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dis_arshi

@dis_arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

that was superb👏

see my guess was right

but i dont think that farhan loved khushi truly..coz if he loved her truly he never would stop her for further studies.. :/

he just made her life hell...and left her all alone in this cruel world :(

u think there is no magic..of coz there is..may be u cant feel it as u own ur work..but as readers we can feel the same magic there in ur stories..

i know im a new reader for u...but still i can feel the magic in ur stories..dont think like that..

be happy

take care :) :) :)

Edited by disnie - 12 years ago

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Bewakoof

@Bewakoof

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

Oh My Gawdd!!!!!! Tears are brimming in my eyes! It was again fantastic chappy Ishi!! Lovely! Aww poor Khushi! 😭😭 Thank god, Arnav didn't listen to her! Love Anjali-Khushi bonding...

amazing update...

Itna mast emotional update diya and yeh kya keh rahi hai?

Maar dalungi tujhe aisa phirse kaha toh! 😡

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dis_arshi

@dis_arshi

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

that was superb👏

see my guess was right

but i dont think that farhan loved khushi truly..coz if he loved her truly he never would stop her for further studies.. :/

he just made her life hell...and left her all alone in this cruel world :(

u think there is no magic..of coz there is..may be u cant feel it as u own ur work..but as readers we can feel the same magic there in ur stories..

i know im a new reader for u...but still i can feel the magic in ur stories..dont think like that..

be happy

take care :) :) :)

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nimmi

@aksuji

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

awesome ...superb update...looking forward to next update

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

i read all the 3 chapters together.
i hope u feel satisfied with yourself soon and start enjoying your writing.
i feel that arnav have heard it all.

khushi a widow hmm different concept

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Diya Bansal

@bansaldiya55

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

lovely ishi ...

sorry for the late comment

i am busy with my projects ..

loved the part ..

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#217

awesome...

money and religion matter in love.. khushi should've completed her studies.. as after marriage... she wasn't accepted in her home nor at farhan's

so is dead now and her family boycott their relation from her...

good khushi shared her pain with someone

continue soon

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Angel13

@Angel13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#218

great update

interesting..

thanks for pm

continue soon

Edited by Angel13 - 12 years ago

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FLGirl

@FLGirl

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#219

Great writers are humble.. You write such a great chapter and the say you dont think it was great. Let me tell you as a reader - It was fab! I have a feeling Arnav did hear the whole story from behind the door. Is that right?
There is a saying that a true friend is a person who you can speak to after several years and you will never feel that you havent talked in all these years. Judging by that, Anjali and kushi are awesome friends. It is so kind of her to offer to let Kushi stay.
In most Arshi stories, Kushi has to accept Arnav with a past. Here, the first thing that was different was Arnav is the talkative guy. Now, I cannot wait to see Arnav accept Kushi with such a past and also, with the very remote chance that her husband will come back from the dead due to some mixup. That would be the ultimate surprise turn in the story. I cannot wait to see what twists and turns you would take us through.

P.S - Loved the personal reply to each of the our comments last time. Appreciate it a lot.