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SORRY FOR ANY INCONVENIENCE.-KARMACHAMELEON.

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RES
thankyouverymuch.


Screen Shot 2013 03 14 at 7 14 29 PM

*Unres*

Karma Cham,

You ended this update talking about the "circle of updates". For me, this circle is "you update, I get the first res. Then I unres and then you update again."
You know, for me, this forum is nothing without this circle and nothing without the presence of karmachameleon.
Do you have ANY idea how much I missed you on this forum? How I missed your stories... How I missed getting the first 'res'... How I missed 'unressing' (even though I always used to take my own sweet time for that :P)... Exchanging PMs with you, chatting with you on the KCs ACs thread, making graphics, memes, VMs, and banners for you, and most of all - annoying you, I missed it all Cham! I really did.
Before I go ahead and tell you something about Chapter 36, let me take this opportunity to welcome you back on this forum! YOU WERE SORELY MISSED.
I have been very eager to unres, you already know how much I loved chapter 36 thanks to what I did immediately after reading it. However, I'm actually terrified to write this comment; there's no way I'm going to do this chapter justice.
The wait for this chapter had been excruciating, but it was absolutely worth it. I've read this intensely entertaining and emotionally driven chapter quite a few times already, Cham. It drew me in and just wasn't letting me go.
I could relate to each line in the chapter, it was like you (the author in you, rather) were looking into my mind seeing what would resonate with me. Absolutely brilliant work! Reading this chapter took me into a journey into ASR's heart & mind and that was only possible because of how beautifully you've portrayed it. Everything you've written about, right from what is going on in ASR's mind to what actions he took, is so real and relatable. I will never understand HOW you have this exceptional understanding of human emotions and behavior - it's unmatchable!
Gloomy and specially Tsunami are such flawed and 'human' characters and yet they are so likable - only YOU can manage to do something like this. Fate-Mate has real life issues that are relatable and yet it is a story like no other. No one has and no one will - be able to write the way you do. You're gifted, without a doubt.
Girgit, your visual writing style made the experiences of reading the chapter engrossing, enjoyable and vivid - I could actually SEE everything happening in front of me!
I am actually a little angry with you for not forcing me to read Fate-Mate sooner LOL. I was missing out on SO much. There was a time when I refused to read fate-mate and now I actually look forward to reading more and more. I am finding it hard to express with mere words just how much I adore this story.
Thank you for writing this incredible story, karma.
I am completely awestruck by your writing. ALL. OVER. AGAIN.
Edited by ananya123 - 12 years ago
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Am i dreaming...update is cuming...pinch me hard

edited...mindblowing...now i want dargaah scene
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A fabulous n long update its needed finally the wait has cme to a halt wow dear...Khushi she wont talk but xpect him to talk wen he was talking she wasnt responding i hope dis ends very soon n she finds out dat he is Arnav Singh Raizada...update it soon
Edited by laadgrnr_jalebi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First of all welcome back KC and thank you for the update... I can't believe I'm reading Fate-Mate after so long... I missed Gloomy and Tsunami so much, specially where the last update ended Khushi finding out about her boss... Her reaction is totally justifiable and so is ASR's desperation... Loved his attempt to explain her everything including his feelings for Khushi... And the last part was awesome, him calling her as Khushi instead of Gloomy... Hope she come back soon, waiting to know about Khushi's feelings this time...
Loved all the parts, it is getting interesting day by day...
Edited by blue_jay - 12 years ago
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*THUD* Fainted...A to P...🥳

Meenu - thanks for ur😲 hand drawn welcome picture... :)
Thank You...

🤗 Muah


--Edited--

I ain't certain which way to go…But I got to move, sure
Feelin' blue, blue, blue, blue, blue Feelin' blue, blue, blue, blue, blue Feelin' blue, blue, blue, blue, blue I'm feelin' blue, I'm feelin' blue

Sush(SSNAIR) really apt banner 👏 👏 👏

Aaah I miss this feeling...reading new updates of your stories…gluing to screen 😃

This update was just like IASW300R "She is not your daughter!" chapter...Chapter number 28 where she was about to tell the truth...I was scared as well as curious to know the truth and reaction...Too many emotions at one time fear, betrayal, hurt, guilt, regret, heartbroken...And the best part of this update is I can also feel it...
When you read it from ASR's point of view you will get to know how he must be feeling and same goes for Khushi...Kudos to you to bring these emotions in your readers...take a bow...

How much shocked Khushi was when her mind gathers that her Tsunami is HOT BOSS...The guilt on ASR's face for not telling her before...the way you expressed it was applauding...That two feet distance seems as they are millions kms away from each other….may be not between their body but between their hearts...

You become maniac when you lose most precious thing of yours...that's what ASR feel…Searching her everywhere…ASR didn't even realise that those messages we're old in his hastiness...
WHY??? WHY??? WHY??? Did you forget your phone...Dhakaan...

Why didn't he visit the DARGAH...She must have gone there…to find Solace…
How much he longed for her blabbering that even the sound of her bangle soothes his ears...
The way she got shocked to find him there...not expecting him at this time...the pain he feel when he observe her hesitation...

How much she changed him...ASR the one who prefer solitude over everything is now longing to hear her constant chatter...laugh...How much desperate he was to not let her go…that he even said NO to her demand for the first time...

Why is this driver poking his nose in between there talk...Huh...Go Away...
Just one moment changes everything…now everything about ASR seems different to Khushi...His way of talking...behaviour...But she didn't know that it was because he didn't want to leave her...

YOU ARE NOT GOING ANYWHERE UNTIL I SAY SO! This dialogue is ringing in my mind since 4th of JAN…Loud And Clear…Exactly…ekdum loud and clear…

Khushi: Where are we? ASR: I don't know. This one is an EPIC dialogue...

Awww how he held her face in his palms...
Why did you lie to me...he should say this...I'm Quoting BARUN here..."I didn't lie, I just hide some FACTS"

ASR: Is that what you think of me? Khushi: This is not about you. This is what you think about me. ASR: If it's about you then you have NO idea what I think about you...Toh bata do naah...jaldi I'm waiting...
Love it how he confesses...She is different...

Pushing and pinning...Khushi welcome to the world of ASR...He is just the best in pinning :P

How was it possible that she felt worse hearing 'Khushi' than finding out he was her boss...
Jab apney duur jaltey hain toh dukh hota hai…par jab apney duriyaan badha dete hain toh aur bhi dukh hota...
(K3G...Srk movie but dialogue Amitji ka tha...Sorry hope it didn't spoil your mood...lol)

ASR: You can go to class tomorrow, I won't come. I don't want you to miss your classes because of me. Not tomorrow, not any other time.
I simply Love him yaar...Selfless friend...

Being alone was so much better than being so close to someone...
And then going through that constant fear of losing that person...
That's why they say...
Never hurt people who love you a lot, because they won't hurt you back...
But they'll probably have no choice to leave you forever...
This update doesn't have too many dialogues but it conveys too much...FEELINGS...
How you feel when your friend lie to you and how you want to mend your fault...

At last I unreserved it...And by now I lose count of how many times I read it...Just curious to know what's going on Khushi's mind now...Waiting for next update...

Edited by rocking meenu - 12 years ago

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