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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

will be waiting for sure
see ya soon

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

so where is it please
guess me hallucinating

Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago

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thetelleroftale

@thetelleroftale

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

WOOHOOO THERE IT IS MAN
and that was a fitting end there
if you do write more do let me know about it
so all that was just a prank he pulled
well of course it was arnie idea
even though khushi comes up with such plans but we all know arnie is no less
gosh he had given anji a right heart attack
waise kya acting this khushi
ahhh so they felt the baby kick huh
and that is how their story eneded
would it be possible to have a epilogue too please
so we know if they had a boy or a girl
but if not thats okay too
wait who is pari aman's daughter
okay wonder if there is anything there i wonder
cheers for pm

Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago

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834074

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

reswa

Luvd it!!!!
Nd Arnav playing plranks!!!
Thxx for the PM... :)

Edited by HeBarun21 - 12 years ago

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Bhooma01

@Bhooma01

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

That was beautiful...It was BEAUTIFUL to see the whole family together again.

But, whatever happened to Anjali's story? I mean, she was in love with Aman, right? Is that going to be your next work?

Do let me know if you write anymore. I would LOVE to read your work.

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PariKC

@IdioTinTin

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Finally the update 👍🏼...but sad as it was the last one 😭

The end was just great, far greater than the expectations...

I also was pondering how Arnav could leave her there crying and didn't even come back till morning...but then it all got cleared.

they returned back home and played a prank...it was great with Khushi having no problems to fake tears 😆

Seriously, their choti si duniya was cute and great but this is their real world...their real home was always RM and will be...

I never wanted and want them to leave RM and live alone...

Because there are just too many memories to let go off the house...it ts their home

Finally the baby kicked and Arnie also could feel it...⭐️

I really want it to be a girl, who they name Arushi and she'd be a Daddy's girl...he would always call her Arshi 😆

I know, I have my own world with them being parents and their daughter...

I loved the update, simply fablous 👏👏👏

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os112801

@os112801

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

Awww...that was a nice ending...love this story...abit sad that it ended...please write more stories soon.

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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

Loved d end
will miss this story

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#160

wow...the most awesome ending of an awesome story...I cant believe it's ended...each and every chapter from the beginning is sooo sooo amazing...really u r great...I am truly out of words...
Coming to the update..Its really great...So u put a glimpse of Anjali-Aman story...start it soon dear...
I was doubting if the crying and all is their plan..my heart wasn't ready to accept that Arnav could leave Khushi..And thats come true...Actually whose plan it was...I think both...Wow Khushi call him Arnav infront of the family...good for her...And rest of the part is too awesome...too beautiful...
Thank you sooo much for such a mind-blowing story...
continue writing soon...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 12 years ago

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