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Ek aur naya work?
I have lost the count of your works.
Kya karti ho tum aro?
Exams mein tum isike baare mei sochti hogi na?
Coming to the story, it is evident that it is going to be a bit like rehabilitating story.
Y'know it will teach you to live the life.
The name is perfect,
Kriya is a rebel who doesn't care for the world.
This is because she hasn't been cares.
I am looking forward to this story as it is a very serious topic in today's world.
Hundreds of students and teens like Kriya commit suicide due to this.
It is a sensible story and is pre-planned, not like y'know Ekta Kapoor's serial, jo chalti hi rahe.
Your writing has improved a lot.
A few tips, if you don't mind...
You add continuity too much to a statement. Like: Hi... How are you... I am fine... wannna come ive got a new game and mom has made cookies too and theres a pool near bye...
Understand?
It makes difficult for a reader to understand the statement and he/she has to reread it.
Grammatical mistakes are forgiven, but just take care of the things I told you.
And one thing, it is good you're not using that script-like-idea for the speeches. Like: First You used, 'K: How re you?' Now you use '"How're you?" asked Kriya.
This looks better.
I'm telling you this as you're a friend. Hope you don't mind.
Best,
Kesha
Edited by Kesha1234 - 12 years ago
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