vm ff: Hum Bewafa Hargis Na The Pt 15 PG 140 (24/10) - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Artii159

Awesome awesome update,oh wow thank u so much artii and i am glad that you like it😊juz luvd it...so basically VirMan r separated yes they are seprated n Viraat is working in a police department,hmm you are right very interesting..Luvd da flashback parts, sweet memories, dat was really very cute.haye thanks.juz luvd it...Wateva Maanvi said was vry hurtful😔,hmm it's true i am also hurt with her behaviour🤣poor Viraat,,,wat's wrong wid Maanvi😕?i also don't know😳 I think Maanvi is living in Mumbai,may be dat's y ur sending Viraat dere as well..😛😉😆...really an awesome update,,,plz continue soon n thnks a ton 4 de pm...but ya dn't 4get 2 pm me wen u update huh..i'll b waiting..😊😊😊thank u so much and i'll cont it soon and yes how can i forget to pm you😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

Superb updt...awesome start...virat n manvi suffering frm broken relationship...i m sure there is some misunderstanding...manvi never betray him...virman r insepreable...virat is promoted to ACP...nice...now he transfer to mumbai...i m sure he will meet manvi there...waiting fr there encounter...cont asap


hey thank u so much samu. i am glad that you like it. and yes virman are seprate and their encounter will be soon😊 i'll try to cont it soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Bhabani90

Its mindblowng fantastic but m bitting my fingers as u kept part of the secret still unrevealed. So unwrap dat quickly and updbte soon. And thnx for da pm..


ha ha ha please dear don't spoil your fingers by bitting it. it will take time to reveal everything b'coz picture abhi baki hai mere dost😊😊😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: nishal310

meera when are you going to unres

Unres kar diya 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Omg shivali I didn't kno u write sooo gud
First part wow awesone yaar
Feel sorry for them both bt I dnt think anyone of them can be bewafa hence the title
I luved the way u used the song iktara in between the update
N the way u incorporated the flashbacks so perfectly
Very very nice ne I'll read the rest of the updates wen I cum bak
I hope manvi is in Mumbai - wich I think she will be that's y destiny (or should I say shivali) is taking virat there
So thanx a lot for this update n the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
very well written and very interesting 😊

Lots of questions and confusions bt am sure as the story all will be cleared ...

Virat smiling on those cute memories was sweet
And i feel mumbai holds a huge surprise for him

Update soon
And thanx alot for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Res 😎
Pehle unres to karne de phir like karna 😆agar mera net pack khatam ho gaya toh🤣

Unres 😉

Shivi ji tum to chaa gayii ⭐️.haye thank u meera bon😊. Kya rocking update tha 👏👏👏sachi😊.. Loved the beginning.. So Virman are married!!! And now they are separated from each other.yeah you are right. First update mein hi itna bada shock 😲 .haww really i didn't know that😉. Loved the flashback scenes 😃.. Very well written 👏👏.. Manvi can never betray him..ab kya keh sakte hai kalyug hai aur kalyug mein kuch bhi ho sakta hai😳😳 Im sure there was some solid reason behind her actions .. So Virat is a police officer.. Wow sounds hot 😉.haww besharam😳. And now he had been transferred to Mumbai crime branch.. It means Manvi is also in Mumbai 😛.hmm may be. Loved the update 👍🏼.. Eagerly waiting for the next part.. Song selection is perfect for the update.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 🤗thank u so much i am glad that u like it

you also take care🤗

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Edited by nishal310 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
heyyy!!
You updated...
and thanks for the PM...
i am loving each and every bit of this chap...
you have expressed Virats POV very well...write from his...grief...agony...pain...
you have penned down all these emotions awesomely...
you maade feel the pain he is goin through..
hw much he luvs his Maanvi...
ever thing...over a wonderful job sweetie...
i wonder y did Maanvi say she hates him??
continue soon
And thanks for the PM...!
love
safrena
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Net pack khatam ho gaya to bhai haina 😉 🤣

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