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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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update soon we are waiting please
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Missing you ani!! Please update soon.😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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update soon yaar
its been a long time
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It has been like forever
Do update soon pleas
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome,fab,great...
Loved that story...
Plz do pm me when u update ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry!!!
For leaving the story mid way. Totally Forgot. Really Sorry.
After watching the last episode today.. Felt like I wanted to write again so here is part 61.
Please let me know what you think about it. Positive.. Negative.. Anything.

So here goes..

Part 61:



Around 9pm

Everyone is in the terrace. Kadambari Chachi, Pinky Chachi and Vanshika are chatting.
Inder and Madan Chachu are quietly complaining and gossiping about their wives. Shlok and Dabbu are planning on discovering something new.

Jeevika and Manvi are sitting on the swings.
There is light breeze and the trees are swaying.
Jeevika and Manvi both are quiet and have a smile on their face.

Viren, Virat and Dhruv come upstairs.
Virat: Dhruv I'm not taking you downstairs again!
Dhruv: I had to go potty..
Virat: Why didn't you finish your potty business before upstairs?
Viren smiles and nodes in disbelieve.
Dhruv wipes his hand on Virat's top.
Virat: Oye Monkey what are you doing?
Dhruv: Actually I forgot to wash my hands after I...
Virat: Eewww
Dhruv laughs.
Viren smiles.
Virat: Monkey you didn't wash your hands? * walking away from Dhruv*
Dhruv is just laughing.
Viren: Dhruv you seriously didn't wash your hands?
Dhruv: I washed my hands daddy; that too with soap. I'm a good boy
* proud of himself*
Viren: Good boy * smiles*
Dhruv: Chachu Masu I still need to wipe more on your top * runs after Virat*
Virat runs away from Dhruv.
Viren just smiles.
Virat: Oye Monkey stay away from me..
Dhruv is chashing Virat..
Everyone is getting entertained by this.
Viren walks and sits between Manvi and Jeevika.

Manvi: Jeeju what happening? Why is Dhruv chasing Virat?
Viren explains the story and they laugh.
Jeevika: Dhruvie is becoming a Badmash.. * giggles*
Manvi: After all he is with Virat so the company is to be blamed..
Jeevika: Stop being mean to my Devar
Manvi sticks her tongue at Jeevika..
Virat: Bhabhiii * running towards Jeevika*
Virat: Help me Bhabhi... Stop him...
Jeevika: Dhruvieee... Come here..
Dhruv obediently goes to Jeevika..
Dhruv: Yes Mummaa..
Jeevika: Why you troubling your Chachu Masu? * raises her eye brows*
Dhruv: Hmmm..
Jeevika: Is Dhruvie a bad boy?
Dhruv: No Mummaa.. I'm a good boy. I washed my hands after I did potty.. * innocent face*
Jeevika tries to control her laugh.
Virat: You washed your hand!? * shocked*
Manvi: Virat.. You seriously don't have a screw!
Virat: Oooh please.. I knew Dhruv washed his hands. Pffft I'm not stupid * looks away embarrassed*
Manvi laughs..
Jeevika: Good boy for washing your hand but its bad to trouble your Chachu Masu right?
Dhruv nodes..
Jeevika: So what will Dhruvie say..
Dhruv: Sorry Chachu Masu.. * looks innocently at Virat*
Virat walks to Dhruv and lifts him in his arms..
Virat: Don't get all innocent monkey..
Dhruv smiles..
Virat: That's my monkey..
Dhruv whispers something in Virat's ear; they both look at Viren, Jeevika and Manvi and walk away from there.
Manvi: Pakka.. They are up to something...
Viren: Hmm..
Jeevika: You two always get suspicious..
Manvi: Dii but look at them..
Viren: They are definitely up to something and I think I know what it is..
Manvi: What? * excited*
Viren: They want to have a water fight tomorrow.. * smiles*
Manvi: Oh God.. When will Virat grow up?
Viren and Jeevika smile.

Vanshika: Manvi... Jeevika * calls their name out*
Jeevika and Manvi: Jee Maa..
Vanshika: Did you two have your Laadoo?
Jeevika and Manvi node.
Manvi: Never getting pregnant again..
Viren laughs..
Manvi: Jeeju.. It's not funny. * innocent*
Viren: Sorry Sorry * hugs Manvi*
Jeevika: Maanu you never know * winks*
Manvi: Di. Seriously. It's done. No more children. I can't do this again. The morning sickness. Mood swings and all.
Jeevika: Accha Accha.. Don't get angry. Calm. Breath in and out
* smiles*
Viren: Don't worry Manvi.. Me and Jeevika will have more babies on your behalf * winks at Manvi*
Jeevika looks away shyly and embarrassed.
Manvi: Oh my god!! really!? When are you planning the next ones?
* winks*
Viren: Hmm.. Well.
Manvi points at Jeevika..
Viren and Manvi laugh at Jeevika..
Jeevika: Listen to me carefully.. No more.
Viren: But Jeevika you promised *holds her hand*
Manvi is controlling her laugher.
Jeevika: Manvi.. Besharam. You are still sitting here* embarrassed*
Manvi: Oh don't worry about me. I'm enjoying your conversation * winks*
Viren: Like you promised.. A total of 6 children.
Jeevika's month is wide open.
Manvi: Wow!! 6 six children. So 3 more to go. * tries to act surprised*
Jeevika gets up quickly from the swings and walks away shyly.
Manvi and Viren giggle at this.
Viren: Look at her...haaaye blushing. Now I seriously wish I have 6 children.
Manvi: Jeejuuu
Viren laughs.
Manvi: Jeeju go to Di now * nudges him*
Viren looks down shyly.
Manvi: Haaaiye. Two blushing couple equals 6 babies *laughs *
Viren: Badmash * pulls her cheek*
Viren walks to where Jeevika is standing.
Manvi: God bless them..

Virat and Dhruv walks towards Manvi who is still sitting on the swings..
Virat: MadamJi why alone?
Manvi: Just..
Virat smiles..
Dhruv runs to Vanshika..
Manvi: Can I say something to you..
Virat nodes..
Manvi: Couple of days more and our baby will be here..
Virat sighs..
Manvi: Im just really scared about Labour pains Virat.. * holds his hand*
Virat: Don't worry. Just hold my hand like this and I will there for you.
Don't think about the pain.. Think about the baby you will meet. Our baby.
Manvi smiles..
Virat: Just smile and bring our baby in this world.
Manvi: You make it sound so easy * lays her head on his shoulder*
Virat: It will be when you think positively.

Viren walks Jeevika and holds her hand..
Jeevika: VirenJii.. Where you serious?
Viren laughs..
Jeevika looks at him innocently..
Viren: I was kidding but if you are ready one more * serious*
Jeevika: Are you serious? * looks at him seriously*
Viren: Yes.. Even number of children. * smiles*
Jeevika smiles.
Viren: Let's handle these two twins first and then next one * holds her hand*
Jeevika looks down shyly.
Jeevika suddenly holds her stomach.
Viren: Are the babies kicking again?*smiles*
Jeevika: A contraction ..
Viren is shocked..
Viren: Are you sure?
Jeevika: This happened last time with Dhruv too. It started as a cramp and I thought it was nothing.
Viren: Okay okay.. * tries to calm himself*
Jeevika: VirenJi.. * smiles*
Viren: You are not joking right?
* looks at her scared*
Jeevika: No VirenJi..* holds her stomach again and shuts her eyes*
Viren: Oh god. Are you okay?
Jeevika: Im okay. We need to go to the hospital now.. Before it gets worse.
Viren: But you still have 3 weeks left *confused and talking to himself*
Jeevika: VirenJi Pleaaase
Viren: Okay Okay.. Let's go * holds her hand*
Viren: Everyone Jeevika is having minor contractions
Everyone gets up quickly..
Kadambari: Haaaiye ni. * excited*
Manvi and Virat coming rushing towards them.
Manvi: Yaaay * happy*
Viren: I think let's just go to the hospital before the contractions get more frequent.
Jeevika holds her stomach again..
Viren: Yes yes.. Sorry Jeevika.
Virat: I'll come Bhai.
Viren: Don't be silly. Manvi needs you here.
Vanshika: Inder and me will go. Rest of you stay here.
Manvi: But I want to come.
Vanshika: Beta please.. You take care of yourself.
Dhruv: Where is everyone going?
Manvi: The two babies are going to come * hugs Dhruv*
Dhruv: Yaaay * hugs Manvi*
Dhruv walks to Jeevika and touches her stomach.
Dhruv: Be good babies and don't trouble Mummaa.
Jeevika: My good Bacha.. You stay here. Mummaa is going hospital and will bring two babies with her when she comes back. You be a good boy and go to sleep.
Dhruv nodes.
Jeevika: Love you Dhruvie..
Dhruv: Love you Mummaa..
Viren: Chalo let's go.

Inder, Vanshika, Jeevika and Viren leave for hospital.

Everyone else go downstairs and inform Beeji, Bade Beeji, Swamini and Dadaji.


Anika

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Posted: 12 years ago
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finally you updated...loved to read the update after ages...keep on updating it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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after so many days you update awesome update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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finally update and its
nice update

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