*** RaghaVi OS : Many A Moons *** - Page 11

Originally posted by: lakshmi_3004

I will be the attending Doc of that HCICU 😆
Oye u can attend me as an friend... Resident doc hi kaafi hai mere liye... The hibernating doc 😆

Di..awesome 👏
Thankuuu 😃

LOVED the way you painted with words the scene where Raghav thinks G3 will slap him but she didn't ⭐️
I wish I could write some more in this chapter but I needed to balance it around all the characters... I'm in awe with the mom son duo... but agle chaps mein surely a scene or two to honge hi 😉

and again..the Words formed seamless pictures..and hence i had a very quick visual...YOU are the NEXT big thing in Creative writing DI 🤗
Thanku 😃

RaghavI
raised to the power of 'n'

i so can imagine "bole na bole na" song in the background when Raghav was looking at Sia holding the hands the flowers, chocolate basket, and the Fun she was having...
Kuch aisa hi sama tha... tune bhi baj raha tha... but Raghav ke dil ki ghanti ab tak baji nahi hai 😉

P.S one Doubt..Di Komal is a woman substance right?? How can she React so girly??😕 i felt it a bit of Out of Character😕 ( although i LOVED it 😃)
Komal is a bubbly and girly character in this OS... The one who tend to jump to conclusions or turns the house Topsy turvy... Family mein ek aise member ki zaroorat hoti hai 😆... Haan lekin...Seasons of life FF mein she is a woman of substance... Guess tune OS and FF ko confuse kar diya.😳
But glad you loved it 😃


Chal ye le teri jhappi 🤗... aur pehle wale comments UNRES kar meri RES nagar ki maharani 😆

Originally posted by: The_Inner_Voice

Saba meri jaan 🤗... UNRES karne ka irada hai... ya fir ye irada bhi HC ki tarah hibernation pe hai 😆

Aur bahut likhti main aage... but for now thanks for your res wala comment re... coz i know tere comments detailed hote hain. 😃

Originally posted by: premeeristry

😲 i completely forgot to edit it 😆 ...well ur at fault for this 😕 ab if u take such long for updates comment karna hi hul jaayein...

Oye tu hul kise de rahi hai 😆... mana ki updates late ho jate hain... but aate to hain na ... atleast HC ki tarah hibernation mein to nahi hain 😕

Sleeping is meant for the night; and its morning now so normal people get up by this time... Oh God!!! I forgot 'normal people'... not the hibernating bears like you"

🤣 ironic
I put that thing there for a reason... 😆


no wonder the tee suits you the best... Winnie the Pooh"

i just can't imagine him wearing that 😆
I can ... cute and cuddly lagega...

"Water, Raghav- Yes! Salty water- Definitely No!!!"

cause of doing such act...i think he's defently hungry 🤔
😆... I have no idea whether he is... but mere pet mein chuhe daud rahe hain... why Saba why did u even have to mention something that relates to FOOD!!!


"Oh! So you are still angry, Hmm...Then I guess I'll apologize like our good old days" He had this mischievous smile on his face and then in a swift movement he had her carried in his arms. The chant of "I'm sorry Sia" went on till they reached the door.

aww sweet RaghavI
... Bole na Bole kuch...


"Raghav, we are locked out... I didn't take the keys and I guess when you left, the door closed behind you"

😆 the house pushed them out of it...
Rab di marzi 😉


"Oh well! And I have been helping all the girls climb their room through the window this way, all this while, haven't I?"

🤣
Ho gaya tere roon ka farsh saaf? ab uth bhi ja Saba!!! 😆


"A friend who would rather go through the strenuous part of climbing in through a window, so that you can walk easily through the door"

She speaks philosophy 😕
Tujhe philosophy se itni 😕 kyun hai re 😆


"You don't like this look?
if he would have asked me about it 😡...
Ab tujhe " 😡" dekhkar ... wo sawal hi bhool jayega ... aur use Khudkhusi thodi na karni hai 😆


It's Maa and others I'm worried about. It would knock the daylight out of them."

🤣
There you go again 😆... Glad that a few lines here and there are making u go 🤣... it makes me 😃


It sounds more like 'Hobo'!!!"

hobo looks like this 🤣 .
Ok now mera turn 🤣🤣🤣


How did she do it every time?
even i wud like to ask the same 😕
Tu kaun banega crorepati khel rahi hai kya?... jab dekho sawal ke saath rehti hai 😆.. But know what ...I love you for that Saba 🤗
As for Sia... well she knows Raghav like the back of her hand 😉

its really amazing 😊 spending some time with ur FF..it directly draggs me iinn to it ...sorry for taking it soo long to edit 😳 coz am caught by time and also missing ur FF 😒 "Seasons of Life" ...n i have something for u there long back ...go n hav a look.😊
It feels nice when someone takes time to write in their views... I'm not buttering you re... sach mein... I have come to love your detailed comments... so as far as you edit it i dont mind the delay yaara... 😉... I know you too have a life and are busy sweets 😃

Well "Seasons of life" may have to wait for a while dear... will try posting something in a week or twos time... Hey will check the FF n that something that you have left behind. *runs to check*
...* stops running midway...turns...comes running back*... Oye... Jhappi kaise bhoolgayi ... yeh le... 🤗



love
saba
Love
Sneha

Originally posted by: premeeristry

🤗 Snehaaa!!!!!

🤗..Sabaaa!!!!!!!

hahahaah ... wad an update 😆... i can clearly see wads on the way... 😈
yea Sia ko har ek ki pasand yaad rehti hai 😕 don't know how? may b she maintains note book 🤔
Ah I love ur bandaron ki toli 🤗... Oye tu yeh 😈 looks kyun de rahi hai 😆



She was so in trance that she hardly noticed him reach out for her duppatta and wipe his face in it.

i guess Raghav dont like towels 😆
You had me 🤣 at that...Yeh koi anti toweliya hi soch sakta hai 😆


And then somehow none of the queries doubts, and fears mattered. That you returned after whatever happened, that you are with us now, that you are here right before me, holding my hands as we have this talk ... nothing else matters."

Sia knows better whats cream n butter 😕
Hey thats no butter... She knows better that butter... Life has been bitter and she isn't quite keen to butter Raghav just to make things better...
Oye doesnt this sound like "betty bought some butter" wala tongue twister 😆

Bhai its Taashu... Do you see anybody other than Sia for once?" said Taashu.

there she goes..😆 i use to just love her chidaofyng Raghav in SB too.
Taashu was one character who could have been given a bit more screen space with raghav... her and Raghav's scenes were always a treat... So thought I would incorporate that here 😉

"Sia Could we just avoid this talk. It's making me nauseous. Anything but this."

some1's about to be jealous.
You Bet!!! 😆

Only one person had the right to stay at her place at night, and it was him, Raghav.

oh really? 😕 🤣...don't know why but i just enjoy a guy's jealousy 😆
So do I 😉... especially when its HC's played characters 😆


Am not gonna direct jump on..Sia-Preet fiasco untill things get clear 😕 for i think they don't have any such thing which Raghav's mind intending him to think...🤔.
Maloom hai..you tread very cautiously on such lands...But you never can be too sure ... can you?


I'll be under the HICU (Harshad's Intensive Care Unit) for sometime as suggested by friends here...So the next update depends on the resident doctor himself

waddd???? 😲 phir to mil chuka next update ...not done Sneha aisa nahi kartey...don't follow the resident doctor.😕.for he may take god knows wad 😡 to come out of this hibernation...dont keep us wait for long..😳...Update soon.
Saba tu na... 🤣... Teri bandariya ne dil khush kar ditta...
Well I cannot miss out on HICU... but dont worry I will be updating 😉... and certainly wont be following the resident doc in his oh so famous hibernation... 😆

love
saba
Love
Sneha

Originally posted by: -Urooj_Harshad-

good job sneha 👏 i know your the best rocks thankyou for the pm!!! i loved this many more 🤗 my favourite raghavi and cute baby boy krish 😊

Originally posted by: silky_harshad

who is this preet 😡 I m gonna strangle him agar galti se b he tried chance maroing on sia 😡 n plz give me that aisha...I will fry her lyk a pakora in garam garam oil 🤬🤬 n aww my RaghavI...mykrighav my Raashu n abt the writer------woman,I am really really really angry 😳 no seriously,kia soch kr you were hibernating 😡 ki u will come wid ur basket of cookies n tadaa sb maan jaenge 😡 IMPOSSIBLE...upar se u literally tarpaoed us for update...kia soch ke 😡 itna kamaal ka update chhipa kr rkha hmse 😡😡😡 u did such a big gushtakhi in harshu's gf's shaan 😡 so as punishment no jhappa jhappi for you 😛

Tere saare 😡 ka ek hi jawab hai mere paas .. HC ki zubani...



Oye preet ko kaise bhool gayi? Kdmhmd bhool gayi kya?... was missing prem preet.. socha raghavi mein preet ka tadka maardoon.😉

Tu baawarchi kabse ban gayi re?...pakore banana hai to kai veggies hain...
Ufff kitna 😡... har line pe ek hai 😆... tu na tikhi mirchi hai re beta 🤗

Inna gussa???... Di par???... tujhe andaaza bhi hai itna bada update karne ke liye mujhe kitne papad belne pade?... I guess its me whos gonna go 😡 now... and tu rehne de... tere taraf se jhappi milna to kab ka band ho gaya... 😛