Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 1)

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ayaazukideewani

@ayaazukideewani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#461

very nice dear
live the start
waiting...

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#462

mind blowing first chapter! really loving the start!

so khushi is the foster daughter and is getting married today to another guy!!! lol im a bit confused here but i know in the coming updates my confusion will be clear!

this ff sounds very interesting!

loved the way buaji wanted to feed arnav as he has been away for quite some time!

looking forward to the next part:)

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angelrosey

@angelrosey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#463

woww!!!
waiting for both arnav and khushi to meet!!
khushi wont get married right???...because shes arnav's !!!!!

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Leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#464

Sorry I am late!! had to attend my cousin's wedding!

So what have we got here?

Oh my!! whats this all abt now?

Arnav Singh Raizada has come to attend Khushi's wedding? uh ouh!! did i read that right?

well now the prologue makes sense! 2nd chance and all that!!

hmm so? i am more excited abt the next chap!! where Arnav gets to see Khushi!! :)

Good start already sweets!!

Girl you surely know how to get your readers hooked... dont ya? :)

Thanks for the update and the PM hun!

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anushja

@anushja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#465

thanku for writing another story...

so khushi is arnav's parents foster daughter...

what gonna happen next...

its entirely a new and refreshing concept ano...

loved it...

continue soon

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mamidis

@mamidis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#466

Well written update. Great start.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#467

Wow that was a brilliant and fantastic start, so Arnav is returning after 11 years and thinks that khushi was fostered by his dad to replace him. It was so funny the way Arnav pronounced hari prakashs name as Harryprush that was hilarious. So khushi is getting married, I'm guessing there is problem with her wedding or the baraat have not turned up. Please continue soon. Can't wait to see Arnav meeting khushi. An exceptionally well written update and thanks for the PM xx

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Chinnu

@Phoenix_413

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Posted: 12 years ago

#468

Hey MKM II...another FF i'd been waiting for !!!

Hey Hurrypaash was good .. So Arnav came from New York just for a girl who took his place in the family...he really didn't like her..she's his father's foster daughter...so what about her parents if his dad was the foster father ? Well so many questions brewing in my mind and A brilliant update...but I still remember your words saying that we need to give the characters time to sink in...so let a few more parts go in...

Waiting patiently for the next update...

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Dodo_jinu

@Dodo_jinu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#469

Nice update! Finally its here! 😊

HURRYPAASH was funny 🤣

very nicely written! I'm sorry i read it so late! But really very nice dialogues! 😊 thanks for PM! 😊