KriYansh FF- Shadows of the Past (Epilogue)

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

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Posted: 12 years ago

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before i start with my comment am so so so sorry for not commenting u al this while from around chap16 onwards.. i got time only today to read coz i was busy with my messed up life... sorry...

coming to d chapters it awesome.. last few chaps made me teary out of happiness n pain which u depicted wonderfully in d updates.. ur a brilliant writer.. i loved d updates ... d way u wrote abt kria's past abt her broken marriage n jia n abt how karan scolded her for drinking n love which rey had for kria n d way they r together as a 1 soul.. rahul realizing his love for kaddy n d way he had screwed everything up n later patch up.. KR getting engaged n rahul wanting cal kria mom was al superb n brilliantly penned... loved this ff from start.. i missed al last chaps that its shocking that this ff s over n waiting for is epilogue..

ps: even return to paradise s stil pending ll read n comment soon.. sorry for delay...

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Soha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#662

Chapter 21..

As always accept my apology first for again being late.😳.But see m catching up as I m on chapter 21 n u have updated till 23 so seems to be closer..

So the chapter...KriYaansh spent a night together...I am glad that everything is getting solved between them..😊

Rahul...Good that he talked to Kriya 😳 as mujhe uss per buhut ghussa char raha tha..😡

Update was awesome as a whole..👏👍🏼

Thanks 4 d pm,

Soha!

Edited by Sohad3fan - 12 years ago

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Soha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#663

Chapter 22

Loved d surprise...😃

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Soha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#664

Chapter 23

Yeah I m finally on chp 23...😎

Woah Kaddy maan gayi n they r gng to Miami..😲

At last I liked dem..😊

Rahul is gonna call Kriya mum..I loved dis prt..👏

KriYaansh getting married...Wow..☺️

I am gonna miss this ff.😔..I mean it!

I want u to continue but I think it was perfect and u put ur every effort in it so I guess u should relax..I am really happy wid d way it turned out 2 be..👍🏼

Waiting 4 d prologue..

Soha!

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magical_mania

@magical_mania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#665

Originally posted by: yogini64
While reading the update... I was sure... its the last update...

See ... I know you so well... 😛

Everything sorted out... & picture looks pretty clear...😊

No hustle bustle... & on perfect pace... perfect ending...😃

This ff was truly one of its kind...👏

People do have some unfortunate stories in their lives ... still they find their soulmate sooner or later...🤗

I'm glad they are getting married...😉

And kriya knocked in some sense in rahul... & he landed to kaddy's house... good 😛

wow... he's setting his life in accordance with her... atleast thats the trait-- he got from his father... 👍🏼

Rofl... It always takes me total 40 mins to read n review your story ...😆

But today it took me just 13 mins to read... & say 15 mins for review... lol... length toh achhi hi h... but shayad aaj tune end karte karte usual size me ghapla kar diya ... haina??? 🤣

Thank You !! 😃

Hahhahah Nai re tu check karle
Me no ghapla karing 😛

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magical_mania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#666

Originally posted by: Roxxy47
Finally!! Akhir-e-kar Rahul plucked up some courage N confessed him feelings to Kaddy...
Bechari intezar kar kar k thak gai thi 😆...
Rahul and his 'Thoughts' , Idiot...
Rahul decided to go along with Kaddy , his best decision till now i guess 👍🏼 😆...

Eeppss!!! KR getting married ...
*Sigh* Engagement toh abhi se kar li ...
KR decided to spend their future life together , Finally they did 😆...
Kaddy-Rahul also sorted out their problems , Great...
Sab kuch acha acha hoing 👍🏼...

Kria-Rahul moment was Sweet...
He himself asked if he could call her 'Mum' , yeh toh aur bhi acha hai ...

So!! This is the ending , I surely will miss this story...
Honestly!! Start mein i wasn't much interested in the story But gradually i started loving it ❤️...
This was quite an Interesting story...

Will be waiting for the Epilogue...
N thanks for the pm 😊