ArHi SS: An Apate Affair# 1; *Completed*

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Nobody can beat you in humour. So, waiting!

Love the title. Arnav has to be the devious one, or maybe his family?

Great to see you writing a story full of himour. I love your sense of humour.

It is normalthe family was upset. A picture of Arnavkissing Sheetal is surely going to effect them.

Waiting to see how Arnav wheedles his way out of this situation.

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

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+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Edited comment on Page 1. 😊

This is the first time ever that I am on page one of a brand new story!

Thank you, Saiyu.

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Jessie

@jessjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Arnav caught in the act !!!! 🤣

Will be waiting for the next part.

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Beautiful start!

loved it.
Arnav getting caught ,and has he lied to them about the girlfriend?Why I feel he simply madeup the GF thing for Anjali.

Akaash..😆..cute!
I love mamiji 'aap shutup hi karliyo' dialogue to Mamaji😆its my fav.

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

this was one of the best starts i have read in a long time.

i used to love the di-chote bond .. and that scene with the picture that spoke a million words.. you wrote it so well that i can actually see arnav's facial expressions when i read that. 👏

thank you for making arnav say that sheetal is not bridal wear material 🤗

great beginning. thanks for sharing your talent with us❤️

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Firstly fabulous title suggestion by Vee.

Im glad you are writing another story. So this SS is going to be inspired by some of the key elements of IPK, good going. A nice way to pay homage to the show. I still cant get myself to recollect IPK memories in a nice way, so I have been keeping away from watching old episodes.

So Arnav has been busy giving tonsil action to Sheetal... and that gets published in a newspaper. Yuck.. Now Im interested to see is Kushi will play the role of his fake girl friend and tame the man that he is.

P.S- Juhi is a fab friend and is kindhearted. Em glad you have dedicated this chapter to her.

BTW have you read Sins, you should if you haven't. It's her best.

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Arati

@RTlicious

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Hey!

A new SS...loved chapter 1! M guessing the fake girlfriend is Khushi???

Can't wait for the next update!

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Ayaat

@Ayaat1216

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

That was really good! Lol
Arnav Singh Raizada caught in the act hehe
Great first chapter, PM me please 😊

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Absolutely love the title & the concept. You are one of my top 3 writers on the forum & I'm so excited that your starting a new story & that too a funny one.

Love your mamiji dialogues! Those are so difficult to come up with.

Thank you for reminding us of all that was good with our show. I miss it everyday!!

So ready to see where this story goes.