Chasing Dreams Thd3- Chp23 Pg102, Thd 4 Link Pg141 - Page 74

Originally posted by: IronButterfly

"Stop for a second, enjoy the beauty, feel the magic, drink it in because it won't last forever. The romance will fade, things will happen, people will change, love will die. But, maybe not today."

So this is the start of a new journey and obviously both are nervous about it though each of them has a different way of showing it.

Nerves, jitter and excitement, all part of a first date.

He really tried to make it special for her.

Both are going with the flow and enjoying the moment.

Please don't take it as criticism but i found this chapter to be rushed & a bit too fast paced. Khushi's behaviour struck me as odd and unnatural. She came across as way too comfortable with him. Almost seemed out of character. As your regular reader i didn't find that usual spark and naturalness in this chapter which i associate with you.

Just sharing what i felt, no offense =)

Thanks for your honest comment. I welcome both negative and positive comments.

I accpet your criticism and hope to stay true to the characters in the next update.

Arnav can cook? Wow! So Khushi lied to her parents! I cant blame Khushi's parents for thinking about her further and special parents with our background it become their dream to find nice guy for their daughter. But either can we blame Khushi for making her choice. Hope her choice is right and can come clean with her parents about her relationship with Arnav! Beautiful chapter!

this arnav is so different from the image we have so far

reading this ff story feel so right i am just in awe of this story and every chapter man

Awww its such a beautiful and amazing update!!!!!!!

Good update. Khushi learning more about Arnav.waiting for the next one.

NAACH B ...I GUESS YOU MISSED OUT ON THIS ONE ON YOUR

it feels so right...one day it will be everything arnav!

NB...u wrote the word..Khushi makes to feel Arnav "complete"...she is right for him...