ArHi OS - She Will Be Loved

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

awww such a beautiful os

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awww such a beautiful piece...Wish this were a Multi-shot and not an OS.

Very well written.

Liza

P.S; I didn't receive a PM for this but luckily i found it here...

When are you going to update PERFECTION and Once upon a Time...again.

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Tina

@TinaEskay

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

loved it! very emotional and gripping. u had me totally hooked right from the first lines 😊

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Oh.. It was so beautiful! Arnav's emotions were raw and it didn't take a lot to understand how much he repented..
Was he hurt or something? Why was Khushi helping him? I guess he was in an accident..
Khushi.. Well, this update was more about Arnav.. So automatically it becomes more about Khushi- they are one after all..
Very well written! 👍🏼

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RainyDays

@RainyDays

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Such a heart warming OS ...
Truly Loved it ..!! His Pain , His Helplessness , His Guilt was so nicely potrayed ...
The Flashback potrayed the truth so subtlely ...
Khushi's care, nonchalance, strength , acceptance ...
Grt OS !!
Keep Writing ..

Edited by RainyDays - 12 years ago

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ArnieBoyBarun

@ArnieBoyBarun

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

A very nice story, i really liked. What happened to arnav, did I miss anything here, let me read once again.

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

wow really nice!

hope you will continue soon...

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Zaara

@arshi28

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Thanks for the PM,
I loved this OS and hope you keep writing more OS's
It was heart warming and it brought tears to my eyes,
I know, I am a very emotional person but your OS was amazing,
Keep updating xx

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greenMoss

@greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

This is a poignant yet sweet and romantic OS.

Arnav's regret and repentance is heart-touching.

Khushi is the usual sweet person who is forgiving, kind, loving and caring.

Thanks for the PM.

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Wonderful OS..Loved it

Very beautifully written

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