T.S ArHi: T3SHIH: Completed - Page 33

I loved the way, you wrote the story as a narration to new members of the family. A exceptionally well written update with so much of emotions & feelings.. Super Duper Amazing update, loved it. Arnav-Khushi scene in the end was so heart wrenching, beautifully portrayed, simply beautiful.

Originally posted by: jahnvi.luvs.ASR

i just loved the update...beautifully written dialogues...though i was somewhere feeling bad for their separation but well it was inevitable...and the conversation between arnav and khushi was the most beautiful one... thanks for update n pm :)

Originally posted by: diyadivya

fab updt

Originally posted by: deepti1906

the way they got separated was really painful...😭

i couldn't see them like that... i don't know whether what she did was right or wrong but one thing i know is that three people suffered because of that decision...😭

but i hope everything would be okay soon... they both deserves the happiness in their lives...:')

wonderful update...👏

do update soon...😊😊

Originally posted by: RandomGirl

superb update..

Originally posted by: Amiarisme

my u updated it after so long.
khushi did the right thing but i can not help feel sad tht how the consequences of a single act can ruin so much.
i really dnt knw how people sleep with each other by mistake so i am trying not to be judgemental but i dnt like arnav and la alot here.

Originally posted by: yappingduck

simply fabulous.loved it;

Originally posted by: flowers4u

awesome story, loved it...looking forward to the eepilogue

Originally posted by: hatelove_1

wow

Originally posted by: shree10

I thought you forgot this TS. but you updated after a long time and now I am waiting for epilogue as there are still some things left unanswered. I hope you wont delay much.