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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: crazy2012

Hey Hi..can I help with this testing point if everyone allows me😳

u can give ur suggestion! I have taken ideas from few & nw will work on it😊

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Debu

@crazy2012

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: dj_arshifan

u can give ur suggestion! I have taken ideas from few & nw will work on it😊

Why don't you divide this whole testing scenario among many things, like when a mom of any gal seeks a perfect son in law, she wants to see many things in him,

1. money- tell him to earn enough money by his own within a stipulated period (Like Maine Pyar Kiya, bt ur own version😳)

2. security- tell him to prove his physical fitness like, she can ask him to stay at a house w/o roof , or to take participate in the street boxing like that (sorry for my weird example😳)

3. mental support - give a situation where he has to choose between his family member or his wife..though this is a though situation

4. Trust - to provoke him to verify his trust worthiness etc etc

Hope these can help you!!!

Love
Deb

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: crazy2012

Why don't you divide this whole testing scenario among many things, like when a mom of any gal seeks a perfect son in law, she wants to see many things in him,

1. money- tell him to earn enough money by his own within a stipulated period (Like Maine Pyar Kiya, bt ur own version😳)

2. security- tell him to prove his physical fitness like, she can ask him to stay at a house w/o roof , or to take participate in the street boxing like that (sorry for my weird example😳)

3. mental support - give a situation where he has to choose between his family member or his wife..though this is a though situation

4. Trust - to provoke him to verify his trust worthiness etc etc

Hope these can help you!!!

Love
Deb

Hey thanks :) Though first & the last point was in my mind! Thanks for telling me 2 more. Hopefully will write nicely :)

Thanks,

Deepa

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#424

I posted this in General requests thread but then I had to post it here:p

So here we go-

Heyyy

Kay I shouldn't be asking this here REALLY really, I shouldn't. Lol.

But..as it is related to I-F I thought I should..

So. Hmm.

I write several FFs on ArShi..and I find it really, really difficult to take criticism😕😆

Like..I know none of our works are perfect, but still I feel kinda..low. And I just feel I can't write better than that and I literally feel cursed that WHY THE HECK did he/she said that to me? Lol

You know I type out my chapters in about 15 minutes so yeah it has a lot of mistakes but I edit it once I'm done.

But yes criticism helps a lot too, I can correct my mistakes, but still I remember the person with their comments only😆 And when I PM the reader with 'Hey I corrected it and I dunno why u felt so and blah blah blah' they are like..I just commented what I felt. And then their comments after that are NEVER the same..it's all sarcastic and stuff and then I feel legit stupid that why the eff did I PM her/him in the first place😆

What should I do? <<I just sounded like a crazy teen on a Yahoo answers website[That I am but still] :p

OMFG bye sorry for this

Take care.

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: dj_arshifan
suffering from a writer's block😭
need help!

Here arnav had done something tooo grave in his past with khushi to be forgiven. They separated & again met as their sibling were getting married with each other. This past is known by anjali who is khushi's bestie & khushi didn't knew that anjali is arnav's sister. Anji told this to akash. They both decided to unite these lovers as they have seen loneliness in their eyes. Arnav anyhow apologizes to khushi & being softhearted khushi melts. And now both are in a relationship! The whole truth is known to garima by her sources as she had seen her daughter disturbed in these 2 years! So now garima confonts khushi and asks her to test arnav's love for her!

That's where I am stucK! Not getting idea for this test! Please help

So..maybe Khushi should confront Arnav?

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: Shimmer_Vani
So..maybe Khushi should confront Arnav?

No di! Its completely different thing! I got the idea. But still thanks for taking time to read it :)

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zahara

@ZAHARA.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#427

@Shimmer_Vani;

See, this is why I asked Jot for a BETA group in the first place (a group of people who volunteer to proof-read someone else's story - I would even volunteer for it!). If people bash your writing because of spelling and grammar then the first thing is to proof-read before you even post it, after all that just means no one will give you hate for doing that, would they?

Second; being a writer is all about taking criticisms. But it also depends on what the reader is saying. I get a lot of readers telling me to "update fast" even though I have exams now and I can't, I did get a "hate" yes literally a hate PM for not updating, and that really irked me. However, they have apologised and all is good. Anyway, if people are saying something about YOUR writing, then I don't understand WHY are they even reading it in the first place? You obviously write a certain way, and that's good enough for you. I, for one cannot stand it when writers write using scripts therefore I don't read them, despite how good the plot is.

If people do PM you, then you shouldn't PM them back justifying your writing. In fact, all those criticisms you get, you should answer them in one post, without pointing at someone in particular (as this will create more problems).

I would advise, do not feel that you have to feel low because some people didn't like your story. Just remember there are far MORE people who DO. You don't have to apologise to people, nor clarify yourself, because honey, you did nothing wrong. (unless you did something bad like plagiarism or something completely wrong like graphic detail of rape - which I'm sure you haven't, so its fine).

Zahara

xoxo

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: Shimmer_Vani
I posted this in General requests thread but then I had to post it here:p

So here we go-

Heyyy
Kay I shouldn't be asking this here REALLY really, I shouldn't. Lol.

But..as it is related to I-F I thought I should..

So. Hmm.

I write several FFs on ArShi..and I find it really, really difficult to take criticism😕😆

:p

Like..I know none of our works are perfect, but still I feel kinda..low. And I just feel I can't write better than that and I literally feel cursed that WHY THE HECK did he/she said that to me? Lol

You know I type out my chapters in about 15 minutes so yeah it has a lot of mistakes but I edit it once I'm done.

But yes criticism helps a lot too, I can correct my mistakes, but still I remember the person with their comments only😆 And when I PM the reader with 'Hey I corrected it and I dunno why u felt so and blah blah blah' they are like..I just commented what I felt. And then their comments after that are NEVER the same..it's all sarcastic and stuff and then I feel legit stupid that why the eff did I PM her/him in the first place😆

What should I do? <<I just sounded like a crazy teen on a Yahoo answers website[That I am but still] :p

OMFG bye sorry for this
:p
Take care.
<3

I have read all of your stories & believe me they are kind 'laughter medicine for me. LOL. Dunno is I have used the correct word! I have told u earlier also, don't give a damn to few those who critisise your work in a negative way! See so many, infact more than 400 people read your work & give you good feed backs :)

Edited by dj_arshifan - 12 years ago

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#429

Oh another query,

I wanna post a new SS/FF on ArShi where its about Khushi being a model/ a struggling one.

And the story goes like..the movie Fashion.

But it has a lot of changes..

Would it be plagiarism?

The story of mine is like this-

Khushi and Arnav are childhood buddies, she is really pretty but doesn't acknowledge it. She is kinda insecure..and she had a bad past coz her Mom and Dad have been into fights all her childhood...her childhood wasn't normal and happy one.But only Arnav could help her all that time..and he did. He stayed like a rock to her.

But now she is grown up, and Arnav is not the same person anymore. He has become a ruthless businessman[ He runs a fashion industry] and..they are in a relationship which has sort of..died. He doesn't love her/he never has but just stays with her for reasons he himself doesn't know.

While they are in their live-in relationship, she gets many comments on her face, and that she would be a great face for a model and all that and so does Arnav..he thinks she would be a new face for his company..but..well, she gets pregnant.

And she sees the worst side of him, he is like..have an abortion. You can't do this..you can't be an model and all that..and she just listens without a word but thinks a lot about it. And finally, doesn't go for it.

And the next day she meets him he publicly humiliates her[In his office] and tells her that she would never be an model. And well he is just infuriated at her and she leaves..[They are still together but well..he doesn't love her]

This story was really, really stuck to my mind but I don't have the courage to post it. Firstly coz I dunno if this story is unique, it looks very used one..I haven't read much FanFictions so I don't know..

And I dunno whether it would be an SS or an FF. The basic idea of this story is Khushi trying to balance her both the lives and her relationship with Arnav which looks like its going down the drains.

And I want help with the title too😳😆

I have thought of these-

Lost Glamour

Fashion- Choosing a life

Her broken stilettos

Edited by Shimmer_Vani - 12 years ago