Haha jk more like *eyes wide open to not miss anything*
Arnav's filddling with his wedding ring>relationship status-kabhi strong kabhi loose?
Smoothly averted his gaze as if Lavanya is at fault? O_o
I have a feeling Arnav will walk away from both or "talk" to Khushi about feelings, but Khushi after she recovers (or not?) may not want Arnav but tell him to take a chance-something like that
I have a feelng that now Lavanya is back she has either mended her relationship with her family, or has left them for good and give a "solid" chance to her and Arnav's relationship. (Thoughts are pouring out of my head right now and it's hard to keep up with keys ahhh I'm forgetting what I want to say) In the first chapter when you described how they moved to the apartment, and with Lavanya's family swimming in money revealed in this chapter; did Lavanya insist to move into the dingy apartment bc she wants them to start new in the sense that nothing (like money issues)can come between them that will tear their relationship apart? I think I may have missed her reasons in the first chapter but if she didn't mention that then was that her reason?
Another question which I meant to ask last chapter (I think that's the one where Khushi was feeling her soft strands of hair); how do you get "natural" dreadlocks? Was it implied that she never combed her hair? (sounds lame-ish to ask but little details get to me :/S)
I like how your characters have already "developed" in their past, sort of like seen it all, but all of them have hit this loose end, kind of like the edge of a cliff, and they're dangling there, hovering off the edge. In my opinion though, if they do jump off the cliff, or if they take steps back from the cliff, either way is good. It's just those few steps that need to be taken to jump off or stay on for the inner peace (andar se shaanti) kind of thing.
It was heart-tugging when Khushi said that part about being f*d and not made love to. It was touching that she was actually expecting being made love to by Arnav and not what others did. All those times with NK now make sense. But I have a feeling like everything else that Arnav has denied about having with Khushi, he has denied the part about making love to her as well. (To Khushi's family-grrr). I hope after and if she recovers she goes to fight her inner and outer "demons" and confronts her family. With the support of V! Arnav I don't know. Those two could help each other out in so many ways (Arnav seems to have lost himself). You know before this chapter I was having difficulty choosing which "couple" I should root for; now I don't think it's about who ends up with who, well it is, but what matters now is who they end up choosing within themselves to be as individuals.
My mushy side is saying bechara NK. But the question is was he "using" Khushi or was there more to it? Him going to save her-he liked her-In the end I guess he showed where his "loyalties/feelings/something" lie. There's a better way of saying that line but I can't come up with one.
The title of this SS keeps coming back to this chapter. I may be totally off but what happened between Arnav and Khushi in Arnav's eyes was "for the wrong", but as he carries Khushi down and looks at Lavanya, someone should be right behind them carrying a sign saying "for the right" (right at that precise-carrying Khushi down making eye contact with Lavanya-second)
So I was going to say I found you on the Internet by posting a picture of a cartoon doc frying brains but I couldn't find a decent one, but I came across this pic which kind of made me laugh and kiiind of depicts all these characters having different faces, i.e. vulnerability, hopeful, acting strong, etc. The picture doesn't show that but it does show different faces of Bart, DonaldDuckie and all those other cartoons forming out of each other.
https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTNk13D4UqsuUqru_kjTZeeCVF092t8266BqWUScbGVcPiDm9i7
Thank you for the PM!Have an "anti-frying stuff" weekend. Lol jk have a relaxing weeekend.
Cupcakes!*yay it posted!!*
P.S. Can we please have a book signing/Q/A session for this SS as well after it's done? Curiosity/unregistered/missed information is a burden 0.o
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