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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Loved it... just loved it!
You write these in real descriptive style which makes them stand out...
Awesome one but I wish you had continued a bit more 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Beautifully written..

Thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
omg! I can't express you hw much i love ur os...
this the just so perfect. and the letter part was just awesome.
You know I love writing letters but nowadays because of technical adventures we never write letters.
This story reminds me one my sister's daughter story. Her husband works in ship and he has to travel Europe every time different country. loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Aww, that was really beautiful! *Haiye* Certainly made me smile. Great job! Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: archmink

U made me cry dammit ... Had anyone ever told you that you are versatile writer .. This is n epic story it's brilliantly written it's worth coming back 2nd 4th 9th time to read over n over n still want have enughf of it ...
It's sooo Very passionate n emotional
Loooved it .. u r a gifted writer girlfriend ... be it yr oneshots or be it a secrete diary anything u write is worth reading over n over ... keep up


@BOLD---Wow. Seriously. Best compliments ever. I can't thank you enough. I'm glad that you liked my story. It's comments like this which make me want to write more and more and give me ideas. Truly encouraging.
So thank you!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: dia.forever

dear lovely author


you have no idea what you have done to me with this marvellous and innovative piece of urs. Its so heart warming and lovely, I can't tell you in words.I felt like I was living the moments of arnav and khushi through their letters. I was literally lost into it😳
I am going to read it once again, but let me tell u, you are very talented and innovative as well. Do keep writing and giving such lovely treats ( oh..!!...treat just reminded me of khushi's cupcake😛
While I was reading one of arnav's letter to khushi, where he poured out his loneliness, my heart went out to him. And what to say about khushi, she is a true angel and that too the sweetest one. I am glad that arnav is not diabetic here ( or so I assume from his demands of cupcakes in his letters ), otherwise poor guy would have missed out on the real sweetness😉😳
When I read his confession of love in that letter...OMG...I felt my heart stopped for a second, suchi😳...I felt like kissing him then and there☺️...and that surely FREAKED me out🤢
And when arnav stepped out of the airport, I felt so excited as if it was my homecoming...lol😆
anyways...u could imagine my state of mind through my words...seriously, just look at what I have written. It gives me a feel of letter hangover of arshi😆
hats off to u gal🤗🤗...n hug for this outstanding piece of work...for giving in so much time and effort n carving it out on paper with so much perfection😊

your new fan😳

P.S- I like smith...think he's cute😳



This is certainly the longest comment I've ever received for an OS. And seriously, I can't thank you enough. I crave for such comments.
Dia, I'm so very glad that you read my work. And I feel like being real greedy 'coz I want you to read all my works.
Seriously, what a lovely comment. The fact that you could connect with Arnav makes me feel very satisfied as a writer.
Also, I like Smith myself. Thank you for giving him attention :-P

<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Anupama.

Like it? Like it? I loved it,damn it..

Thats why i love such over the time kind of stories..its not like you see each other and fall in love. Gradual ones are more understandable to me.

It would really be unappropriate if i analyse and dissect and comment on it regarding this os..coz its so beautiful,each letter,every way that they referred to each other and it really warmed up my heart to read it..

I believe this is the best fic you've written so far. And one of the fantastic that i've read of all others.

P.S- kindly add a kiss in the end. M serious. If its too scandalous, in the 18th century or whatever century it is,in public,then somewhere secluded. :D After mentioning kiss so many times,you did'nt give that!!
Look at me,after feasting on the whole story..ungrateful reader asking for more. :D but anyways,ADD IT! 8-)


Aww, Anupama, thanks so much for the lovely comment and such big compliments ☺️ I lovee it!
I myself like the gradual love stories, makes more sense to me.

And...😆 It's actually not the 1800s, but 1900s, before there were any kinds of internet, phones etc etc.
I really wanted them to kiss, I swear. But it just din't fit. Well...I could have added, you are right. Maybe when I come up with a nice enough scene, I'll add it. But kissing at the Airport would definitely get a little scandalous. 😃
Thanks again.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: aarrsshhii

That was one very sweet story... sweet like her cakes n his love... simple n sublime. ..
Actly it reminded me of my frnd... who is a sailor... v used to exchange alot of loong mails if not letters ...n tht was indeed a nice time... telling about wats hppning here in d country n d places thy visited.. well then life gt busy n gradually v lost touch.. d nxt thng am gonna do is defntly mail him again :-)


You should definitely mail him. I'm sure he'd like it 😊

And thanks for the comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
wondrful update. Hats off 2 u 2 write a long one. Beautifuly written
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Dude this was too good! When I started reading it, I was looking forward to the replys too!! Funny me! But I suppose it shows how equally I was connected with the story!

And the salutations! Man they were the best and the highlight of the story!!

I was fearing where like six degrees this would also end up them not being together but just via letters! Thank god he reached home! And she found her heart!

Superb lady!

Cheers

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