Taarey ff:Towards Love-part20 SEASON1 COMPLETED - Page 26

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

213.6k

Users

101

Likes

2.4k

Frequent Posters

taarey_priya thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
luv the update... do continue soon...😊
samiha_taarey thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update... taani ki dialogues really touched my heart... it was really hard 4 those children to believe in luv who's parents got separated or after few years of married lyf used to hate eachother...u r potreying the fact beautifully...nd the ff is getting better nd better...enough of my emotional bak bak... nw coming on precap oh ho taani got drunk!!! its gonna b interesting... plz if u include any song on that drunk sequence than do include lat lag gayee song its a request...nd lastly sorry 4 commenting so late...😔 do update soon...😊
Tahira-2013 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
first of all sorry for the late comment


your story was just amazing

loved chapter 5 taani's line are sooo funny and the jacket part was cute

chapter 6 was even better
what taani said about parents and divorce was sooo true
it has happened to my best friend and even she feel the same as taani so actually i had tears in my eyes
and yeah finally taarey are friends

can't wait for the precape plzzz update soon
Lachu. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: danceforlifed3

amazing please continue <3


vl continue soon..😊
Lachu. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nujhatt

Cool dear...pls...plsss updat earlyyy...plllsss...:...


vl update soon..😊
Lachu. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: taarey_priya

luv the update... do continue soon...😊


vl continue soon..😊
Lachu. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: samihatabassum

awsome update... taani ki dialogues really touched my heart... it was really hard 4 those children to believe in luv who's parents got separated or after few years of married lyf used to hate eachother...u r potreying the fact beautifully...nd the ff is getting better nd better...enough of my emotional bak bak... nw coming on precap oh ho taani got drunk!!! its gonna b interesting... plz if u include any song on that drunk sequence than do include lat lag gayee song its a request...nd lastly sorry 4 commenting so late...😔 do update soon...😊



vl defenitly include dat..
vl update soon..
thanks 4 d comment..
Lachu. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Tahira-2013

first of all sorry for the late comment


your story was just amazing

loved chapter 5 taani's line are sooo funny and the jacket part was cute

chapter 6 was even better
what taani said about parents and divorce was sooo true
it has happened to my best friend and even she feel the same as taani so actually i had tears in my eyes
and yeah finally taarey are friends

can't wait for the precape plzzz update soon



its k dear..
thanks 4 d comment..
vl update sonn...
Lachu. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys,
Thanks 4 all d comments,
Enjoy reading n read d note at end of update...


Taarey ff:Towards Love:part7


Rey and taani in the cabin..
Taani:to ab tak kya socha hai,
Rey:kuch nahi aaya dimaag main ab tak..
Taani:woh hai apke paas?
Rey:kya?
Taani:dimaag
Rey picks up d pens stand
Taani:ya kya karne jaa rahe ho
Rey:dandiya
Rey and taani breaks into laugh
Rey:tumhare saaath rahthe main bhi tumare jaise bholne laga hoon..
Taani:woh to hai
Rey:aakhir dost ho tum,
Taani looks here and there
Rey:kya hua?
Taani:woh kya haina kadoss sabdh ka replacement word dost bana haina,woh ab tak gasam nahi hua.
Rey:kyun,main koi chabane waali cheez hoon
Taani:nahi to..
Rey:to jaldi gasam karlo ya phir dandiya khelollo mere saath..

swayam enters d cabin..
seeing rey n taani laugh..
swayam:sorry wrong cabin
Rey:rukh ukh kahan jaa rahahe..
Swayam:yeh tum logon ko kya hua,
main to rey ki cabin main aaya tha
Rey:ha yeh mere hi cabin hai..
tumhe kya hua
Swayam:woh tum logon has rahe the..
tum log pee hai kya,taani kya tumne baang peeli hai..?
Rey:calm down n sit n drink some water (n hands over water)..
Swyam sits..
Swayam was drinking water..
Rey:ab hum ek doosre ki dost hai..
Swayam spits the water..
Swayam:sorry (n gets up):tum log(n points finger at them)dost?
bewakoof bana rahe aaj to april fool nahi haina?
Rey:nahi yaaar..
Taani:haa bhaai sach main,woh mere frnd hai..

Swayam:rey tu 1 minute bahar aa
Rey n swayam goes out..
Swayam:kya,kaise,kab?
Rey:calm down..
Swayam:tumhare pair kahan hai,
mujhe choona hai,yaar,
tune kya kar dikhaya hai,tum taani ko,mere behen ko,
taani ko apna dost banaya..
wah yaar,tune to..
Rey:ahem,ahem,bas karo yaar,pata hai,main best hoon,
chal ab tu bata,sharon ke saath kya hua..
Swayam's face fell..
Swayam:woh usse commitment chaiye aur main tujhe bataya tha na,main
Rey:ha main samjhtha hoon,bas ab thodi aur din,taani tumari shaadi ko maan liya ha..
Swayam slaps his own face with his hand..

Rey:kar kya raha hai,bhaai behen full on pagal hai..
Swayam:taaani ne meri shaadi keliye maana haina,meri shaadi ko?
Rey:nahi meri..
Swayam:kya
Rey:bhuddhu tumahari behen ne tumhari shaadi ko igaasat di hai jaanab...

Taani comes out..
Taani:tum dono kar kya rahe hai,bhai ghar nahi jaana..
Swayam goes n hugs her..
Swayam:i love u..
Rey smiles.
Taani s shocked..
Seeing rey smiles,taani understud..
Taani:yeh jaake bhaabhi ko bhol deejiye..
Swayam breaks d hug..
Swayam:kya bhola
Taani:bas bas bhaai itnai melodrama mat keejiye..
aur chaliye ghar..

Swayam and went n hugs rey..
Rey:bas kar
Taani:aap donon ka dostaana khatam hua to chale..
bye rey..
Rey:bye taani partner..


Taani calls rey..
Rey:kya hua..
Taani:darwwaza kholo
Rey:kahan ka..
Taani:dimmaag ka,
Rey:kya
Taani:front door kholo..
main bahar ghadi hoon,apni dost ko bahar kade rakhoge..
Rey:what,tum,mere
Taani:main jaaoon
Rey:nahi ruko

Click here for the background music

Rey opens d door..
Rey sees taani dressed in party black top n blue shorts...
Rey:tum taani to ho na..
Taani:nahi meri bhoot,
apko party main lekar nahi jaanne keliye aayi hai.
Rey:party iss waqth..
Taani:nahi subah 6 baje chaloon..
chaliye ab(n pulls rey's hand)
Rey:iss tarah
ek jacket pehnloon,ek minute..
Rey goes inside..

Taani:apke paas yeh black alawa kuch colours hai kya?
Rey:main car keys bhool gayi..
ek minute..
Taani:uski koi zarorrat nahi..
Rey:tum nano lekar aayi to nahi..
Taani:nahi
ab chaliye..
ek minute(she messes his hair with her hands)
Rey:kya kar rahe ho?
Taani:baal gel se champu jaise dikh raha tha..
Rey:woh classic style
Taani:champu,ab chalo bhi
Rey :kaise jaaonga?
Taani:yaad mera scooty..
Rey turns back:tum chali jaana main usmain phir se nahi baitne waala

Taani:ruko(n pulls reys' arms):yeh deklo bike layi hoon main..
Rey:kya,tum bike chalathi ho?
Taani:to apko kya lagtha hai yeh hawaa se aaya hoga..
Rey:nahi,matlab tum bike chalayi..
Taani:ab phir se mat pochna kya main sach main ladki hoonn..
Rey:par main bike nahi chaltha?
Taani:aapko kisne kaha chalane ko huh?
Rey:matlab tum chloge..
Taani:ha
Rey:aise kaise
Taani:pehle baito ab..
Taani handes over d helmet...
Rey wears n sits with taani in the bike..
Rey"to chale taani partner...

Taani drives thru d mumbai streets..
Rey catches her back...
Taani luks thru d mirror..
Rey:tum thoda dheere chala nahi sakthi..
Taani:dheere chalne se kya hoti
Rey:woh kya haina,mere insurnce renew karne ka time hogaya hai..
Taani:oho
Taani speeds d bike up...

She stops in front of the club..
Taani :to chale..
Rey:yahan pe sab college going ppl lagthe hai,aur kahin humare academy ki koi students hua toh,dekho hum kahin 5 star main jaate hai..
Taani pats her with helmet..
Taani:aap bhudhe nahi ho ab,mere bhaai ki age haina to kya collge going ppl aur aap main kya 10 saal ka farak hai nahin na toh,
agar koi hua toh,hone do,
hum humari credit card se andar jaa rahe ,
un logon ki nahi,
aur academy ki bahar humari bhi life hoti hai k..
aur yeh kya 5 star lag rakha hai,
jahan pe log hasthe bhi jaise koi ehsaan kar raha doosron par...
Rey:hm im impressd..
Taani:to chale..
Rey:wasie tumko yeh jagahkaise pata chala.tum to yahan
Taani:pata hai nayi hai,google mama haina..
Rey:google what?
Taani:ab chaliye..

Rey n taani enters d pub...

Taani pulls rey's hand thru d crowd...
comes in d centre..
Rey:yahan bahut shor hai..
Taani:kya,sunayi nahi de raha hai..
Rey puls taani closer..
Taani get shocked..
Rey moves his lips..
Taani sees this n understands..
Taani:yahan shor to hogi na..
Rey was bit taken away by this..
n twirls her around...
Taani stops.
Taani:mujhe naachna nahi aata
mere sirf pub main aakar uthar puthar aur haath pair hilaathi hoon..
aapki jaise nahi aathi mujhe..
Rey:iss main jananne ki kya baat hai..
N show his hand...
Taani gives her hand..
Rey keep his hand on her back n pulls her closer to him..
Taarey eyelock...

Some gals were drooling over rey..
Taani notices this n god knows y she was feeling weird,a sense of anger..
One of the gal comes n asks rey for a dance..
Rey breaks of the position from taani n says k..
Taani gets shocked n turns n sees dancing with gal...
Rey notices this..
Taani goes by d bar..
Taani:1 shot plse..
Taani sees rey dancing startd 2 gulp down 1 shot by shot...

Rey dancing vd d gals tells:she s beautiful...
Rey luks at taani:ha bahut beautiful hai..
Gal:to jaayiye
Rey:it was nice dancing vd u
goes near taani..
Rey:wow taani,bas karo ab..
Taani:(full talli)kyun kadoos
Rey smiles hearing...
Taani in chweet voice..
Taani:aise kyun smile kar rahe ho,kadoos log smile nahi karte..
Rey:Accha ab chalo..
Taani:kahan
Rey:ghar
Taani:to udao..
Rey picks up taani...

Rey calls up d driver n asks to take d bike n driver d car n takes her home..
Rey calls swayam..
Swayam;ha rey
Rey:tu ghar par nahi hai,
Swayam:woh main bahar hoon...
woh taani bhi nahi hogi woh club main gaya hai,kuch kaam hai..
Rey:nahi ,kuch nahi,vl talk later..

Rey opens d door n goes to taani's room..
Rey keeps her in d bed..
Taani clutches on rey shirt n hand n pulls her towards her..
Taani:mujhe chodkar mat jao,mujhe dar lagtha hai..
Rey:nahi chodkar jaoongi n sits by her side...
removes her sandals n pulls over d blanket n ons d lamp switches of all d lights..
Taani keeps rey hand on her pillow n turns to her side..
Rey moves her eyelock from her face..
Taani:aap mama n papa ki tarah mujhe chodkar nahi jaoge na..
Rey:nahi jaaongi taani..
Taani:sach..
Rey:ha..
Taani:mujhe rona accha nahi lagtha,isliye main sab door rahthi,
sab log mujhe chodkar jaathi hai,tomere dil toottha hai,toh aap..
Rey:nahi jaaongi dost...
Rey was smiling thru her innoncence...
Rey was about 2 get up to pull d curtains..
Taani:maat jaona(speaking thru d sleep)
Rey:nahi taani,main bas yeh curtain..
Taani holds rey's hands tighter...
Rey watches her sleep..n goes to sleep by her side..

Precap:
in d moring.
Taani:aap yahan
Rey:ha,kal raaat(teasingly)
Taani:kya hua?
Rey:hum donon(bits his lip trying 2 control his laughter)
Taani:jaldi batayena..


So dats it guys,
so its time for you ppl 2 comment...
Next update tab milenge jab mujh 5-6 pages of comments milenge k..

A piece of sharing-
d persn hu changed my pov on life s d kadoos of my life,hu is my best friend...


i know i have goa ff to update,
i vl update on d weekends bcoz main office main romance likh nahi sakthi aaj kal,
bahut work hoti hai n time nahi mil rahi hai n yeh ff main bahut likhkar rakha hai to main office jaane se pehle post karoongi...
goa ff s very close 2 my heart,so i dnt want 2 write further parts in a hurry,so i hope u all
vl understand...

So dats all for today..
nw comment guys...
silents readers commnt please...


Part8
Edited by Lachu_taarey - 12 years ago
Arbitrator. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
Res
unres!!
😆 yaay yay i m first.. Phirse and dat to before ur pm!! 😆
😆 😆 rey to sach me taani ki language bolne laga h.. Daandiya!! Hahah..
And taani: darwaza kholo dimaag ka 😆
swayam ka reaction.. Hahah...
Amazing update!! Continue soon!!
🤗
So that person is ur bestie!! U r lucky!! 👍🏼
Edited by toshi_ta - 12 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

1 months ago

Pyaar Ya Rebound? ~ Rumya SS [Completed]

Intro: Rudra fakes a relationship with his best friend Soumya to impress glamorous Bhavya-but ends up falling for the one girl who truly knew...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

3 months ago

ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed} ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed}

[NOCOPY] P Y A A R. K A. N A G H M A. "Friends?" a little boy extended his hand towards a girl which she responded. They smiled and embraced...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

3 months ago

Student of the Year: When Love Lost Its Way [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @JasmineRahul in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: The alternative version of the...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

4 months ago

More Than Enough ~ A Rumya Three-Shot [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @oh_nakhrewaali in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: Character A has body image...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

4 months ago

Deewaniyat ~ A Jeenat Five-Shot [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @Indulekha00 in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: A prompt for the mysterious lovers...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".