Ariya:FF fir mila mujhe saccha pyaar thread 2 link pg-51 8/11 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Nice prologue.
Waiting for the main story.
Do pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NOTE
kya mujhe koi idea de sakta hai ki mai riya ki entry kaise karva u ha lekin aise ki arjun use dekta rehe jaye or vo ek strong or acchi cop ho
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mastmegha22

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kya mujhe koi idea de sakta hai ki mai riya ki entry kaise karva u ha lekin aise ki arjun use dekta rehe jaye or vo ek strong or acchi cop ho


umm...
Riya ki entry ek case ke dauran karwao,as in,in the post of a senior police officer.
Jab ETF ek crime scene pe investigation kar rahi hoti hai,show that,Rathod gets a call from the comissioner and he is informed that a new officer is joining ETF and she will directly meet u at the crime scene.

Sumthing like this...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Nice prologue.
Waiting for the story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely prologue...!!!
continue soon...!!
waiting for the story...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 1

AAj Sikender ko mare hua ek mahina ho gaya hai. Sab bahut khush hai khaskar ki Arjun kyuki usne apni roshni ki maut ka badla le liya h. Aab vo khush rehne laga hai. Uski or rathore ki dosti or bhi majboot ho gaye. Dono ne patchup kar liya. Vo shree or chotu ke saath bhi waqt gujar tha hai. Vo aab pehle jaisa akdhu nhi rha. Lekin phir bhi vo khali mehsoos karta hai.

It was a usual day. After the case was over they were doing paperwork. After finish they were going to home when suddenly Rathore phone ring.

Rathore: jai hind sir.
Commissioner sir: jai hind. Rathore i want to talk to u something.
Rathore: kahiye sir.
CS(i use short form): as ETF doing much work. I appreciate this. Sare case tumlog acchi se solve karte ho. I want that now ETF will not give current cases.
Rathore: Why sir?
CS: because i want all of you to take rest atlest just four or five days. Thats why after your holiday I will give all of u lots of work. Understand
rathore: ji sir and thankyou.
CS: welcome enjoy and jai hind.
Rathore: jai hind sir.
All look to rathore. Rathore said to team
rathore: guys commissioner sir ka call tha vo abhi ETF ko koi case nhi dena chahate.
All: kyun
Rathore:because ETF is on holiday.
All: kya
Rathore: haan sir ne hume char din ki chutti di hai.
Shree: excitedly such sir
rathore: haan shree
Aisha: fir to maza aaye ga
Chotu:yes
Rathore: i think we should go for a picnic. What says.
All says yes except arjun.
Rathore: arjun iss team main shayad tum bhi ho?
Arjun: sam haan mai bhi janta hu magar mera man nhi hai tum log jao.
Liza: plss sir aap bhi chaliye na ye picnic hamare relax kai liye hai
chotu: haan sir chaliye na hum vaha pe khub maze karenge or khub khana bhi khayenge.
Aisha: chotu hum vaha khana khane nhi masti or ghum ne jaa rhe h kyun shree.
Shree: ha bilkul or arjun sir plss aapko bhi chalna pade ga.
Arjun: ok i will go lekin jaayenge kaha.
All were thinking when suddenly Liza said
Liza: kyun na hum sab log Shimla chale. It is a nice place.
All said yes we will go shimla.
Rathore: all right so guyes its decide we will go shimla by tomorrow at 12pm. So we will meet at 11am in office. Ok guyes so lets call the day off.

Precap
all were going to shimla. Every body enjoying when suddenly chotu becomes sad.

How was this? Plss comment

Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
kewl update!!!!
ab chale shimla haan...!!
precap looks intersting...
plz cont soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Niceee startt ..
cs ne holliday de diya..
all goning shimla..
grate Conti soon..
well right dr
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start... ETF going on Holiday cool update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
lovely post dr.

watng fr riya's entry.

continue soon.


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