New Arhi FF: Next stop? Part 2 pg30, note-72

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javeria tahir

@Arhi_jia_Monaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

wowww funniest poor arnav
and bhukar khushi 4bboul and craker and potato chips and cake ROFL poor arnav he was counting how much he can count i dont know

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dilectus

@dilectus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

OMFG!!! chatni-papad is back..and how!!!

i so love you saucy..mwaaahh!!!

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Bonhi

@Bonhi_ipkknd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

rofl...its gr8. Its so characteristic of khushi to munch throughout a train journey & arnav's reaction...hahaha

Arnav caught her staring intently at his plate and raised an eyebrow at her. Two complete meals one after another and maybe she still wasn't done.

"you want something?"

I just love ur sense of humour & added to that ur flawless writing..creates brilliance.

thnx for the pm..do pm me the next parts

Edited by Bonhi_ipkknd - 12 years ago

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magss24

@magss24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

..loved the start..the chicken part was the best...

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arshiyana

@arshiyana

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

we miss u a lot...yeh...u r here and what a come back...

totally loved it

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cutyanushka

@cutyanushka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

wow nice start
asr in train hilarious...😆

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Kamala

@Kamala05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

In the beginning I thought that poor Kushi her journey will be miserable with the short tempered Raizada. But I guess I was wrong , it seems like ASR will be having an unforgettable train journey..

It was an interesting start. Hope u will update soon

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choochootrain

@choochootrain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Hahaaa...i like it!!!!...both in a train together!!!...but wat does e hindi words mean???

Pls cont...will b looking out for tis ss...

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Sabi,
So glad to have you back! Thanks for being back and posting this ss.
Am already looking forward to this crazy journey ahead.
Khushi hogging the food, Di's call and instructions were hilarious!!

Hoping that you wud continue unpred. predic also someday. buddying you in case you send pms.

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goguma

@goguma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#140

they say your works is a must-read, and so here i am!

and i am alr loving this one!
clash of personalities, dont they?
looks like kushi is going to be a handful for arnav's liking..
this train ride is going to be enjoyable... 😉 😆

would you mind PMing me for any updates? tks!