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Kanchi..

@Kanchi..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Awesome update...

interesting concept nd different...

luvd it...

y kriya so agrresive...???

de corridor scene was mast whr sharon broke kriya's cell nd kriya broke sharon's cell...

nd swayam taking kriya's side...

nd who was dat girl who gave kriya de cell nd also cared 4 her...??

update soon ...want 2 read more...

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sanjana shekhawat

@ky2fanfictions

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

awesum update ..
loved it
kriya .. new avatar ...
intresting 😊
n swayam supporting her 😊

sharon ...
bechari yaar...😆

update soon
thnxx 4 the pm

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

AWESOME

LOVED IT

super interesting story

n swayam already knows kria

n who's dis didu??

update soon :)

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spicyrays

@spicyrays

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

loved it... way diffrnt concept lykd it... pm me wen updte next...

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

thank u guys for liking my work

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love u all
AROMA_RUBHARU😉

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

hey guys , i am really very happy after reading your comments . its means alot to me . after reading your comments i got to know that you all are little bit confused , because of kriya's behaviour , but you will understand as story proceed future . there are so many twist and turn in story according to requirement of story . i hope you all understand . there are so many situations which make you confused . but this all because of story plot .

from now i will send message to those whom like my work and comment thanku.
thank u guys for your love

writing is my passion

so m really very happy that u all r loving my works

thank u once again

aroma_rubharu

Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

banner credit goes to my dear maria
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chappy : 2
"kriya , you are not going to drive "..kriya's didu protested ..kriya already occupied her seat at driver side .."sorry to say did , i am going " ..kriya exclaimed .."no , i am telling you kriya , stop behaving like stubborn kid " kriya's didu again shoot back .."mr malhotra you here " kriya shout and looked toward main gate ...kriya's didu turned toward main gate but no one was there ..and she realised that kriya was lying...but until now kriya drove away "by didu see you after one week , have a great journey "...kriya shouted from car..."kriya ' please stop behaving like this .." her didu said slowly it's like whisper...
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at the very first minute , kriya stepped out from car..people started gossiping about her character ...kriya brush it aside and walked future ... but student looking at her like she is a criminal ...but kriya don't care about this all ...she directly walked in her class and occupied her seat..but i think . today students had not other work because...they also talking about kriya ... kriya switch her i phone and...start waiting when class gonna be start ..."hey , you what is your name , miss attitude " one boy asked kriya while occupying seat in front of her...but kriya didn't reply...boy snatch kriya's iphone "i am talking to you '. ..that boy try to hold kriya's hand ...whole class started looking at both of them ...kriya got up from her seat and very next moment that boy was on floor ...boy clean his blood...and looked at kriya in complete shock ...and feared also ..."don't mess with me "...kriya again punched that guy and snatched her iphone ...student in class gulp hard ..."miss kriya enough ' teacher shouted as she saw terrify scene infront of her ...but kriya walked out from class without any responce

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"miss kriya it is enough" principal shouted at top of his voice ..."why you did this , do you have any answer '...principal again questioned kriya but kriya still looking at a painting that hanging at the wall ..."kriya , principal sir asking you something "teacher shook kriya from shoulder...but kriya she still standing there without any expression ...she was completely engrossed in looking at that picture hanging at office wall...soon GS , CS of college entered in principal office.."you'...sharon exclaimed when she notice kriya ...""yes she is miss kriya , new admission ...and a stubborn girl " principal replied back ... "i know sir , last day she almost tried to hit me with her car "...sharon answered back and looked toward kriya but there is no expression of fear or tension on her face ..."kriya why are you doing this "...teacher again try to talk with kriya ..."now i think , i have to take some strict action ' principal said and relaxed him self ..."kriya you are suspended for one week " ...principal speaks finally..."but sir , i think one week " cut by principal .."no , one week that's final ..."...principal replied back and looked toward kriya for any reply ... rey tried to look at kriya's face as her back facing him ..."sir , why you placed this stupid picture here " finally kriya broke silence ...all looked toward kriya in disbelieve ..."what" principal and teacher quetion together .."no , i mean this is such a stupid picture . i ever saw in my life a happy family huh fully crape " kriya again replied with straight face ..."well ,see you after one week ' kriya speak and walked out from office ...unfortunately , rey enabled because he couldn't see kriya's face ..."there is some thing , which we don't know " principal said worriedly ..."yes , you are right " teacher agreed with principal ..."yes reyaansh and sharon we have some new upcoming events "...principal start discussing about some events but rey he was still thinking about kriya "i think there is something wrong in her life "...rey think in his mind ..
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rey walking on sea side ,when he notice one girl sitting in front of her car ...rey took a glimpse at his watch ...then he looked around and found nobody there..."i think she is all alone ' he muttered him self ..and walked toward that girl ...rey seated , on his knees in front of her and tried to looked her face but her face covered with hair..rey noticed that there is so many beer bottles ..."are you okay"...rey question her but no reply ..."hello'...rey again asked ...at last rey cleared her face and he was about to pick her up when she push him back .."don't you dare'..she shouted at him in her drunk state ..."i will manage ' she again speak ..."i was just worried its to late'..rey again try to explain ..."who said its late. its only 12.30' she again said and balanced her self with her car...she was walking toward driving side and she lost her balance ...rey caught her ..."you are not okay ..where is your friend and family"...rey question her and make her sit on car bonnet ... "do you know the meaning of friends and family ' girl questioned rey .."what do you mean by this ' ...rey again asked her ..."nothing , forget it " thier was dead silence ..."why are you helping me '...she asked one another question and start drinking one another beer ..."because its my responsibility " rey answered back and snatched beer can from her ..."give it me"'...girl protested ..."no , you already finished five beer can' rey also protested ..."why are you doing this '...she again asked rey and held her head on his shoulder as he also placed himself on car bonnet..."why are you doing this ?"...rey said in soft tone ... "because , they made me like this "she answered back a lone tear escaped from her eyes ...rey felt moist on his neck ..."who"...rey questioned ...because of darkness , rey still unable to watch his face..."they" she said slowly ..."i am asking who' rey asked again make her comfortable sit and held his head on car mirror ..."you know i am alone , there is no one who care about me "...she choked but she manage to reply ... "you are first one who talking to me " she replied ...rey felt very bad ... he hugged her side ware ...he felt attached with her ..."hey . don't cry i am here '...rey tried to console her .."i know , but then you also going to leave me like everyone " she said like a child ..."no , i am not going anywhere"...rey creased her hair ..."promise"...she showed him her hand rey placed his hand on her hand "i promise .."...rey replied ..."now tell me why are you all alone "..rey questioned but there is no reply ...rey looked toward her and found her sleeping ...rey placed a warm kiss on her tempel .."you know you are a angel " and rey smiled ... picked her up and placed her in car ...then rey checked he belonging and found her address ...rey proceed toward her house

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okay guys here is chappy 2
sorry for typing error
likes and comment please
keep reading
luv u all
pm later
AROMA_RUBHARU

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Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago

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@Black_Stone

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

res..

unres

maine toh updte sabse pehkle padh liya tha and first comment wohooo...

ohk cumin to the point...

itna chotu sa update, though i know the reason why still mennu bolna tha...

next tym bada wala dene ki try karna ok

jaise mai kehti hu, tu toh bahut acha likhti 👏

amazing was amazing...

loved the way u potryed every emotions.

Kriya is soo stuuborn yaar...sunti hi nai hai, chill mai vi asie hi hu 😛

Kriya ne uss ladke ko kya dhoya yaar 👏 dum hai boss...

ab dekhe toh zara kaun panga le usse?

Yeh princi k paas Kriya ko daante ke alava aur koi kaam ni hota hai kya? jab dekho Kriya u're so stubborn and blah blah blah...huh...kriya pak gyi hogi roz uski dan sunke 😆

Kriya suspended for a week, yeh princi vi na ek taraf se acha Kriya ki ek hafte k liye usse sunna nai padega 😆

ohh Kriya continuosly starring at the happy family wali pic, i totally understand wat is she going through..😒

Rey ne abhi Kriya ko dekha nai hai rite?

phir bhi kitna concerned hai uske baare mei, hw sweet of him...😳

Raat 12:30 bje at the beach, Kriya drinking, aww Rey to the rescue

hw sweet of him, he came to help her 😊

I just feel like killin them, how culd they do this to her, i mean koi aisa karta hai kya kabhi?? 😡

Ahh..finally they r friends..hope they stay one till morning also

Rey sahi kaha Kriya is an angel 🤗

all in loved it...

next update soon

-Cookie