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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Beautiful, just beautiful. You've robbed me of words. i cried with Arnav, so glad she fought back.

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GunM

@GunM

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

a very heart wrenching update...WOW

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

That was amazing dear!

The emotions you brought about through Arnav and Khushi were exceptional!

I've been on a hospital bed before and I've also been in the other side and I recognize both feels of just wanting that person to wake up and also pushing yourself to wake up for someone else.

Just amazing! I wish there was more!

Mwah! Do come back with more such stories soon! <3

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suwin

@suwin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

That was really beautiful OS...
Thanks for the PM..

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723461

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP
That was amazing dear!

The emotions you brought about through Arnav and Khushi were exceptional!

I've been on a hospital bed before and I've also been in the other side and I recognize both feels of just wanting that person to wake up and also pushing yourself to wake up for someone else.

Just amazing! I wish there was more!

Mwah! Do come back with more such stories soon! <3

Cannot thank you enough for this heartfelt reply! Just made my day...I just couldn't get myself to make the ending sad...I couldn't leave them like that ;)

For readers and writers like you, I continue even after the show has ended<3

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MamiaRehman

@MamiaRehman

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Ohh GOD... u r so brave that u have write something which i was afraid to read about... trust me... last 2 lines i have read 3 times just to make sure yes she made it... it feels so real...

thumps up...👍🏼

u have done full Justice with this concept...superb

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

uuufff.This made me cry..Such intensity,,so beautifully written,,full of emotions, pain..I just loved it to core..U r awesome writer..T hankkss a ton for pm dear...

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musicfan5

@musicfan5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Awesome...I was holding my breath till the end...

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indiavizion

@indiavizion

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

that was really a nail biting OS u have written, and glad Khushi made it & came back to arnav

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thebubblespop12

@thebubblespop12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

That was amazing!! I loved it. I could feel Arnav's pain and hopelessness! Poor Khushi, she must have been so confused and scared. But our Khushi is storm and she found her way out!