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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshix144

What an emotionally charged chapter, well done Rami that was fabulous work! Khushi is in Comma and does not respond to anyone but her little angel! I think she is the only one who deserves her Massi the rest should suffer more, make them suffer specially arnav and now he apologises for being a moron! Saying sorry is not enough, as they say sorry doesn't cut it he has to really prove hismelf via actions no anger is an excuse for how he shunned her. Payal too, she deserves worse treatment. Precap is scary because maybe we don't want Khushi to suffer from memory loss but hmm maybe you want us to believe that but in reality she will tell them that they don't exist for her anymore??? Cause that will be great😆 I can't wait to see what you do next, do make Arnav and Payal suffer some more ok? :D😆 Great job as usual! 👏


ur ryt dear nt a sry is enuf they will surely suffer😆 😆 😆
Thank u😉 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: M1A1

Read chap 17 & 18😉

Emotional updates Rami 😭

Aakash received the msg & realised everything 😃

Omg!!! He slapped Arnav 😲

Thank god Arnav realised his mistake & he wants to appologize to Khushi 😊

Khushi's accident no...😭 Poor girl 😔

Arnav is also crying 😔

Thank god Khushi is out of danger 😃

Akash got angry on Payal 😃 She deserves that 😉

Khushi responded after hearing Pari's voice 😃

But Precap 😲😔

Khushi lost her memory 😔

Waiting 4 the next update!!!

Thnx 4 pm 🤗

Thanks mohe dearie😃 😃 😃 😃
dnt wry no memory loss chap here😉 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sooryalekshmi

Nice update..
Very emotional one...
Seeing khushi's condition...i too cried...
And memory loss...
Oh god...

thank u😆 😆 😆 😆
sry fr making u cry 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago

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PART 19



Sry all fr being so late..I had a minor accident and my eye was injured so was in bed rest..now that am little fine am here..Coulnt proof check and the update is also small..Bare with me this time..Shorieee😲 😲 😲 😲 😲


Akash and arnav stood there shocked seeing khushi's pulse rate and heartbeats showing signs of improvement hearing pari's voice..

Pari was holding khushi's face by now and khushi was trying to open her eyelids but failing miserably..

Arnav and akash rushed towards the bedside and saw the movements of khushi..Akash took pari in his arms and wiped her tears..Arnav pressed the emergency button by which the nurses n doctors arrived into the room..

Arnav and akash was sent out..Soon the doc came outside and said Khushi has started responding to treatment and she would recover soon..

By now everyone understood how much pari mean to khushi..Everyone was happy..Arnav kissed pari on her cheeks..But pari pushed him away with her small hands and turned her face to the crook of akash;'s neck..

Payal was shocked by this behavior of pari..She never behaved this way with anyone..She came forward and chided pari for doing so..Arnav was little shaken up by the way the little soul turned him down..

Pari stared at payal and said "Papa ask muma n chachu not to talk with me..Am katti with them..They beat n scold masi"

Arnav n payal was ashamed of themselves for reacing such way in the railway station with khushi that too infront of the baby..Now they hung their heads down without able to face the baby's complaints..

After a hour of check up doc called Raizada brothers to his cabin..When they entered he gave them a smile and asked them to take the seat'.

"Am really wondering how does the patient reacted to your words..i have never seen such a drastic change in person's health within minutes..Khushi is improving..She needs complete rest..Her leg is broken ..it will take a month to make her walk properly..her blood is lost heavily'We have been doin our best by giving her blood but she also needs food intake which will make her blood secret..So give her proper food.As she as come out of a dangerous situation don't strees her ..Take care of her properly.."

Arnav and akash keenly listened to their talks and exited..

A nurse came towards them an handed over a medicine slip ..Akash readily agreed to get the medicines..
As buaji and nani was tired and have to take care of pari they both saw khushi first when she was sleeping and went home..Payal and arnav made sure khushi is shifted to her room from ICU properly and enterd the room..Akash was discussing about her medicines with the doctor'

It was when khushi eye balls moved and she woke up..Arnav who was all the while looking at her rushed towards her side and took her hands in his and said

"Khushi am sry khushi"

"WHO ARE YOU?" khushi asked resting herself well on the pillow behind her..

Payal jerked up from the process of making juice and looked at khushi "Choti he he is arnav..dont you know him?"

"Who are you??" she asked looking at payal..

Both were hell shocked..They never expected khushi to react like this..By anymeans has hse lost her memory??

They were looking at eachother bewildered when the door opened and akash stepped in..

Khushi face instantly relaxed and a knowing look came into her face..Akash face shoot up to see her awake and sitting comfortably..

He all the way rushed to her side and sat beside her..

"Chotttii..Did you even know what have u done??How could you be so careless haan???Is this the way a matured girl will react??cant u see or think fr a miunte..Why didn't u think about me for a minute'Do you think I also would have accused u??That's why u messaged me a sry??OMG am happy now that ur back.."

Akash was going on and on when payal kept her hands on his shoulders and arnav said "Bhai she is nt remembering us.."

Akash looked up and looked into khushi's eyes which was by now filled with tears'He was about to speak up when her voice stopped him..

"Jiju am sry.." with that she throwed herself on his arms and started crying.

For a minute Arnav and nainatar could not understand anything..How come she has forgotten them but not akash'

"Khushi.." both uttered and looked at her..

But no answer came from her side to them all she spoke was to akash "am sry jiju I decided everything in a haste.i shuld have confronted on you the first day itself and spoken the truth..But I was scraed to face the reality..What if you would have married to someone else and have fooled my jj..and would have fooled her..I don't want her to break down and go into depression jiju..that's why I planned a revenge..But sach mei jiju I never was able to take that revenge on him..

Though I was trying but I never succeded..After seeing her photos in room only I confirmed that ur still in her thoughts..I went to say her but but'"

Her voice broke after that she wasnot able to dechiper her thought more than that..All she needed now was a warm shoulder to share her pain and a fatherly hug to let her emotions drain in that and she gt that from her jiju'

Payal and arnav was shocked beyond limits..She didn't forget them but never wanted to realize them or react to them,..

PM's later...

I know this has been a crapy one but shorie fr the disappoinment will come back with a good update quickly


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Edited by Rami92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome!!!!!
I hope khushi will not forgive payal and arnav so easily
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yeppi I am in the first page and commented before Ur pm.
Ho my how r u now. Stay carefully and take care of urself dear.
Now coming to the update yep she reacted the way I expected. Ho god really she is been hurted too much. Hope she forgives them and ya I know I am evil waiting for the wooeing and kajoling of the ASR . Waiting for the next big update.
Edited by JCJS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love the update I really though Khushi lost her memory but she didn't and she didn't want to respond to them on purpose anyways loved it and the bond khushi and aakash share
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow amazing story ...just found now whilst browsing
Couldn't put down till finished all chapters
Very unique plot with writing that makes u feel right in the story
This story seems to have all sadness fun humour romance & of course anger n jealousy ... My fav
Love the characters too Arnav as a playboy n khushi as a confident & sassy girl can easily picture it
Had to laugh for first time Arnav called his nani sexy n the wee tale behind it made it more funny
Loved khushis plan to ignore him worked a treat making it like a challenge for him
U could see their relation slowly changing throughout the chapters
Gotta say out of all 19 chapters there r to many scenes I liked but a few stood out most
1st when Akaash n Arnav met pari, the way they bonded with her straight away n how she asked to call Akaash pa
Was nearly in tears
2ndly I was in tears when truth came out N Arnav buaji n Payal slapped n were calling khushi names I was practically screaming at the screen that why they blaming her . I know Arnav had a reason to be upset but to call her gold digger that was rubbish as for Payal n buaji how can they act like that she took care of them ... Really?!?!?!?!? ...oh god they're I go again lol
3rdly jumping for joy when Akaash took khushis side n put the others in their place ...was best feeling ever after what I read moments b4 ( shows how good story is when u get ingrossed in story like I did)
N finally omg after the accident how khushi only responded to her wee pari's voice shows how much she means to her its almost like khushis her mum not Payal
Loved how wee Pari in her own innocent way snubbed her mum n her uncle for what they did
Can't wait to see what happens now especially if lav finds out
Will she stay at RM n only talk to Akaash Pari n Nani now? N will she decide to go back to Mumbai after ?
Hoping to see a lot of repenting n wooing fae Arnav so he doesn't loose her
Plz plz plz pm me with future updates not want to miss owt
N also plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it ❤️
im really sorry about ur accident
hope u recover soon
n also update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww hope she lfinds her strength to deal with things 😕

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