OS- Har virah ke baad bastha hai basera - Page 17

It was an amazing experience reading ure Story!! I very badly want u to conyinue this!! But lovely nding!

aww..such a beautiful ending...loved it...

Finally you gave us a beautiful update! It was worth all the wait! Wonderful job! I was constantly thinking that it is not possible that Arnav would leave Khushi alone, crying in the Raizada mansion, that too when she is pregnant! But the emotional conflicts that Anjali was going through were real and correct! She definitely realised that time and time again she has been the cause of Arnav Khushi's fights whether knowingly or unknowingly! That part where Arnav finally comes and all of them break into laughter was so cute, truly like a big, happy family just like they used to be! It was surprising that Khushi could act so well! I loved their cute bickering over whose idea it was to fool Anjali, seriously whatever they do, it makes me happy except for the times when they fight! And the baby kicked, aww, that was such a touching moment! Arnav's unshed tears on feeling the baby's kick and him hugging his Khushi without worrying about his surroundings was beautiful! Arnav, Khushi and their small little world! Their hugs always make me dance with joy and my heart swells with happiness! They are meant for each other! Their love is eternal! And again they started fighting over having a baby girl or a boy, adorable! They are soulmates! This was such a wonderful update! You did absolute justice to it! The whole family coming together, laughing, having fun and celebrating this beautiful moment together! Awesome! Why do you have to end this wonderful story? Truly amazing work! Thank you for the PM! Very well done! 😊 😊

All i can say is wow..
Beautiful piece of writing nd fab story..
Magical ending

Beautiful ending but I am sad that you finished it. I used to look forward to your update. I was hoping that we would get to see Anjali's story also. Please pm me if you write anything more. You are a fantastic writer and story teller. All the best in your future work .

A beautiful and befitting end to a beautiful story. I will miss it for sure. When I started reading I kind of panicked thinking Pari was Arnav's daughter and Khushi was no more. But I was relieved when I read it was Pari Mathur. So it will soon be Anjali Aman Mathur now. Arnav has really become Sankeshwar to his Sanka Devi. Coming up with crazy ideas. The moment when they felt their baby's first kick was very touching. Ending their story with their usual banter was so heart warming. Thanks for writing this wonderful story. Do write an epilogue if possible. Would like to know whether they have a junior Sanka Devi or a junior Laad Governor. Thanks for the pm and please pm me if u decide to write something in the future.

Its a beautiful story,❤️ read all the parts form the start and am gonna miss it!!!!!

a perfect ending to a perfect story!
khushi's dramebaaz nature has rubbed off on arnav now! hawww!
pari -a sweet name but why no appearance of Aman in the story as Anjali's love interest. please write something about them atleast an os pretty please!
don't stop writing. this is an earenest request. you are an amazing writer.i loved the dialogues the most.you have observed the characters on the show very keenly.it reflects in your writing. ther were many places where i was stunned by how the dialogues of the characters are in perfect sync with that in the show.especially arnav and khushi. you are the first person who has observed buaji so well. the conversations involving her were hilarious and ...very buaji-ish.
a request - write the scene of arnav playing a prank on khushi involving her diary.you mentioned it in the series. but i would love to read it as a os 😊

Aww! Too cute! It was a perfect ending for a perfect story. I really didn't want this to finish but as the saying goes, good things do come to an end.. I hope we will get to read another soulful work very soon :)

awesome cont soon plz... :)