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greenMoss thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
R.
Edited.

I'm completely spellbound, especially after reading the last line.

The scene was so,so aesthetically sensual and passionate!
I felt that it was kind of an (unacknowledged) Suhaag-Raat scene before marriage!

According to me, it was Arnav's sense of humour, which made him ask Khushi whether she was having second thoughts or not. 😆

Arnav is a very thoughtful person apart from being intensely passionate, when it comes to Khushi.

A constant thought was spiralling in his conscious mind- to allow Khushi, full freedom of choosing whether she really want it or would regret it.
The facts that he wanted to do this with Khushi's full willingness and give her space, were really praise-worthy on his part.

His concerned thoughts about doing it safe indicates that he is responsible.

Arnav should be conferred a title of being a Sage because of the amount of Self-control he possesses! 👏

Khushi's first sensual attack was definitely
L.e.t.h.a.l. 😉

Oh! How I'm curious to know about the
".. the string of choicest swear words."
!
😛

The intricate description of Khushi's feelings was Amazing to read.

Khushi's thoughts of leaving Arnav's room without informing him because he was asleep, were abrupt.. But surely it initiated the right kind of emotion within Arnav.

The scene where Arnav said that people, about whom he cares, leave without notice, was sad.

This one act of consummation made Arnav realize about the state of affairs in his heart.. And channelised all his scattered emotions for Khushi to be termed as Love.

His vulnerability came to the fore when he got to know that Khushi was leaving him for the night. May be this singular feeling of longing and to keep her with himself always, make him realize that how the institution of Marriage is important for that.. And definitely pivotal to shape up things.

The moment when he realized that their breaths were intermingling, he can't breathe without Khushi's breath and they are connected in a very basic level.. reminded me of the Holi scene where Arnav had said ".. hamari dhadkanein ek ho jaati hain.. "

.. And the last line where he realizes that he is in Love with Khushi, is just Fantastic!
Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
R.
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You know, Precaps are the Desserts after the wonderful meal you provide us with, in the afternoons, in the form of your Delightful updates.. So, the ever hungry person I am which dangerously borderlines to being a glutton, leaves me wanting and eventually missing the Precap..
😔

.. Well! I'm thinking, what surprises the morning will bring for Arnav and Khushi? Or will it be just a normal day in front of the outside world?
Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
R.
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A very Happy Holi to you, Di!

The banner is great- it feels like it is
tailor-made for Ch 60!

Thanks for the PM. 😊
Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
what was in his subconcious seems to have come to the forefront...but now to be seen how will he accept the realities of his emotions and life... 😃

thanx for such a lovely update

pls update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
You know what, I had been thinking of leaving a PM or a post telling you to make Arnav say those three words, consciously or not, because what would happen in this update would surely release the pressure of floodgates on the dam of his emotions. And I'm so so so so so Goddammit happy that it happened!!

The *ahem* part was the first I read without going *ahem* in my mind. It was more of *aww* and *sigh* and *I want Arnav (pout)*😆

Brilliant work, farah!! It's become my favourite FF now. I shappath.


P.S. I am sure Rasgulla_sp would be very happy you finally "farak"-ed her. Sorry, I keep seeing that in her comments! 🤣

Love,
Mav
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh I miss them today more than ever...so in their honour...and in ASR style

" it was beeeauutifuuul! "

It really was...! I like the way you take the dialouges from the show and use them in a different situation ...
I love how their union was so perfectly described...the fireworks and the flames...loved it , it was super sensuous at the same time so natural and inevitable .

Love how he wakes up and panics not seeing her in his arms...I think Baby Gupta is going to change his way of thinking before he realises ...


I love how he says he loves her...it was him thinking aloud so spontaneous and so right...it summed up everything he has ever felt for her and not said so far...there always were together but after this night theri coming together in so many levels physically and emotionally I am dying to see what happens the morning after...and after and after!

Happy Holi!
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Posted: 12 years ago
seriously ILU when the women is sleeping. what arnav i expect better from you!!

I was thinking there might be some talks about kushis parents and arnav might become the knight in shining Armour...

Still karan issue is bit in the hanging ...

cant wait for your next update...

aesthetically written great one...

cheers


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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update love that arnav has realisesd his feelings for her hope he confessses when she is awake
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u so much for update :) I am absolutely loving how you are taking this forward :) loved the update...beautifully written totally...gonna read it again n again 😳 he said I LOVE U :)😲
loved the banner too :)
thank u so much n update soon :)
Edited by Dreamy123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful...

a very content update...satisfying and we are at peace seeing them as one in every way...

the best bit was arnav's confession..right words at the right moment. Khushi deserves it and so does Arnav.

perfect chapter...thank you.

sri.

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