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Posted: 12 years ago
ab update kar v do yar... aur wait nehi hota...😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mind blowing update dear ...

Taarey wow..

Really love it.

Update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow dear amazing...i loved it...An awesome twist loved it..
Nd that song hats off dear...👏 u r a star...⭐️⭐️⭐️ the things we cant see onscreen nd v wish to c have been brought out through ur awesome style in portraying the story...Lovely😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey lachu!!
sorry for late comment. ...
actually I had exams so ...
achha now I loved ur update very much...
u wrote it really very well..
song awesome tha!!
n taani ka acceptance awweee mere rey ko kya bada jhatka lagaya gosh...
even for 2 minutes I was shocked yaar ki ye taani aise kuuon kar rahi hai,...parnjab scooty dikhi tab samjha sabkuch...
n ye rey kya plans banata hai..hey krishnaji!!!
awesome update
pls update verry soon do pm me!
sorry once again...
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Posted: 12 years ago
PLs PLS PLS Update soon pls can't wait pls pls pls update 😃😛😊😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
why u dint update today??????????????? 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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i was a little bit busy , just completed reading all updates of this story😊😊
wow , mast , super se bahut zyada uppar , wonderful updates all,
i loved all updates ,
great work 👏👏👏,i enjoyed every bit of your updates ,
what a filmy sweet confession, mind blowing👏
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys,
Thanks for all the comments,
See d note please..
enjoy reading this update,

Taareyff:Towards Love-part17

Taani n rey in car..
Taani:Aapko kab pata chala ki aap mujhse pyaar kartha hai
Rey:hmm,tumhare tapad ke baath..
Taani:hehe kaunsi
Rey:tumhe bahut haasi aa rahi haina...
Taani:nahi to,ab batayene
Rey:jab tumhare karreb aaye the (n moves closer to taani)
Taani moves back..
Rey:aise kareeb aay tha na
(n leans to kiss her)
Taani closes her yes n pushes him:
aise karreb aaye the aap aur thapad lagaya tha mai(n laughs)
Rey:tab jaake akal tikhane pe aagya tha
Taani:aacha
Rey:aur tumhe
Taani:kya
Rey:mujhe pyaar

Taarey eyelock:

Taani:jab siya ne bhola ki aap unki gf the
aur main bhaai ke car lekhar nikhali aur
main bahut royi thi,aur mujhe samjh hi nahi aa rahi thi main kyun ro rahi thi..

Rey was looking at her talking , d actions thru her hands,her smile,
her hair flowing,dat sparkle n her eyes..
Rey kept d hands on his hands n rested it on d steering..
Taani after few mintues looked at rey..
Taani:kya hua
Rey sill lost in her..

Taani:oye kadoos
Rey:ha
Taani:Aise kyun dekh rahi ho mujhe
Rey:bahut pyaar aa rahi hai mujhe tumse..
Taani:accha
Rey:accha n moves closer to her
Taani:ab chalo baccha,
mere bhaai rothe rothe pure mumbai koi samundhar main takel diya hoga..
Rey:bechara


Rey n taani reaches reys's house,everyone was sitting outside..

Taani gets out..
Everyone sees her expect swayam n she asked her everyone to keep quiet..
She went behind him n covered his eyes..
Taani:bhaaaiii
Swayam stud up...
Swayam:taani
n hugs her..
Swayam:kisi aur ke wajas se tum apne bhaai ko chodkar gayi thi na,
ab wapas kyun aayi..
Taani:aww mere bhaai mujhse narraaz hai
Swaym:aur aaaj ke baat mujhe tum promise karo ki tum mujhe chodkar kahi nahi jaoge..
Taani takes swayam's hand in hand...
Taani:nahi jaaonge chodkar..


Swayam hugs her tightly...

Sharon luks at rey..
Rey comes near swayam.
Swayam sees rey..

Swayam:tum mere behen se door rehna k..

Everyone was shocked at hearing this.

Rey:swayam,mere baat sun
Swayam:dekho rey mere liye mere behen hi hai sab kuch hai,
tu meri friend hai,
but as a bhaai main keh rahi hoon
tum mere behen se door rahna k,
tum usse bahut chont pahunchaayi hai,
so mere behen ke zindagi se tum door rehana..

Taani:bhaai..

Swayam takes taani's hand n walks towards his car.
Swayam:sharon tumhe aana hai to aao..
Taani:bhaai mere baat toh suniye..
Swayam:main tumhe humare ghar lekhar jaoon ya flat main
Taani luks at rey:flat main
Swayam:teek hai chalo..


Vicky:ab jo hua mujhe kuch samjhn nahi aaya k..
Nil:ryt dude
Amar:lo muhe li
Bharat:ape mujhe bhi
Vicky:ab taani wapas aayi aur siya chali bhi gayi,aur sab problems ka
50% khatam hua to yeh lo yeh bhaai saab ban gaye inke luv story ke beech ka haadi
Nil:ha yaar...
Amar:mujhe leh baat lahi samhj lahi
Bhaart:mujhe yeh baat samjh nahi aa rahi ki taani wapaas aayi kaise
aur woh bhi rey ke saath

Rey goes inside his house:see ya guys..

Vicky smiles:mujhe kuch gadbad lag rahi hai
Nil:mujhe bhi
Bhrat:kya
Vicky:khichdi
Bharat:ab iss waqt kahan se
Vicky:woh hi to
Nil:ha due ab iss waqt kahan se milega
Vicky:kya
Nil:khichdi
Vicky:ape naalyakon main keh rahi hai kuch pak rahi haina rey aur taani ke beech..

Taani's flat..

Doorbell rang..
It was rey..
Taani opened d door n hugged rey..
Taani closes d door..
Rey:i think humein swayam ko sab kuch keh dena chahiye,
shaayad yeh sunane ke baad uska guss a tanda hojaayega..
Taani:nahi abhi

Taani:abhi bhaai aapko maar daalenge phir se
hum dononn ne yeh kaha i hum sah main couple hai
Rey:to
Taani:chupana hoga sab se
Rey moves towards taani n outs his arms around her neck..
Rey:irada kya hai..

Taani blushes..

Rey:tum blush bhi karna jaanthi ho
Taani pushes rey n walks:main blush wush nahi karthi
Rey:accha n catches her hands..
Rey picks her up..
Taani:kya kar rahe aap utharo neeche..
Rey lays on d bed..
Taarey eyelock..
Taani:aap kya kar rahe hai
Rey keeps his finger on her lips:ssshhh

Rey kisses her on her forehead..
Taani closes her eyes..
Rey kisses on her cheeks..

Taani puts her hands around rey..

Doorbell.
It was swayam.
Swayam:taani

Taani pushes out rey..

Vciky:hum bhi hai

Taani:ab kya karein
Rey:tum tension mat lo..
Taani:aap washroom main jaaye
Rey goes to d washroom..

Taani opens d door..
Swayam:itne der kyun laga di..
Taani-woh
Vicky:koi hai kya andar
Taani(in mind)hey bhgwaan
Swayam:kaun?
Taani:kaun hogi,sirf main hi to hoon yahan..
Nil:acha?
Sharon:tum bhi na vicky

Swayam:tum intni sweat kyun kar rahi ho
Taani:woh bhaai ac kaam nahi kar rahi hai
Vicky:to yeh kya hai ac ya showpiece,
Taani:woh abhi tak work nahi kar rahi thi ab chalu hogayi

Vicky goes n looks outside thru d window-nil idar aa
nil-ha dude
Vicky-woh suv rey ka hai na
nil-ha dide kya mast lagtha haina yeh car
Vicky:Ape iska matlab pata hai tujhe
Nil-ooo
Swayam-wahan kya kar raha tum log baito..

Vicky:yeh donon humein bewakoof bana rahi haina
Nil:ha dude
Amar:kuch to karna hoga na
Bharat:kya?

Precap-
Rey takes taani on their first date in taani's way...
Hmm...romance n fun coming right up right here..

I know thoda late hogaya yeh update post karne maine,
Gud news-😊
i hve got a nephew,so went 2 meet him n my sis yesterday to banglore,jus its only 2 hours i reached back in mumbai,
n d first thing i am doing s posting dis ff..
So guys my usual dialogue - comments please ,nahi toh i wont update..😉
(thoda fimy hai hehehe,kya karoon bahut khush hoon,choti maa jo hoon ab😊)

So please comment everyone...


Part18
Edited by Lachu_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aw taayam scene was so cute ! Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanx for reply diii as usual awsume update rey taani in secret relationship ab maza ayega nd congratsss TAAREY FIRST DATE AAGE BAHUT MAZA ANE WALA HAI UPDATE SOON

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