taarey ff: pyaar hote hote hogaya updated chap 3

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shriya

@shriya_taarey

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

liked it?????
u kidding me!!!!
...

I LOVED IT!!!!!!!...
awesome one yaar!!!
really loved every bit of it
haan par kuch kehena chahati hu
pls dont mind sry to say bt rey ko thoda ...
thoda achha dikhao pls plz
actually cnt c hm like ds...pls...
update soon...
n do pm me
sry once again

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Whomst

@Angel-luvs-s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: shriya_taarey
liked it?????
u kidding me!!!!
...

I LOVED IT!!!!!!!...
awesome one yaar!!!
really loved every bit of it
haan par kuch kehena chahati hu
pls dont mind sry to say bt rey ko thoda ...
thoda achha dikhao pls plz
actually cnt c hm like ds...pls...
update soon...
n do pm me
sry once again

bo problem... it is just that i have to show the contrast in his character before and after taani comes in his life. just one more update and you will see the difference

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ssruthi

@ssruthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

hmmm

first intro...

i likd d way taani was

sweet nd simple

nd rey izz rey...

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Tahira-2013

@Tahira-2013

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

wow loved the first chapter very much.
taani is sooo cute and rey dam hot
but poor rey he is crying i really want to know what alisha did with him
i found taani's parents very sweet

cant wait for the precape plzzz update soon

brilliant job dear

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dh19

@dh19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

loved this part.
both taani and rey are bit different.
looking forward to see more.
thanks for the pm and do cont. soon.

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Sharina

@shamanbk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Wow awesome, please update soon!!!!!!

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kady_taarey

@kady_taarey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

omg just read character sketch n chapter 1... n trust me this rey is too hot to handle.. lol.. n u knw wat "dude... Get ready to go to jail because you are a killer." this dialogue was hilarious I read it more than 3 times.. lol.. I knw i'm mad.. :-D update soon n pm me also dear.. :-)