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Posted: 12 years ago
Fab update...
So khushi nd arnav pour out their feelings to each other...
But arnav is bit insecure here...doesnt knw wer his life is heading..
At last par...khushi was attackd wich in turn killed NK..nd
arnav walked past lavanya wid khushi in his hands...wich means he has tken decision...
Eager for next...sad dat it is endin
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haha jk more like *eyes wide open to not miss anything*

Arnav's filddling with his wedding ring>relationship status-kabhi strong kabhi loose?
Smoothly averted his gaze as if Lavanya is at fault? O_o

I have a feeling Arnav will walk away from both or "talk" to Khushi about feelings, but Khushi after she recovers (or not?) may not want Arnav but tell him to take a chance-something like that
I have a feelng that now Lavanya is back she has either mended her relationship with her family, or has left them for good and give a "solid" chance to her and Arnav's relationship. (Thoughts are pouring out of my head right now and it's hard to keep up with keys ahhh I'm forgetting what I want to say) In the first chapter when you described how they moved to the apartment, and with Lavanya's family swimming in money revealed in this chapter; did Lavanya insist to move into the dingy apartment bc she wants them to start new in the sense that nothing (like money issues)can come between them that will tear their relationship apart? I think I may have missed her reasons in the first chapter but if she didn't mention that then was that her reason?
Another question which I meant to ask last chapter (I think that's the one where Khushi was feeling her soft strands of hair); how do you get "natural" dreadlocks? Was it implied that she never combed her hair? (sounds lame-ish to ask but little details get to me :/S)
I like how your characters have already "developed" in their past, sort of like seen it all, but all of them have hit this loose end, kind of like the edge of a cliff, and they're dangling there, hovering off the edge. In my opinion though, if they do jump off the cliff, or if they take steps back from the cliff, either way is good. It's just those few steps that need to be taken to jump off or stay on for the inner peace (andar se shaanti) kind of thing.
It was heart-tugging when Khushi said that part about being f*d and not made love to. It was touching that she was actually expecting being made love to by Arnav and not what others did. All those times with NK now make sense. But I have a feeling like everything else that Arnav has denied about having with Khushi, he has denied the part about making love to her as well. (To Khushi's family-grrr). I hope after and if she recovers she goes to fight her inner and outer "demons" and confronts her family. With the support of V! Arnav I don't know. Those two could help each other out in so many ways (Arnav seems to have lost himself). You know before this chapter I was having difficulty choosing which "couple" I should root for; now I don't think it's about who ends up with who, well it is, but what matters now is who they end up choosing within themselves to be as individuals.
My mushy side is saying bechara NK. But the question is was he "using" Khushi or was there more to it? Him going to save her-he liked her-In the end I guess he showed where his "loyalties/feelings/something" lie. There's a better way of saying that line but I can't come up with one.
The title of this SS keeps coming back to this chapter. I may be totally off but what happened between Arnav and Khushi in Arnav's eyes was "for the wrong", but as he carries Khushi down and looks at Lavanya, someone should be right behind them carrying a sign saying "for the right" (right at that precise-carrying Khushi down making eye contact with Lavanya-second)

So I was going to say I found you on the Internet by posting a picture of a cartoon doc frying brains but I couldn't find a decent one, but I came across this pic which kind of made me laugh and kiiind of depicts all these characters having different faces, i.e. vulnerability, hopeful, acting strong, etc. The picture doesn't show that but it does show different faces of Bart, DonaldDuckie and all those other cartoons forming out of each other.
https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTNk13D4UqsuUqru_kjTZeeCVF092t8266BqWUScbGVcPiDm9i7

Thank you for the PM!Have an "anti-frying stuff" weekend. Lol jk have a relaxing weeekend.

Cupcakes!*yay it posted!!*

P.S. Can we please have a book signing/Q/A session for this SS as well after it's done? Curiosity/unregistered/missed information is a burden 0.o
Edited by Shrutee7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i dont know what to say, it was very well written👏 , got answers to many questions
and than also get an injured khushi at the end
waiting for the next part

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Posted: 12 years ago
that was suuupeeerrrb masam
Arnav and khushi
Their past their conversation
And hell the end i imagine if the dead body iz of nk feeling saaad
And arnav avoided lavanya iz this sign of their break up?
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Posted: 12 years ago
they both were trying to find answers from each other...in each others presence...she thought may be he is different...and he knew she is different...but his guilt and need made him do things he did...he is not to blame...he was finding solace in her but his life with la and his past mistakes made him hurt her too...her past made her this way... molded her in what she is presently and once she gave into the circumstance she again was shattered...and NK dead...and i goons hurting her...La i hope she realized that what she did in spur of moment and is hoping will work...is her delusion and she will try to find good outta this...and i really hope that this time arnav will be able to make a decision outta guilt...

loved this update...and as always masam u gave us a very beautiful story...thanks for update n pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Khushi's past finally revealed and so did Arnav's! It was very intense kind of mind boggling update. Too many things happened.
In the end I am kind of disappointe din Arnav. His sense of morality kicks in a bit too late for other's good!
And Khushi she was damaged, she tried to seduce Arnav unabashedly and thinking he would love her?? But I think he evoked some feelings in her after a long period! Though I normally would condemn what she did the way she did (including Arnav's participation as well) I still feel sad for her!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it
Just amazing chapter
How arnav and khushi put their heart out to each other
Feeling bad for nk though
Eager to read more
Please update soon
Thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
There's something about this story which is compelling in a sense- lures you in and shows you a world that is far from perfect yet very real. Can't believe it's almost the end of it.

Khushi- at the end of the day- we are talking about a girl who is vulnerable, broken, is independent in a sense but seeks dependence. She just wants to be loved- in her own twisted way... she goes after what she thinks will make her happy or content- despite of the cost of the situation. My heart goes out to her for braving what she has seen in her life and going out on her own. Yes, she fell in with the wrong crowd (the world of hacking) but she didn't think she had a choice.

Arnav on the other hand is kind of biopolar with his feelings and attitude... his childhood made him what he is today. The feeling of rejection must have been terrible. He is clear on what he should go after, what kind of wife he should have and what he doesn't find right then why the guilt only after doing the deed? Yes, Lavanya doesn't deserve it and so doesn't Khushi.Does he connect with Khushi because of his past? Or is she an escape route to run off to when things get difficult?
NK is dead and Khushi is injured? Shocked.
Edited by ElenaElenor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bham, that was an intense update Masam.
Can't figure out what will happen to Khushi now.

Waiting for the last chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part...
arnav & khushi did...for arnav it was emotional coverage...for khushi it was love making...
when people ruined by their own lives this happen...
arnav & khushi have painful past...
khushi felt her sky shining...arnav felt his sky drowned with cloud...
OMG nk dead...khushi seriously injured...
arnav taking khushi hospital in his arm...his emotion now a gr8 question???????????
lavanya was froze to see that...
update soon...

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