suspicious towards taani in this stry coz she was diff when out side i.e scared n all but when in she looks quite brave n knows the place very well esp the owner..i knw i knw i shd giv my out of control imagination some rest..really excited for next part ..pls update soon n pm me when updated...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Wat do u mean u haven't even written anything scary yet!! Are u crazy yaar!! 😭 please... I can't handle more scaryness!! Angelita... Please stay on this scary level!! Agar iss mein hi mein itna darr gayii toh wat will happen when u actually write some scary!! 😭

And OMG!! is taani the ghost??! Because she seems very suspicious... Batado na... Nahi toh mein Rohne lagoongi... 😭

And the door just opened! 😭 ahaa!! Stop it yaar!! Waaa... I'm so scared! And taani knowing everything about the ghost really makes me feel she is the ghost... Please don't do this!!

Arre yaar dar ke maare wait nahi ho raha!! Please jaldi update karo!!
😭 please don't laugh at me... Sachii mein bohot darr gayii hoon... Please batado na! Is taani the ghost!! Pm hi kardo!! But bata toh do!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
OMG this is awesome...Plz Continue soon...Well all thanks to shanu...she made me read this😉
Edited by nis_n - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
So guys I am updating finally


Chapter 3: discovery


Rey entered the gigantic mansion cautiously...he glanced over at taani who looked cool and not panicky like she was when he first met her...like she was comfortable...then again he met her an hour ago and look at him, he is in love. He smiled at her as she narrowed her eyes to scan her surroundings...she smiled back at him...

In fact something was happening to to taani too...she couldn't avoid the feeling she got from being around him. But she knew nothing was possible between then

Rey stood in the middle of the hall...above him was a giant chandelier...one made of crystal...he looked at in awe.it was situated right above his head.he felt a chill run down his spine as he looked at the massive structure..the longer he looked at it the more he could make out a strange figure..he couldn't see it clearly but was strangely aware of its presence. It made sure of it. He found himself hypnotized at its sight..an eerie feeling filled him...he was quickly snapped out of his trance when taani pushed him out of the way of the falling chandelier. He stared at the broken chandelier and a highly worried taani.

" what the hell is wrong with you Rey ! Are you blind ? It could have killed you!" Taani said in a tone filled with anger and worry.

" I am so sorry...I wasn't paying attention" Rey said still in shock .

" not paying attention? It fell right above you!" Taani was very worried now because she knew something.

" let's just get out of here taani" Rey said

" it is too late Rey" she said in an inaudible voice.

Rey walked over to open th door but it didn't open...he pulled and pulled but it didn't budge. He looked over at taani who was staring into a dark room.he walked over to her and looked at the direction she was staring at. All he saw was darkness but he knew that was not what taani saw...

"Taani...taani..." He said in a gentle voice so as to not startle her .

What happened next both shocked at scared Rey. She turned around at him with an empty look in her eyes. She replied him in a different voice. It was almost like two people were talking at the same time. She pointed at the room while speaking.

" that is where it all happened...the torture...the screams of terror...the anger...she would make us sit down and torture us in all ways possible...sometimes physically , sometimes mentally ...all she wanted...all she needed was the screams of terror...which she got till the day she died and she is still getting it..."saying this she fell unconscious..

Rey was staring at her in fear all this time but when she fell unconscious he saw the same girl he fell in love with...he ran towards her without thinking and picked her up in his arms...she rustled but was still unconsious. He carried her towards the door praying it would open but it didn't...he ran upstairs towards the rooms..none of the doors would open except the one she pointed to...the torture room. Rey looked at the room thoughtfully..he looked at the dark and empty room and he looked back at the girl he fell in love with...he knew his decision he ran into the room without thinking.

As he entered the room a far away candle lit up by itself. Rey shuddered while he lay taani down on the bed. He started searching for water in his backpack frantically. He found it and poured its contents on her but to his surprise his completely filled bottle became empty and a curious smoke exited the bottle instead of water. He dropped the bottle in sheer fear. He slapped her hard in an attempt to wake her but she didn't. The next thing he did surprised himself. He put his lips on hers and started breathing int her mouth. She awoke but he didn't stop. Taani couldn't explain it but she instantly put her hands in his hair beckoning him not to stop. He took her signal and continued kissing her passionately. They were out of breath so Rey pulled away . He took one look at taani and was shocked to see that she was no longer in her jeans and shirt but she was wearing an ancient looking saree. Her hair was no longer in a pony tail it was let down and from her ears hung a old pair of earrings. She was no longer opaque..in fact she was almost translucent. Her playful eyes were replaced by eyes full of pain and tears.

"I am sorry Rey" she mouthed softly as tears streamed down her eyes and as it fell on Rey's thigh it burned him.

Rey could just stare on at her in pure confusion while taani got up and walked through the solid door. It was then that Rey finally realized the truth. Taani was a ghost.

" hello dear...look who the cat..I mean taani brought in tonight." Said a voice made of pure evil.


Done ...thanks for reading😊
Edited by angelitha98 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
RES!!!!!!
Ahhh!!! So excited!! Yay!!

UNRES!!

Omg... Phele hi line seh mein daar gayii!!

And Rey's in love??! Awww... 😳 and taani too feeling something 😃

Omg... I'm too scared!! The chandelier?? Wat!!? Ahh... Mein subhe pardhongi!!!

Ab phirse RES!! No way am i reading this at night!!

Acha pardh hi leti hoon... Nahi toh aur daar jaaongi!! And aahh!! Woh chandelier!! Woh Rey pe girrne wala tha!! And taani!! Ohmygod!! I'm thanking her at the moment!!

OMG!! Dark room??!! Dark room mein kya hai??! Kya dhik raha hai taani ko?! 😭 omg!! Y did she speak like that!!?? Aise kyun bol rahi thi??! Waaah... Me too scared... I have shivers!!

And the kiss 😳 but shes a ghost?!! Wat the... Par abh mere Taarey??! 😭 aur woh voice end mein?? Arrgh!! Itna chota update??! Wat!! This is not fair di!! Ek toh itni mehnat seh apse update karvaya! Phir itna choto sa??!

This is not done di!! And upar seh itna scary!!! 😭 mein toh roh rahi hoon! Ab kya hoga mere Taarey ka??! 😭 waaah!! *sniffing*

Update soon di!! Please 😔 me gonna go calm down now!! Me too scared!!
Love u meri pyari di!! Muaah!! ❤️
Edited by Shanae_Diamonds - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
This is something so different and so scary yaar..u did an awesome job👍🏼, i liked it so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
It's very scary and amazing update
taani is ghost and taarey kiss 😳
it's mixture of romance and horror story.. Just awesome
keep writting u r amazing writter..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
wow dear awesm..knew there was smthing fishy abt taani bet she is one of tortured ppl..n she fell for rey..hope taani ll save rey!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
its something diff n scary yaar
awsm great i luv it n thr kiss also
thanks for PM

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