ARSHI ff Trapped in love teaser page 129

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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Nice ff with different plot loved it.
Bauji kids and khushi were awesome.
Also like Arnav and Anji bond, thank god shyam already left.
Will wait for next part please pm me when you do.

Edited by ashw99 - 12 years ago

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-Roshini-

@-Roshini-

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Nice update
i really liked the conv betn khushi and tinky
thanks for the pm
update soon and pm me i will be waiting

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anju

@anjusr06

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

nice update...

tat kids wer sooo sweet

luved it... waiting 4 next part

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@--MISHTEE--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Loved d update
Thanx for pm

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RITIKA..

@RITIKA..

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Loved the update..
Thank for the pm..
Continue soon...

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

It's a great promising start for this FF as foundations laid out.

The children are sweet and mischievous which is lovely. The sweet Khushi as usual saves the day from the dragon Madhu, lol. :)

At the Raizada house Anjili seems happy enough. Studpid shyam, but good to see her not fully depressed about it. Arnav is ASR as normal, not wanting to marry and having a weird offish relationship with Sheetal. We can sense this will bring tension in days ahead.

Overall a Fab start!! :D

Great to see your writing away and sharing your brilliant talents. You'll develop into a great writer in no time. :)

xxx

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ankii543

@ankii543

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Its a great concept...

Thanx vani for the recomendation n arshi.loverb for thepm...

Sheetal must have done something suiting her characyter that arnav is so furious...

Khushi n tinky r so adorable together...i just love kids...

The prologue was nice...i also liled the first chapter...its intreating...

Its an awesome work done for a new writer...well done

id love to recieve pm for this ff...

Plz could u send me pms for tha future updates...