Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 2) - Page 21

beautiful written dear
especially arnavs emitions and his dads love fir his son
ths a lot

The contemporary marriage problems depicted it make it much more easy to connect with. The cheating spouse/suicide scenario is so age old. It does not happen these days, the other spouse just gets rids of the cheating one and moves on with dignity.
I am glad to see a modern outlook in the marriage problems of the story.

For me the chuckle in this update happened when I read about Arnav's anger management sessions. Because, really, with the kind of anger issues Arnav had in the show's version - he really needed Anger Management sessions. Looks like he got those here already.

The emotional part was definitely the father-son dialogue. The bold versus normal font in this dialogue was unique. I thought it made the conversation easier to read.

I have a question. You sometimes have very long spaces (gaps) between lines. Is that when there is a transition in the scene? Silly question, right? But was just curious.

My most anticipated update: read about Kushi's story and also, when Arnav/Kushi interact for the first time. Hope I read this in the next update

Please update soon

Yupiii...he stays...Arnav father has learned from filmy Khushi...
What next?...
Update soon.

oh wait, you have a new thread. Congrats! You seem to have a very dedicated and large set of readers. This is the first story of yours that I am reading. Do you have an index of other works? I would love read if you do.

I am sure sumer had learnt this acting from khushi.wonderful chapter.

Woah it was intense the whole time and then the ending was..funny and so Khushi! :D loved the update!

relief that Arnav is not leaving...good update.

Hope Arnav & his dad reconcile..