New Arhi FF: Next stop? Part 2 pg30, note-72

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xyzsm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#391

you are a BRILLIANT writer...awesome...you do know how to write ...so simply...yet so full of life...humor...awesome...salute you...

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suma.2911

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Posted: 12 years ago

#392

hehehehhe... such a "meet-cute" story this one is...

meeting on a train.. the whole khushi eating most things in the first hour of the journey is smiliar to how i eat everything before a movie starts in the theater.. :D :D :D

it was sooo funny when arnav gets all flustered while talking to Di on phone after telling off Khushi..

hehehehe

Nice one..

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anupama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#393

oh i had missed the first part!! never mind... loving this saucy...! ( by d way really missed you! <3 )

al my memories of train coming back... Oh wat fun!! trains!! i am lost again!😆

Khushi!!! he he... she is so so one of us n thats d best part abt her... her coninuous munchin... her comtments on Prince Whales.. her Alllay Shana... he he... she is tooo adorable!

n Arnav is Arnav after al!!

waiting for next part😃

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SWATI PRADHAN

@Swat-cat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#394

Again the day is saved by our KKG...it was so good... I loved it especially writing of a cooking book at night 11.30 ... That was fun

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Abi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#395

Very nice story!
Plz continue soon...
Thx for the pm!

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barunxoxo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#396

Lol this is so funny! I am desperately waiting for the next part. :D

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Priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#397

Sabi...finally i managed to read it...and i realised how much i have been missing ur writing!...
Firstly i lovved the backdrop of the story.i have a thing for stories that start in trains...LOL.And u brought our beloved Arnav and Khushi with that famous sabi touch of yours...So temme wats der to not like in the story.so i lovved it.
''For someone who was getting irked with khushi's phone calls a while back,he was certainly having an embarrasing time''.LOL.Arnav should have thought that he have a fussing queen as a sister.
But what cracked me up like anything was khushi's-''That was very nice of you to ask strangers to sleep with you''THAT WAS EPIC..But should i be surprised?.Naaa.I think i know you and khushi that much.
Now all i want to ask is,'how soon would you update?'.
Take care.Keep smiling.