#2:Arhi FF-WMB,Chp 8-11(#3 link,pg 145)

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pkanchan

@pkanchan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#791

nice update...really loved it 👏...ur writing is awsme

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Vishavjeet

@vishav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#792

Ohhh...buddy that was superb. Incredible...! Loved the update and enjoyed it.

Love choco, he's a perfect son, for a mother like Khushi.

I wonder, how will Arnav papa, for choco sound ?😆😆😆😆

Continue soon and thanks for the PM.

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Susita825

@Susita825

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Posted: 12 years ago

#793

i love choco and all ...but why damn it ?!

let them kiss yaaarrr😡😆

i loved how Arnav was checking khushi out lol ...so cute 😳

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kitten80

@kitten80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#794

ha...very romanic yar...

more over i can say we all comment for ur way of narrating the story...😉

do update soon...😊

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paaskhanna

@paaskhanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#795

Loved the updates !!! Even the one filled with Choco & smoochie 😃 Choco giving hot shower on Arnav's wall paper had me in fits of laughter 😆

Your updates are sooo hilarious I just love the monologues of Khusi & Arnav ...

Arnav is angry at his second missed Kiss but to tell you the truth I was expecting Choco to barge in and jump on Arnav 😆 but only growling is also good. Both of them are so cute when they are ogling each other

Update which ever one you like cos I love reading all of them

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nmaharaj

@nmaharaj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#796

I was like darn, so close yet so far...lol. Good update, please continue soon.

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nandini_15s

@nandini_15s

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#797

It was simply awsome..hilarious...loved each n evry bit of it...kiss ho na paya...choco bich mein agaya. 😭.jus like nak bich mein agaya tha in 3 IDIOTS...plss update soon...gettin impatient...

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Pavithra

@alicepuppy

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#798

Amazing update...Really gonna hate choco for interrupting.

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MeLuvsMiam

@MeLuvsMiam

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#799

Hey dear i just now read your this FF in one go i just loved it very much😃
I would love to read your works more so i'm sending u buddy request plz accept it.

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leena

@aleena.1884

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#800

o teriii.😲
u again updated this one.😆
koi baat nai. this was surely a longer update than last one.n even better.😳
cuz at the end of the day i always prefer arnav over choco.😳
n again a missed kiss.poor frustrated ASR.😆
god a lusty sex deprived maniac boss.🤣
n tweety is surely cutest cartoon character eva.😃
go on ASR. im sure 10-15 tries ke baad u'll succeed in ur MISSION.😉

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