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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

aaannd V is here 😆

Okay so I'm about to leave for the party in about ten, so yeah - call it irony, but V is forsho gonna be like that tomorrow morning. All drunk and hangoverd and blah blah.

And I promised my brother that I'd help him and his mates out with math, with Sam, tomorrow morning. f**k.

Anyway, so therapy? Khushi Mawali Gupta ... therapy?

I don't like that boss by the way, HEY I'D HAVE QUIT TOO IF HE FIRED KHUSHI. 😳

bwahahahahaha, okay so I totally understand Arnav's reaction. Lavanya seems to me the doormat kind. You know, the one who'd happily doormat under everybody, tryinna please all and actually pleasing nobody. I love Khushi, I really love her. I ever tell that to you ? Yeah well, you're supposed to love your best friend.

I loved the way you connected her previous(?) sessions with her therapist to the scenes right now. Is she still seeing the therapist?

Well, emm ... this is like a song I was listening to - when I saw you'd updated. And somehow - this song is linked to A and Lavanya.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IfFi4Q7ueA8[/YOUTUBE]

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Khushi ... I have this feeling that this tough girl tongue piercing thing is actually a mask she puts on, so that nobody can f**k around her feelings. Not that they can, V abhi zinda hai.

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nnhk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Waiting for Lav and Arnavs story to unfold.

Khushi is awesome in a creepy kind of a way.

She still goes to the therapist?

I hate the boss and V sounds like another interesting character.

Masam , I am so hooked !

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anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Wow mind blowing start and way diverse from other stories :) Loved the 1st chapter so much ... Looking forward for the next one :)

Just saw the 2nd chapter posted . This comment was for the 1st chap which I just read !!!

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

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I cannot believe my luck!! I was just reading part 1 and the pm popped up! So quickly resed and here I am on the same page! Yay me!!

Dude the start was superb man! So I'm assuming La n Arnav share a not so happening wedding! The relationship is on a down hill! And both are trying their best to make it up! But unintentionally it ends up on a stand still! Which La is trying to over look, Arnav too at places!

Khushi is a stud macha type of a woman!! The piercings the outlook the all time swearing and all! She's a hacker?? And works or to say worked at a store!

Part two lol that was fun! She was literally on his nerves! And sad man his one line and evetyn turned out to be true!! Poor khushi was already suffering from that jerks nature! Mr Rathore I believe lol!!

And then the listen part that was fun! He already had checked her out but this was cherry on the top!! Gosh n you could easily say he was disturbed by her! Brushed her body and then went stand still! She was at loss of words! How's the next meeting gonna be??

Cheers

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Eleanor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Whoooaaa!

(turns the inner Psychologist on)

La and Arnav's relationship- it seems that Lavanya is the kind of person that wants to please everyone around her- she wants to think that there is a perfect world but she feels deeply- guilt, sadness, nervousness and speaking-before-thinking kind of person. All that she masks and hides but as the reality crashes- she shatters.

Arnav- I don't know. He seems kind of uptight and gets angry/snappy/judgy in a second kind of guy but he apologised and went after Khushi so he might not be bad at all.

Khushi- I looove her!

- found it funny that when the therapist asked her what she would do when someone snaps at her and she answers that she will kill them but when Arnav snaps- she lets her guard down and gets scared, Nervous but then emerges back into being... err her. Khushi- she might not be as tough as puts on.

Khushi and Arnav's meeting- he could have left her but he went after her (I know, he played a part in getting her fired) but still and then those 'innocent' touches that weren't innocent at all. For someone who judges her appearance- he sure seems to observe her a lot! Is that attraction I see? Or is it guilt? Either way... it's a start.

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opsyellow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

What the hell just happened? Cant wait to know more about Arnav and Lavaniya! Khushi is crazy, hilarious and kind of rude arrogant and you know the rest but I love her! So khushi is or was in therapy? I have this feeling that Arnavs life is going crazy soon!
Thanks for the pm.
PS: when can we expect a update on if only ?

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zeedia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Awesome..loved it.
Thanx for the pm

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

A new one from u.. Wow..

Arnav and Khushi are so different but then, them in ur stories are always different and me loves that.. Khushi is the "Rowdy" type.. Arnav is kinda senti.. Not very, but there is some past story between Lavanya and him.. Looking forward to this...

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laksh65

@laksh65

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

read the chapters 1 and 2 in one go,

awesome. as usual, every fiction of yours has the special "Masam" touch the uniqueness that speaks

(before you send the pm, i have read and commented, was late in reading chapter 1)

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Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

😃

Khushi freaked me out ... 😆 and anorexic ... 😲

and under therapy ...😲 love her conversation with the therapist ...

Arnav and Lavanya's relationship seems to be all messed up ...

Rathore was a real swine ... A is right ... He could have just scolded her ...

but sacking her !!!

"Chewing the piercing of her bottom lip out of her old habit, she watched him look away, and back up to her, clutching his shopping more tightly, the pull and current suddenly seeming more magnetic, and she bit her lip more... " speaks a lot ...

and V ... was cute ... "I've got a bloody hangover and that's making me feel.." V rose her head from the bench on which she was lying on, when she groaned and lied back again, ".. dizzy."

Want more 😲

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