Arhi FF - Running From The Truth#2 Link for THREAD 3 pg. 148

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Your flashbacks collaborate with the present so well. I always find it so endearing. Arnav and Khushi have such a history and how well they know and understand each other.

I absolutely loved their parts. So beautifully written. You always end up surprising me with your writing. There are so many emotions in your sentences that you feel for the characters and want them to be happy as if they are someone your own. You make me feel like I have a personal connection with them :)

Arnav and Khushi literally have everything but happiness in their lives. On this Holi please fill their lives with some happy hues 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

The feelings ...the peace and the comfort level they share , it came across so well ...

Wonderful update ...waiting for next part ...hope It's soon .

Thnx for the pm dear.

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A_R_S

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Congrats for new thread.
Lovely and wonderful update.
Loved to read Arshi scene in the morning and how Khushi squeezed Arnav hands, when he tried to leave.
And also glad for La.

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

very happy for lavanya ..hope her and NK can learn to love and live with each other...arnav and kushis flash back was so very sweet...loved it...continue soon...

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Sweta...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Congrats on the second thread :) well worth it :) loved the fact khushi asked him to come on the bed nd he did half awake and their sleeping position was cute still holding hands hahahah :) and the fact arnav slept In wasn't a shocker after all he had khuhsi :) thansk for the pm can't wait for the next part :)

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cozy_mango

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awww Arnav and Khushi's flashback was cute, they have such a deep history together :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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That was a brilliant and fantastic update, awww loved the part where Arnav and khushi were sleeping together on the bed as khushi felt so happy as she had always waited for the moment. Loved the flashback it was so cute, love how you show the same scene in the past as well as the present. So Lavanya has also agreed to the marriage, does she really like NK as she seems really happy with marrying NK . Continue soon please and thanks for the PM xx