Virman FF - Kaise imtihai leti hai yeh zindagi - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
precap -

Virat's eyes get watery nt able to say anything the only reaction that he had was he looked at manvi with one tear about to come out of his eye wen all of a sudden

Viren – (hugging Virat ) virat congratulations ( ten he looks up ar virat with no reaction) virat r u not happy

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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
nice story
precap was interesting
plzz update it soon
Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Part 4

Virat's eyes get watery nt able to say anything the only reaction that he had was he looked at manvi with one tear about to come out of his eye wen all of a sudden

Viren ' (hugging Virat) Virat congratulations ( ten he looks up at Virat with no reaction) Virat r u not happy

But still there was no reaction from Virat

Viren ' (shouting) Virat wat happen kyat u khush nahi hai

Dadaji ' hai tu kuch bol ku nahi raha r u not happy that u are gonna be a father

Virat ' no no nothing like that it jst feels like all my dreams have finally become true with no doubt

Then he gets over excited and starts jumping

Virat ' im gonna become a father (as loud as he could)

Viren ' wat is it with u once u don't speak and once u r as loud as 1000 kids

Everyone laughs out loud seeing hw Virat changes his reaction all of a sudden

Dadaji ' I think we should all leave and leave Virat n Manvi alone for a while

Viren- dr ill drop u to the door

Viren picks up the dr's bag n walks out followed by the rest of family members

After a while Manvi wakes up seeing virat infront of her upset

Manvi ' virat wat happened. N y r u update?

Virat ' manvi ( and sighs as if he is really upset)

Manvi ' wat happened? Tell me virat (getting worries)

Virat ' ( give a small smile) see baby how worried ur mommy is she doesn't evn knw u r inside her

Manvi- (with a opened mouth) u mean I am pregnant

Virat ' on my god hw did u guess? (sarcastically)

Manvi punch virat and ten hugged him very tightly in all this excitement they almost forgot that they didn't do anything all day and its nearly dinner time.

So they go down for dinner

The whole family ' Congratulations manvi virat

Virman ' thank u

Every one has there dinner and go to there room .

Virman room

Virat: i am sooo happy that we are going to be parents

Manvi smiles at Virat and say i am also very happy i am going to be a mother and then she blushes because Virat is smiling at her and hugs her

Virat: Manvi I love u

Manvi: I love u too

Virat ' manvi

Manvi ' ummm

Virat ' I have another gud news for u'.

Hey guyz could u plz comment and tell me how it was

N does anyone hv any guesses wat the second good news is are they going aboard or is there something more than that plez give me ur thought

Edited by Sia12345 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Aaawww cho chweett
I thought virat myt be upset or sumthin bt he's over the moon jumping around so cute
I cnt wait to kno nw wats the surprise ooohhh!!!!
Posted: 12 years ago
#25
thanks for commenting and reading my story
Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Huma0301

Aaawww cho chweett
I thought virat myt be upset or sumthin bt he's over the moon jumping around so cute
I cnt wait to kno nw wats the surprise ooohhh!!!!

woww i didnt expect u to post so soon do u think i should continue it or jst leave it as it is
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
very nice plzzz update next prt soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28


It ws brilliant

U should cnt sn and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Sia12345


woww i didnt expect u to post so soon do u think i should continue it or jst leave it as it is


Cum on sia y wud u wanna leave it
Of course continue I think ur gettin quite a gud response
So go for it n I think it'll Giv u very gud practice n u can write many more
(n dnt forget in sure it probably help in exams n course wrk cuz I've been through that so I kno )
Bt yh u really shud continue
Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Huma0301


Cum on sia y wud u wanna leave it
Of course continue I think ur gettin quite a gud response
So go for it n I think it'll Giv u very gud practice n u can write many more
(n dnt forget in sure it probably help in exams n course wrk cuz I've been through that so I kno )
Bt yh u really shud continue

thanks lol

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