Well i have a million things to say so please brace yourself.
I just read the complete story, i have been away for a long time. So thanks for continuing to send me notifications.
This story had started so differently, i was with the story in the starting, till chp 3 and during those three chps i felt nothing could change the arnav u had created for this story. While i loved the arnav in late, despised in destroyed, felt sorry for in unconditional, i really hated the one in here. But gradually i have started liking this character. In one chapter u changed my perception of arnav, wow! 😊
Few lines throughout the chps have been awesome, my fav is by anjali,
'They can eat their egos for dinner.' While she is the same Anjali she is different. 🤣
Payal is my absolute fav. Oh man she is her fiery best, just the way an elder sis would be. I guess u are like this?
And akash, oh boy, flirty much!!! Wow! The lines u have given him are amazing. His character is also so different and well made. With cool calculation to a perfect flirt! Hats off!
And this is the longest comment i have ever written on any story. Truthfully i was a little skeptical on reading the story after the three updated, but right now, i want an early update.
You are a wonderful writter. 👏
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