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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey dear thanks for the email.

Update was lovely. I simply love Arshi's interactions. I think Arnav should know how much jealous Khushi becomes because of the girls in her college who drool over Arnav.😉 Also I think Arshi's relationship should make some progress in terms of little bit romance and love.

Please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice Update!

Loved their chat outside the college.Arnav being very funny with his reactions towards Khushi.Liked the way she got jealous when she heard those girls.Its going to be amusing when Arnav will realise it.I liked that she referred his home as 'ours'.Slowly she is acknowlegding him to be part of her world ,and she his.

Also,I liked that she knew he would come.And he being restless due to her absence .

That part in Kitchen was sweet.
Payal..well,she wont be nice to him this easily.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsum update.
khushi's trust 4 arnav is vry much.
d jealousy part was 2 gud, khushi didn't wan arnav 2 cum out of d car buhahaha... i didn't xpect less den dis.
payal n arnav r havin a cold war n payal is alwaz alert.
i really feel arnav did purposely 2 c payal's reaction by cumin closer while talkin 2 khushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOvely update as usual...😊...Cant wait to know the reaction of Arnav when he comes to know about KHuhsii's behaviour... Loved it ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
HEYYY... WOWWW ARNIEEE BOY BEEEN SUCH A SWEETHRT... HMMM.. MERKO BHI EK AISA DEDE NAA YAAAR...! WA IS AAKASH UPTO..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Well i have a million things to say so please brace yourself.

I just read the complete story, i have been away for a long time. So thanks for continuing to send me notifications.

This story had started so differently, i was with the story in the starting, till chp 3 and during those three chps i felt nothing could change the arnav u had created for this story. While i loved the arnav in late, despised in destroyed, felt sorry for in unconditional, i really hated the one in here. But gradually i have started liking this character. In one chapter u changed my perception of arnav, wow! 😊

Few lines throughout the chps have been awesome, my fav is by anjali,
'They can eat their egos for dinner.' While she is the same Anjali she is different. 🤣

Payal is my absolute fav. Oh man she is her fiery best, just the way an elder sis would be. I guess u are like this?
And akash, oh boy, flirty much!!! Wow! The lines u have given him are amazing. His character is also so different and well made. With cool calculation to a perfect flirt! Hats off!

And this is the longest comment i have ever written on any story. Truthfully i was a little skeptical on reading the story after the three updated, but right now, i want an early update.


You are a wonderful writter. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb!! Arnav was being so sweet but what is Akash upto.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb part... I am loving the way their relationship is progressing and without even realizing they are becoming a part of each other...
Khusi is so jealous of those bimboos in the clg. So they had passed such comments on her and that's the reason for her upset mood. I hope Arnav realizes this that Khusi's wired behavior about hot sun is actually her possessiveness on him...
How sweet of him that he took her to her house and so restless with her absence that he came to pick her up. He even made himself comfortable there..
And Khusi knew that he ll come so she had already placed the extra plate and made food for her liking. I am glad that Arnav noticed this .. And Khusi's answer about trust couldn't have come in better time..

Akash knew Arnav will always fulfill Khusi's wish and so cleverly he made his plan.. But what he had forgot is he had to face Payal who is feisty as Fire .. I love this Payal for not forgetting not forgiving Arnav yet... But she's getting attracted to akash and only time will tell how it ll go from here...

continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update.. Im loving the development in their relationship.. Is that jealousy from Khushi's side..? 😳 They're coming closer.. Awww, Arnav came at their place and even spent some time with them.. Thats so sweet of him... Payal n her parents are moving away and of course Arnav doesnt want his wifey dearest to be heartbroken and so he asked.. Oh gosh, I love the guy...
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Posted: 12 years ago


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