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PhoenixTears

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Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Nani's advise was bang on.. Arnav is grown up, he could have protected himself very well. And good to know he also didnt took 7 years to realise that he has to go back home. Glad to know reason behind this decision is Arnav. "Welcome Home"

Thanks for the PM, superb update, awesome! Looking forward to read next 😊

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#592

At last the time for self introspection is over and he is returning home !!!!! Glad to see that Payal , Lavanya are slowly moving on with their life by submerging themselves in work that they love ... Hope things turn out good for both Khushi and Arnav ... They need a closure soon .

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meera06

@meera06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

Caught up with the last couple of updates!

I will just brilliant piece of writing..

Nani's words were so true..she left a very good impact on me...

Arnav-he is returning home..hopefully everything will be sorted out..

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suma.2911

@suma.2911

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Posted: 12 years ago

#594

That was beautiful.. and I really respect Lavanya for her emotions and the way she expressed them. She says it so beautifully that she was caught between being a friend and a lover she aspired to be, but never became. If she had explained it any other way it would have been cliched and a little misplaced in this story especially. Because everyone is so adept at feeling emotions completely.

I had enjoyed the other chapter on Lavanya too. NIce one..

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suma.2911

@suma.2911

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Posted: 12 years ago

#595

Naani is a rockstar. Yes she is :):) it was like the return of a godfather.. she comes and takes stock of the situation!! giving a hug and a kind word where needed, giving an ass whooping where needed.. so calm and level headed- a person who has seen her kids and gradnkids grow and make their own foils and see them correct it.. nice..

the best line was - "remember you are not his mother". that is so true. more often the elder siblings assume the role of a parent and forget that they are a sibling.. It happens out of love and affection and sense of protective nature with their younger siblings.. but it becomes too strong at times.. nice update..

this might end soon but i know for sure that you wont hurry it up.. :):)

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suma.2911

@suma.2911

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Posted: 12 years ago

#596

it's true right what arnav's thinking about how life might turn out for everyone in his life.. we do that too when we have to take a major life changing decision.. but it is also true what he feels about khushi.. because we too draw a blank when it comes to a loved partner..

i am more interested to read how things will be once he gets home. After a long time, they both will be emotionally stable and in the same place. What will happen? Is it that easy to leave everything that has happened as water under the bridge? I don't think that these two will do that because they are not people to fake emotions.

I liked how Arnav reflects near the lake... Water always gives me clarity and soothes my mind. Looking at a fish tank also has soothed me at times..

nice update :)

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suma.2911

@suma.2911

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Posted: 12 years ago

#597

I did not spam your thread with comments. I commented after each chapter and at the end I realised I have commented thrice.. :):):)

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Aparna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#598

For once i thought he is not going to go home at all. Running from d responsib. And frm d ppl he loved. I loved how he always thought about ppl in his life.

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Perspectives.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#599

The calmest of places does help one to introspect one's life and look at every situation from all angles. As meera30 mentioned, its the journey that is more important..the fact that Arnav found an inner peace, a feeling of tranquility. That is enough to guide a person to the next stage in life.

As far as Khushi is concerned, probabaly them coming together will evoke the pains of the past from time to time but isn't the harmony in living with the person you deeply cherish overpowering? Time definitely heals everything and Arnav and Khushi starting afresh together would be the beginner.

I can't imagine how it must be to write such an emotionally excruciating story. Hats off to your writing skills.