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Posted: 12 years ago
This was so far your best update in this one😉Loved each and every scene and I felt as if Iam watching all this :O :| Why armaan leaving Iam not liking this :( and hope you get them married sooon I mean it haan?😡I love armaan's character here wish mereko bhi aisa husband mil jaye kabhi🤔but cant expect this from my UNI ahghg
-Laddoo😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: teenorchid

Ahm ahm. * loook who's here*

hehe anywayss just loved the part... It ws beyond my expectations really. I just loved how u wroteee ittt...
It ws just out of ths world...

The class scene was awesome. Armaan sir tou chaa gaye. Shilpa ko taunts shaunts... Hehe. Aur shilpa ka ghusaaa.. Aye hayeee.
He is a pro at handling things...

Wow he authoratively took her fr lunch.. I just loved him there... Meko b armaaan jaisa chahye... Unki bickering ws funny...

Glad they talked nd shilpa got relaxed now... Late night cake. Wowww

Nani ki jai ho...
Armaaan ki class li unho ne

Vday party.. Finally. My wish come true...
By t u wrote it fabulously. Simply adorable. Red se chirrr hai jee. Roflss. Glad muski ruined her dress nd she wore black.
Nd she ws waiting for him. Oyee hoyeee...

Possessive armaan wow. Himat tou check kro us larke kiii...

Armaaan sir dancing raataa mar. Wow awesome sam. Kya idea tha. It ws a total stress buster... For the students. Brilliant idea...

And poor shilpa crying for him ws an aww moment... Nd their last moment before parting ws adoarableee...
I sooo loved ittt...

...

to be cont comment. The last scene was adorableee. Their first hug...
Like seriously?? Glad they took some step ahead. Shilpuu my baby crying and hiding it from armaaan.

Mjhe b kitkat chahyeee... shilpa k pass poora packet haiii...

Loved how armaan made her smile. I so want to read more sammm...
Dil bhara nahi abiii...

Akdhu jee ne i miss u kaha. Unbelievableee... Mindblowing...

Finally they departed...
:(
abhi na jaoo chor k, dil abi bhara nahiii...

Piya jee tou take caress kr k urrr gaye shilpa jee khayalon me khoyi hai. I am soo looking forward to how to take ths long distance relation forward.



Exactly!!! I am looking with widen eyes who is here??😲😲😲
Thank you thank you!!! Lekin meine yeh bilkul spontaneously likha hai!!😆
Actually class scenes aur taunts aur yeh sab meri khud ki class mein chal raha hota hai... so apni class mein hone wali thodi bohat tafreeh ka trailer mein yahan bhi aksar paish kar deti hun!!!😉
Aur phir gussa to naturally ata hai uss mein bunda nahi sochta ke saamne walay ko kesa lagay gaa... wo sochta hai humay kesa lag raha hai aur phir to app ko pata hai kya hota hai saamne walay ke saath!!😆

Tumko Armaan jesa chahiye??? tum dhoondne niklo... mil jaye to Anu(Ladoo) ko bhi bata dena!!😆

Late Night cake while exam preparation ki jahan tak baat hai to yeh mein khud ek dafa kar chuki hun!! so meine socha... yahan bhi add kar dun!!😉

Valentinesday ko to le kar he tumhari wish ki wajah se i thi... warna kya kaam tha yahan valentines day kaa??? You said universities mein to bohat high celebrations ke saath banate hain valentines day aur tab meine kaha tha isska jawab part ke through dungi... So here it was... mil gaya jawab??? He just hates it!!!😆

Red se chirr ka...🤔 Agay kabhi kisi part mein aur description laoongi!!😆

Wait!!! possessiveness!!! Ab nahi ayega to kab ayega??? 😃 Dance to phirrr... awesome scene hona he tha... i just loved that song even it turned out to be a motivational one for me aswell so i thought why not to add it??? Aur phir kahin bhi chale jao... when u have a favorite plus if he is famous in all over the campus... his words do matter and if on any occasion you find him/her presenting something or performing something... wo jo feeling hoti haina??? that hooting, clap everything wo meine yahan par thoda sa dikhane ki koshish ki.. Wo students ko kaafi excite kar deti hai!! Aur motivation alag ata hai!!😊

Even i felt the same about the last scene... pata nahi kese but i just wrote it in a flow... warna wo scene kahin ass paas bhi nahi tha mere dimagh mein...
Anddd... its a second hug yaar... first one was when she cried after samrat's proposal dare...

Dill to bacha hai jee... nahi bharta...
Tumhe parhte hue maza ata hoga lekin likhne mein meri halat kharab hojati hai!

And... LONG DISTANCE RELATIONSHIP!!! Bus dekhti jao😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rads73937

It was cute, awesome, mindblowing part.
Dnt end plz.
Thanx for the pm. Take care



Originally posted by: Iqbal_009

nice partdear plzzz cont... soon



Originally posted by: sanjana24

wow fabulous.

Awesome valentines day.
update soon.



Glad u all like it!!
Thank you so much guys for all your comments!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Mannat.

Wow wow wow :D I loved the part :D
such true and honest confessions
specially to der own hearts :)
the way they speak wid each other sometyms showing der ryts n sometyms merely as strangers ...
and now this miss u thing :p lol
but that red-hatered was kinda bit cheesy :s
dunno y but i hv seen mny sch ppl n i thnk its all is a stunt to stand apart saying IDC.
Anyways whatever it was n i wish she wud have worn a white dress may b :s
But overall i loved it :*
Thanks for the PM n Cont. asap



Originally posted by: .Mannat.

n if u ll say this is the END then u better not dare do this :p
U know how good this stuff is :D so DO NOT EVER play such pranks :p
God this guy is leaving for 2 years :(
i wish jaldi se shadi ho jaye yipppiieee :)



Hahahahaha!! glad u understood their rightful and strangers talks...😆
Yaar red hatred ki poori story ayegi... and it was specially for valentines day aurr usse kya chichora lagta hai i have already mentioned in the part so... agay ki kahani baad mein😉


Yeah!! white can also be a good choice... but... khair ab to part gaya!!
i am ending this aurr... un 2 years mein kya kya hota hai???? wait and watch!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: moonlight2630

Hey beautiful update u write brilliantly express every feeling n emotions nicely .
Plz don't end it love this FF.
Thanks for pm
Update soon.



Originally posted by: blessed4

Amazing par. But why are you ending it here

Abhi to love story shuru hui hai. Please do write more



Originally posted by: kiran_rati

awesome dear

thanx for the pm



Originally posted by: its-bk

Amazing Update buddy!

Continue soon, don't end this SS so soon.
Thanks fir the PM.





Thank you so much guys!!!
Glad u all liked the part!!
And... End nahi tha yeh😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sasya

Ur ff is one of the best I have come across!!! I just love it and it's as if I am seeing the love story happening infornt of my eyes. The emotion and the way u write it makes it so real. I just love reading this ff. please do continue soon .cant wait to read what will happen now that he left .cant wait to see them together . Will miss their silly fights.



Thank you!! i am glad u like almost everything about this ff!!!😊
Till now if you have felt entertained i am sure you will get more in future!!
Ab wo gaya hai to dekho kya kya hota hai!!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dhruvikaluvsKSG

DIDIII

YIKESS amazing parttt
hayyyeee sirf uske liye valentines day party par aaya :$:$:$
aur miss u n hug n above all usko uss ladke se dance karne se bachana
hayyeee dreamyyy mode on ho gaya tha meraaa
i was smiling all throughout the part even the endinggg
aaapkaaa 10000000...00000000000 timesss thank u update karne ke liye aur itna beautiful part likhne ke liye ;)
THANK U
for the part n pm :D:D <3<3
love dhruviii



Thank you!!😃
Jee bilkul uske liye aya lekin wo pure valentines party nahi thi... 5 year reunion bhi tha!!
Ab bacahana to tha hee... propose scene ke baad ek acha khasa lecture jo sunne ko mila tha😆 Ab ek he cheez baar baar thodi hogi😉

I am so so glad you liked it!!
Thanks for the comment!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -KaShti-

The dialogs n the way you present it all...ABSOLUTELY LOVE THE STORY AND YOUR WAY OF PRESENTING IT!
And the language and interaction between the characters in the story...LOVE LOVE LOVE
...

As much as I am interested n eager when I sneak in internet to read ur story... My apologies are here for rarely commenting here...
But girll...this time I had this chance to comment n here I am! :D


I am so in love with this Armaan's character in the story!



Have many things to praise about...
But the bottom line is... You're Unique and Fab!!!

Good going!!! :D



Will be waiting for ur next Part
...as...YOU HAVE YET NOT WRITTEN THE "THE END" YET!!!! :$
and u canNOT...until u finish it completly! :D
haha...This update was cool...good one! ArSh knew they have THE FEELING for each other... :$

I so always #FEELGOOD reading here! :D <3


Cheers,

-Sri... :)



Pehle to... where were u all these day???

khair... deir aye... durust aye!! just loved your comment!!😳
Exactly i have not written THE END yet!! and i surely can not.. boaht kuch para hai iss mein abhi agay!!

I am happy you liked it that much ke tumne comment kiya😃👏

Hope to see u in future too!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: charmingkiller

awesummm

i dnt hav words to descxribe how wonderfulll it wasss..
each scene each character n each dailogueee to the perfection
it couldnt be better than this
mind blowinggg
loved each worddd
i fall in love wid the last part
from parkinglot till endinggg...man it was amazinggg
n helllo this cnt b the end ...no wayyy
this story has sooo more ...
ideas kaam per jaye mjhse leeelana :P
but dnt end it plzzz



Thank you!!!😃 You i this has happened first time and i am happy reading each and every comment... matlab mujhe bhi maza araha hai response dekh ke...😆
Exactly this can not be the end... so don't worry aur ideas ki kammi nahi hai... zyaati hogai hai mere pass!!😆
Glad u liked it!! and what to say almost everyone is saying that they fell for the last scene and i am super happy i made that happen!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahi--

Super awesome update.!
just loved each and every scene!
This is my favourite part of this SS <3 !
And siggy is so lovely <3 !
Liked the way how Armaan was taunting Shilpa for her carelessness towards her health..He cares for her :-D
And the way Armaan handle that dadi's issue was nice..He is such a calm kind of guy..hard to find a guy like him lol :-P Shilpa is really lucky !
thanks to muskaan shilpa didnt wear red :-P
Thank God Armaan came to the party..
Song and Dance was also gud..a new side to Armaan <3 !
Ending was best.! Their hug <3 and text of shilpa saying will miss you was lyk cherry on the cake !<3
U can't think of ending it like that? lol
Waiting for next update :-P
Wanna see how they will stay away from each other than thr engagement :-P




And i am super happy to see your comment!!!😃
Aisa kya hogaya bhae??? har ek ka favorite part hai yeh... kyun???😕
Yes he cares for her.. jis bhi halat mein hogi... ussi ke khate mein jayegi ab to... so he should care😆
Hahahahaha Muskaan ko thanks!!
yes i can't think of ending and dekho agay kya hota hai??? distance, engagement!! whatever...😉

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