#2:Arhi FF-WMB,Chp 8-11(#3 link,pg 145)

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ipktouch

@ipktouch

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#711

loved tis wait..cant wait for the next..ya ofcourse arhified update wud b gud than chocofied..hehe

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#712

Haha! This is too much! Choco barking and growling at him in his office! Haha! I wonder if these two will ever become friends! Hilarious! All the scenes with ASR and Choco. (Especially, in her bedroom, asking Choco for permission to cover her!! Hahahahaha!)

I'm just loving this FF of yours.

It's pretty obvious now, that ASR is smitten with her. I hope it's not just sexual though. Of course, he can convince himself of that, though, eh? I am just waiting for the day when he loses complete control. I would love to see a jealous ASR. Not that I want him to hurt her due to that, though.

If you are asking what should you write next, I would love to read more abut Making you Mine. Seems that Kushi is in for big time hurt in that. Ouch! Of course, I would also rather you continue with WMB!!

Thank-you for all the good reads.

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divya

@diyadivya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#713

hilarious

asr foul mood til d tym khushi entrd hs cabn n dn evrydng js vanishd

he was ckng hr out

d bollywood style rabba ve ❤️ ❤️❤️❤️❤️

choco entry 🤣🤣🤣🤣

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#714

Wait a minute please

Let me breathe

Ok now

IT WAS AWESOME 😃

My God I laughed or what 🤣

Though I liked Choco's love story but I just LOVED this one. Poor Mr. Raizada again missed the chance of kissing the Angel tweety Khushi 😳 Please please please update WMB soon. Thanks for the pm :)

Edited by risat - 12 years ago